FF Ek anjanasa Rishta : ch 37/pg 65

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Hi all, im startin my new FF Ek Anjanasa Rishta. The story is bit differentn i thought that i shud also write my own FF btw plsssssssss read it n comment on it. n pls bear with me regardin few spellin mistakes i'll try nt to do it.

Warnin: first few parts r bit out of the story i mean JB r in the story bt nt like lovers bt after few parts the stoey turns into different mode n u'll get to see JB like lovers so stay tuned n find out wat happens......?

Introduction:

Uday Walia: 62 years old. He has 2 sons n 1 daughter. He loves his family the most.

Krishna Walia: 56 years old Uday Walia's wife. She loves her husband n her children the

most.

Ranveer Walia: 26 years old eldest son of Uday Walia & Krishna Walia. He is famous, rich & handsome business tycoon as well. He loves his family &he can do anything 4 them. He doesn't believe in love however he fell in love with some1 n marries her. His wife n his younger brother Jai r the 2 most important person who he loves the most in the world.

Jai Walia: 25 years old younger son of Uday Walia n Krishna Walia. He is famous, rich n handsome business tycoon in business world n youngsters. He is vry close to his older sis Jigyasa n shares everythin with her n loves his brother n his bhabhi the most. He n his bhabhi shares friendship relation tn devar-bhabhi relation. He believes in love.

Jigyasa Bali (positive): 40 years old eldest daughter of Krishna n Uday Walia. She loves her husband Aditya n her family vry much. She is close 2 his younger brother Jai. She has one son Sahil.

Aditya Bali: 46 years old. He loves his wife n son vry much. He live in Walia Mansion with his family n does business with Walia.

Sahil Bali: 22 years old. Loves his parents vry much. He believes in love & in love with Rano.

Nishikant Dixit: 60 years old. He has 2 daughters n loves them n his wife vry much.

Kiran Dixit: 54 years old. She is the mother of 2 beautiful daughters Bani n Rano. She love her family vry much.

Bani Dixit: 22 years old daughter of Nishikant & Kiran Dixit. She believes in LOVE. She loves her parents n sis vry much n can do anything 4 them.

Rano Dixit: 20 years old. She loves her sis vry much.

Note: other characters will include in the story. Pls read it n comment it n I hope u didn't fell asleep just reading intro.

Ch:1

In Walia Mansion, lady is comin downstairs wearin red sari givin orders to servants to prepare breakfast. She is Krishna Walia the mistress of the house. She is helpin servants to prepare breakfast. One of the servant of the house TONY come to Krishna & tells her that evry1 is gettin ready except 4 one person. On hearin this Krishna smiles & tells him dnt wry shes goin to wake him up. Now shes goin upstairs to that person's room, on reachin there she opens the door & goes inside. She goes straight to the windows & opens the kertain, the sun rays comes in the room & flashes on his face. Now he stirs on his sleep & Krishna smiles again & tells him to wake up & get ready its 9 o'clock. Now we can see that person is none other tn Jai Walia!!!!!😳😉 He tells his mom that pls giv him 5mins😆 & hes comin downstairs in 20mins😆😉. Krishna get out of his room & goes downstairs 4 the breakfast.

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Evey1 is at the breakfast table except 4 Jai. Uday asks Krishna abt his son Jai. He asks her Wr is Jai? Is he still sleepin? At that movement we can see Jai is comin downsatirs wearin black suit😉 lookin all handsome & tells his father hes here & sry 4 comin late as he overslept again😆 On hearin this Ranveer smiles & mutters evryday is same. After the breakfast Uday, Ranveer, Jai & Aditya r leavin 4 the office & suddenly Krishan turns & tells Uday that 2nite they need 2 come early as Nishikant & his family r comin 4 dinner.

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They all reach the office & gettin busy in their wrk. At home Krishna & Jigyasa r makin preparation 4 dinner. Durin their preparation Jigs tells her mother that now its time 4 Ranveer to get married. Kiran smiles at her😊 & tells her that YES bt 2 get marry Ranveer has 2 agree 4 this. She also tells Jigs that he doesnt choose any girl wnever hes ask to. Now time passes & its evenin 7.30pm. They all come home & Krishan asks them to freshnup as the guests r comin in 15mins. All go to freshnup n come downstairs after 10mins. All r sittin in livin room & suddenly Krishna tells Uday now its time to get Ranveer married. At the mention of marriage Ranveer gets up & goes in the garden tellin them that he doesnt wanna get merried now.

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In the garden, Ranveer goes into the corner n stares in the dark. After few mins Nishikant & his family arrives & he parks the car inside the WM & all start to go inside the house. Half way through the walk Bani realises that she forgot the gift which is 4 Uday uncle & Krishna aunty in the car. So she tells her parents & her sister to go inside & she'll go n get the gift frm the car. All three go inside the WM & bani goes to get the gift frm the car. Inside the WM, all welcome Nishikant, Kiran & Rano & ask 4 Bani & Nishikant tells him shes comin in a while.

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Outside Bani got the gift & goin inside the WM.On the other hand Ranveer who was standin in the dark, heared some voices & also goin inside the house bt wn hes comin frm the dark he suddenly bumps into some1 & catches her frm fallin. He just stares at the beauty caught in his hand & memerised by her eyes. Shes Bani wearin a beautiful pink😳 salwaar kameez. She has attractive eyes, lucasious lips & bt be4 the train of thoughts runs into his mind hes interuptted by her. Bani tells him to leave her as she needs to go inside. At that movement Ranveer realises that this is the first girl who memerised him by her simple beauty & hes still holdin her.😳 He steadies her & leaves her & she picks up the gift frm the ground & goes inside & Ranveer just stands there watchin her leavin inside.

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As soon as she comes inside, her father introduces her to every1. Jai sees her & thinks shes beautiful. She greets evry1 wn she was greetin Jai, Ranveer come & Uday introduces him to Bani & she tells him that they actually met outside. Bani handshakes Ranveer & tells him tx (4 catchin her frm fallin)😳 bt he wasnt leavin her hand & this notices Krishna, Kiran, Jai & Jigs & they all get shock as Ranveer doesnt intimate with girls much bt this is the first girl that hes still holdin her hand & Bani was gettin uncomfortable & impatient. At last Bani tells him to leave her hand & he realise that hes still holdin her hand & gets embarassed😳.

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Durin the dinner Ranveer was starin at Bani & eatin & doesnt realise that & eats chili bt after 2mins he realised that he ate chili & coughs & feelin vry HOT & starts to drink water. All this while Jai who was sittin besides Bani see this n smiles at Ranveer's antics even Jigs, Kiran & Krishan notices this. however, Bani has no clue abt this as she was bust chattin with Jigs as they bocome vry close in such a short time. She also doesnt knw that others r cookin somethin in their mind & Ranveer also doesnt notices that 4ppl r starin at him as he is busy only watchin Bani.

Ch:2

After dinner Nishikant & his family left & in WM all go to their room. Krishan & Jigs doin last min thind in the kitchen after that Krishan left to go to her room. Wn she entred her room Uday was studyin some files sittin on the bed. She come & sits next to him & tells him that wat does he think abt Ranveer's marriage? Hes still engrossed in the file & tells her that she knws that it doesnt matter as hes nt interested in marriage or any girl. At the mention of the girl Krishna smiles😊 & asks him does he like Bani? & he gets shocked😲 he puts the file away & stares at his wife & asks her wat does she mean? she tells him the incidents which she notices & Ranveer's behaviour 2wards Bani & asks him to speaks to Nishikant abt Ranveer & Bani's marriage. He gets happy at this & phoned Nishikant n talk abt this. Nishikant gets happy & accepts this proposal.

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In Ranveer's room, he was busy thinkin abt Bani & Jai enters in his room & smiles seein his bro day dreamin & goes to him & asks him shes beautiful isnt she? Ranveer is still thinkin abt Bani & doesnt notice that Jai is in his room & askin him this so he just say YES shes vry beautiful. Jai smiles at this seein his bro totaly in LOVE with Bani. He asks him wat does he like abt her? Ranveer tells her eyes, lips, silky long hair, her churiyaan, her payal & Jai gets surprised😲 at this as his bro noticed such a small thing abt her. He finally asks him who is she? He tells Bani & tn he realised that hes nt speakin to his mind bt some1 & he loks besides him & gets shocked😲 seein Jai's smilin face. He asks Jai wat is he doin here? Jai tells him nothin just watchin my bro thinkin abt some1 & listenin to his love story & tn he ran off to Ranveer's room all laughin😆

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Next day in the mornin at breakfast table Uday & Kiran tells Ranveer that they hav found girl 4 him 2 get married. On hearin this Ranveer who was drinkin juice chocked😆 & tells them that he doesnt wanna get married. So his mom tells him its ok if he doesnt wanna marry tn she'll tell Nishikant to get married Bani 2 some1 else.At the mention of Bani's name Ranveer gets up quickly n nearly shouts NOOOOOOOOO😉 & seein him like this evry1 laughs & he gets embarassed😳 & tells them that hes goin to office. So they decide to invite Nishikant & his family to dinner 2day.

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At Dixit's residence Nishikant & Kiran r happy abt this proposal & they decides to tell Bani abt this 2nite durin dinner at WM. In the evenin evry1 gathers at WM & all seems to be more happy tn usual at this Bani wonders wat cud be the reason that they invited us 2 dinner again at the vry next day? bt she brushes off this thought. Be4 dinner, durin their talkin in the livin room Ranveer was starin at Bani who was busy takin with Jigs. Jai who sittin besides Ranveer smilin & watchin all this & sahil n Rano r busy in chattin. Suddnely Uday asks Nishikant that did he talk to Bani abt this? at the mention of her name Bani's attention focuses on her father & Uday uncle. Nishikant tells him he doesnt need 2 asks her as she'll agree to this bt still Uday ask Bani if she has any prob with that? Bani is more confused😕 & wonders wats goin on? seein her confusion Uday asks her if she has any prob in marryin Ranveer?😲

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She gets a shock of her life😲 as she didnt accepted this. Ranveer who was smilin till now see the shock on her face n slightly gets worried. Bani still in a daze sees her parents, uncle, aunty & Ranveer's smilin face & gets up frm there & walks outside in the garden. Seein her gets up gets up & walkin 2wards the door evry1 gets shocked😲😲😲 Kiran gets worried & goes after her wn she walk outside in the garden she sees that Bani is sittin on the swing. Inside WM evry1 gets worried & Uday tells Nishikant that dnt wry if Bani doesnt want this marriage it wont happen. Ranveer thinks that first time in his life he likes some1 bt she doesnt like him OR is she in love with some1 else? many thoughts r wonderin in his mind

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Outside Kiran goes & sits besides her & asks her wat happen? She tells her mom that she believes in LOVE & she isnt in love with Ranveer. Kiran tells her that LOVE can happen even after marriage & she has to do it coz this is her papa's wish & he gav promised to Uday abt this. Bani was watchin her mother helplessly n thinks abt this 4 sometime.

wat will happen? will Bani agree to this marriage? or is she in love with some1 else? or is she in love with Jai or like him? stay tuned to watch wat happens next........................................................ .........?

pls tell me sud i continue this?

tx

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davia389 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
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that was a great start..
well i need to tell u pls reduce uday's and krishna's age.. as it doesnt match jai as thier son.. soo pls reduce thier age iother than that everthing is soo perfect..

i think bani will fall for jia when he willt ry to convince ehr for the weddign with ranveer..

psl contineu soon

davia

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful part pls cont soon..........
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its very interesting..... pls continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey
gr8 start 👏
cont.sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi , Tx 4 all those who read my FF n liked it n tx Davia 4 mentionin me abt age suggestion actually i corrected it be4 bt wn i was goin to post it my parts r just gone😭 so i hav to write 2wice to update this FF .

Note: Uday n Krishna Walia's age is changed so now Uday Walia is 60 years old & Krishna Walia is 54 years old.

Ch:3

Outside Bani is thinkin abt this marriage 4 sometime & thinks that may be her mom is right LOVE can happen even after marrige. So she tells her mom that shes ready & asks her 2 go inside & she'll come in a while. Kiran goes inside & tells evry1 abt Bani's answer & all r happy. After sometime evry1 is at dinner table & Bani comes & all smiles at her & she also smiles at them forcefully. Durin the dinner Jai notices Bani's red puffy eyes seems like she was cryin outside & still in a daze. Ranveer failed to notice this as he was 2 happy & relaxed abt the news that Bani is ready 2 marry him. All r happy except 4 Jai as he wasnt sure that why Bani isnt happy? Is she marryin Ranveer under some pressure? OR Is she in love with some1?

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After dinner evry1 is sittin in the livin room & takin abt Ranveer & Bani's marriage so slowly Bani found her way to outside the house once again as no one was noticin her bt she was wrong coz as soon as she left the house Jai also left the house after her without any1 noticed him. Wn he went outside in the garden he sees Bani is sittin on the swing & cryin. He immediately goes to her n asks her wats wrong? isnt she happy abt this? Bani quickly wipes her tears n tells nothin & gets up & tryin 2 leave bt Jai holds her hand & ask her again.

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She tells him that she believes in LOVE & she neither in love with some1 nor does she love her bro & she wants to marry her love bt that wont happen as she never lived 4 herself & never will & she always lived n will live 4 some1 else & she only asked 1 thing in her life frm GOD that she wants to maeey that person whom she loves to death bt that wont happen either coz her 1 decision to marry ur bro changed all ppl's life & evry1 is happy except 4 her bt if she changes her decision tn all will be unhappy except 4 her & she cant see unhappy her parent n Uday uncle & Krishna aunty. She also tells him that hopefully in future that may be i'll love ur bro bt u dnt wry coz even after marriage if i dnt love him, he'll still get the love frm me & i'll respect him.

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After tellin this she gets up & leaves & Jai is standin there surprised 😲abt her thinkin & care 4 nt just abt her family bt his family as well. He thinks that his bro will be the luckiest person in the world perhapes that person was him & hes shocked😲 to think like this.

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A wk passes by & evry1 is busy preparin 4 Ranveer & Bani's engagement party & Jai is vry happy 4 his bro. That evenin evry1 gathers at WM, all guests r arrived & evry1 is waitin 4 Bani to come downstairs. Ranveer is wearin cream colour sherwani & is excitedly waitin 4 Bani 2 come. Bani is brought downstairs by her mother & her sister shes wearin golden choli-lehngha & lookin vry beautiful😳 wn she comes downstairs Ranveer is totaly awe struck😳😆 hes just starin at her his eyes r widened & jaw is drapped. On the other hand Jai is also starin at Bani & forgets that others r also around bt wn Krishna asks him abt the ring, he comes out frm his reverie & takes out ring frm his pocket & give it to Ranveer. After that Ranveer & Bani exchanges rings & seein his bro Jai is happy bt somewr in his heart he doesnt feel happy😔

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Through out the ceremony he sees that Bani isnt happy as well bt tryin to be happy. Now the DJ announces to dance the couple of the day so Ranveer held out his hand in frnt of her n ask her to dance with him & she accepts it. Wn they dance Bani feels uncomfortable in Ranveer's hand & Jai notices this bt he cant do anythin. At that movement Ranveer's cell rings & he has to attend it so he leaves Bani at the dance floor alone & goes in the corner to attend it. Takin this opportunity Jai goes to Bani & asks her 4 dance & she agrees. Jai slowly puts his left hand on her bare waist & Bani feels uncomfortable & Jai feels somethin bt he doesnt knw wat this feelings are.😕😆

Ch:4

Takin this opportunity Jai goes to Bani & asks her 4 dance & she agrees. Jai slowly puts his left hand on her bare waist & Bani feels uncomfortable & Jai feels somethin bt he doesnt knw wat this feelings are😕😆 After few mins wn Ranveer isnt comin back, Bani excuses herself frm Jai & leaves the dance floor & goes outside in the garden. Jai sees her leavin & goes after her. Wn he goes outside, he sees her cryin silently & goes behind her & puts his arm on her shoulder & she quickly wipes her tears & turns & sees Jai & smiles at him & tryin 2 leave bt he caught her wrist n stops her frm leavin.😳 She turns & looks at him, he comes close 2 her & wipes her tears😳 7 asks her 2 accept him as a frend & shares evrythin 2 him.

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She nodes him YES & hugs him tightly & cries her heart out. He was shocked😲 bt consoles her & tn she suddenly remembers wats shes doin & left him & says sorry & ask him to call Bani. After that night both becomes close frends tn devar & bhabhi.😉 Now a wk passed by & 2day is marriage. Ranveer is wearin black sherwani sittin at mundup & waitin 4 Bani. She comes wearin red choli-lehngha lookin vry beautiful😳. Both Ranveer & Jai r starin at her she comes & sits at the mundup & phera begiens & after that Ranveer ties her mangal sutra & feel her maang with red vermilion.

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Ranveer & Bani got married & comes to the WM. Krishna welcomes her bahu with tradition of the takin her aarti, rice pot being phed by Bani & takin 7 steps with red colour kumkum in the house. After that the ring game begins wr either Ranveer or Bani has to find the ring first & Bani find the ring first 😳. After sometime Bani is being braught upstairs in Ranveer's room by Krishna & Jigs. Krishna tells her to sits on the red pleated bed n tn wn she & Jigs r goin to leave the room Bani immediately catches Jigs hand to stop her frm leavin. Jigs tells her mother that shes comin in a while & wn her mother left the room she turn to Bani & smiles at her & asks her wat happen? Bani tells her that shes scared 7 feelin vry nervous at this Jigs smiles & tells her dnt wry evrythin will go soomthly just go with the flaw😉 n leaves her in the room alone.

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Jigs failed 2 understand her that shes nt talkin abt their first night bt shes talkin abt how can she just give herself to some strange person who is now her husband on her first night as she doesnt knw anythin abt him. Her train of thoughts r interuptted by clikin of the door & tn being sut after that. Now she knws that its Ranveer & she becomes more nervous. She thinks that she has to tell him abt this bt by the time she can open her moth 2 speak to him he comes closer n sits on the bed near her & removes her veil. He puts her finger under her chin n tilted her face 2 look at him & wn she looks into his eyes, she sees eyes full of LOVE😳 so she decides to remain silent & nt 2 tell anythin abt the time she wants frm him 2 accept him.

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Disclaimer: dnt read under 18yrs old

Ranveer tn removes her jwelary one by one & kissed each n evry part of that. tn he removes her dupatta & lay her down on the bed & kissed her on her lips passionately. Bani doesnt feel anythin coz she doesnt LOVE him bt tryin to give him love & fulfil her promised as well so she doesnt do anythin & lettin Ranveer allow to do watever he wants to do. Hes tn kissin her cheeks, neck & gav his lovebites to her. He tn slowly removes her clothes & kisses evry place & he also remover his clothes & aroused her touchin her fiminity😳 & slowly he parted her legs with his & tn enters in her in one shot. She feels pain & cries bt soon Ranveer took her lips in hers & slowly took all her pain away. After sometime wn he feels her hand grips slowly gettin on easier at the back of his tn he slowly leaves her lips & kisses evrywr & soon the night fades away.

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Next mornin wn Bani opens her eyes n sees Ranveer cuddled up to her, she feels shy😳 & thinks that may be her mom is right coz in future she'll may be in love with her husband bt shes surely gettin started respectin him after yesterday's night. She soon get out the bed & goes to bathroom to take shower. After sometime she comes out wearin yellow sari lookin vry beautiful😳 & goes downstairs to do the pooja. After the prayer she goes in the kitchen to make breakfast 4 evry1 & she asks TONY wat evry1 likes? & soon she makes evry1's dishes after few mins Krishna comes into kitchen & surprised😲 2 see Bani there & breakfast ready. She tn helps her & soon TONY comes again n tells her that Jai is nt up yet😉 she tells Bani 2 go upstairs & wake him & Ranveer up😉 as yesterday was busy nite 4 Ranveer 2😉😳😆 & Bani blushes & goes upstairs😳

now wat will happen? Will Bani start lovin her husban? or will she start fallin 4 Jai? Wat does Ranveer think abt Jai- Bani relationship? stay tuned .... to sww wat happens next?.......................

dnt upset all those who wants JB 2 gether even i want them 2gether😳 bt 4 that u all hav to wait 4 sometime may be 1 more part & tn JB will be 2gether bt wat happend in between them that they'll be 2gether? to find out wait n read next part soon😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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😆😆

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😆hope this thing will eb a dream of jai kyun?

really i am confused😕 so isliey jaldi continue karo and what is 7 inbetween?

well pls contineu soon... kahin kumkum se inspiration to nahi milgay tumien? ranveer bani🤢😡🤢 really not nice jb always nice .. contineu soonw waithing ..

👏👏👏

davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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loved it ...
waiting for an update...........
😃

sangeeta
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi, all

Tx 4 takin ur precious time frm ur busy scheduled n readin it n comment on it. btw i'll try to post 2 parts at a time n im wrkin on next part so i'll try to post it by 2moro or 2nite late so plsssssss wait & see.

btw Davia, i really dnt knw abt Kumkum's story as i didnt watched it so its my imagination & thoughts that came into my mind.

i hope u all guys like the LOVE makin scene n 4 some reason i didnt get bold in this love makin as it was Ranveer & Bani's bt i'll get bold in Jai & Bani's love makin 😉😳 so plssss wait 4 some more parts.

btw i also want JB 2gether bt wat 2 do with theri parent as they want Ranveer & Bani 2gether😆 & on the top of that Ranveer is totaly in love with Bani😳 n our Jai feels somethin 4 Bani bt doesnt knw wat is it?😡😆 n Bani yet 2 find out wat she feels for Jai. so stay tuned................... n i'll post it next parts soon

Note : I changed Uday, Krishna, Jigs & Aditya's age if u rnt interested in their ages dnt bother bt if u r tn look on pg1 in intro. i changed it as per Davia's advice & logic & tx to her coz now it makes some sense.

bye n tc

tx 2 all once again

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Posted: 18 years ago
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will be waiting 4 the next part................cant wait to read how jb will be together

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