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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello KSians!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

After a very very very long vacation........ (only about 5-6 days)... i am back once again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.... for some of you its like.... finally!!!! and others will be like already?!.......

I am back with FF #26

Parivaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Character Outline:

Uday Walia: Big buisness Man!!!!....Has a 1000 Crore Empire... He has what you call everything!!!..... has a lovely wife... loves her a lot!!!.....Has 3 kids...... but only gives the attention and love to only 2 of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and doesnt bother with his son!!!!!!!!!!!

Krishna Walia: Loves her family!! Her family is everything to her! Loves her husband.. will stand by him!! she loves all of her kids equally!!!...... all 3 of them!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jigyasa Walia: She's the eldest of the 3!!!!...... she is not married!!!..... her eye in only on one thing.... that is her dad's property!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....... she wants it!!!!

Jai Walia: The middle child!!!!! He is an illiterate!!! when he was little.... he didnt bother with skool and just quit!!!... he finds it way to boring!!!!.... father hates him and doesnt want anything to do with him!!!.. he lives in WM but lives his own life!!...... He loves his family to bits.... but he knows he will never get his fathers love!!!!

Ranveer Walia: The last child!!!!! He is on the boat with Jigyasa!! He wants Uday's property!!!... Both him and Jigs want it.. once they get it they will split it!! they know nothing will be going to Jai!! the more the merrier!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Bani Dixit: Moves from the US after her father dies!!! She stays with her dad's best friend!!!! wants to get her MBA!!!! she knows that she will be getting married and being the bahu of the house!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Its hard to explain the story... but just read it and everything will fall in its place!!

Hope you guys enjoy it

and plz do comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

Starts off in the US….

Bani was packing up everything!!

It wasn't a pleasant scene!!!!!

She was soo sad!!!!!

Just few weeks back….

Her father had passed away!!!!

And now

She has no one in this world!!!!!

**Flashback in the hospital**

Bani's dad was on the hospital bed!!!

He had severed his 2nd heart attack!!!!!

He had gotten his 1st

On the day his wife had passed away

Becuz she had suffered from cancer!!!!!

And this time

He just couldn't handle it

The doc had said

That this was it was severe!!!

Bani was an only child!!!!!!

So after her mom had died

Her only support was her dad!!

And her dad's support was only her

But now….

With him on his death bed….

Who else was there???

Bani's dad had told her

To go back to India…..

Becuz over here

She had no one!!!!!!!!

He had told her to finish skool in India!!!!!!

But he said to promise him one thing

And she looked at him…..

She was waiting for him to say something

Hope it wasn't something bad!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

He had told her

That if she went back to India

Who does she know there

As she doesn't know anyone there

So he had told her

That his best friend…

Lives there!!!!

And they had always talked the kids getting married

So he said

If she could marry his son!!!!!!!!!

Bani had looked at him!!

He's like

That's all I want

And I don't want anything else!!!!

Bani was looking at her dad

That was his last wish

Was to marry his best friends' son!!!

She had heard a lot about them

Only cuz of what her dad had told her!!!!!!!

But she only knew most about the great Uday Walia!!!!!

He had asked Bani

Whether she would fulfill her dad's last wish

Bani had told him

That she would do it

But don't talk about death!

She was denying that anything was going to happen to him!!!

But it was the truth!!!

It was reality!!!!

When she had stepped out….

She had come back….

And there he was…

Being covered by a sheet…….

And he was no more!!!!

Bani was just standing still!!!!



The End! (Please Comment)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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me first

wow thats nice interesting story line cant wait to read more

pliz cont soon n welcome back 😊

luv

Rachna

xoxox

Edited by aarwen_193 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Very Very Well done!! 👏 Continue soon...


Raisa 😛
Edited by Jai & Bani - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aagayi ms. besharam...new ff...woo hoo...vaise...im still jhooming to the music from oso 😳 😳 😳 ...kya karoon...ahem ahem...SOMEONE wants to go see with with me...ahem ahem 😉 😉 😉
JAZ
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guli..................

lovely start off..................

update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guli
gr8 start 👏
cont.sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kaise kasie guli how could u think as me.. i was thinking some thinking liek that jai being an illetrate.. and u write the ff.. u r great.. lookign forward .. as ur ff always make me log in the ff board.. ba jaldi likeoo]]

i think bani will be choosen to amrry ranveer but somehow ende up marry jai 😉

pls cotnineu soon

davia

Edited by davia389 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey Guli 😊

Great starting to another great FF 😃 😃

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳

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