~SwaSan Drabble Series by Shona and Anna~ Page 16 ~New Drabble Updated

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Hello everyone,

I am back with something new again. But before telling you guys what this is, I wanted to share with you guys, how did I end up doing this!! This time, I am not doing this alone. This idea was planted in my brain by my crazy and soul-sister, Anna.

Few days ago...

Me: "Anna, I am so loving this track now!! I have already started my spree of romantic imaginations for SwaSan"

Anna, getting excited: "Shona, I am enjoying this track as well. But you should keep thinking and imagining. CVs seems to dissect your brain always and use them. So keep thinking and writing them. I think you should start your Drabble series!!"

Me, getting confused: "Drabble series? Whats that Anna?"

Anna: "Arrey Silly!! With Drabble series, you can post a short OS of SwaSan scenes, and maybe romantic ones. And every time you get a new idea, you can post them here!! CVs will be able to stalk easily and take the scenes if they want too."

Me, still skeptical of trying: "I have never tried this before. But if you dont mind helping me, I can still give it a shot!!"

Anna, being the best partner in crime, "Ofcourse I will!! But you will write it. You write better!!"

Me, laughing at that "Hahaha, Anna!! Good joke!! No I dont write better. You are a much much much better writer than I am"

Anna, not giving up, "Shona? No. You are!!"

Me, not trying to give up, "Anna, You are better"

Anna, still being persistent, "Shona😡?"

Me, still trying to win, "Oh common on Anna!! Let me atleast win once!! You write better. Baat Khatam!!"

Anna, "Lets not debate about this. Because it is going to be never ending. You are writing it. End of discussion!!"

Me, being the good girl, "Fine!! I will write them!! But I have ONE CONDITION"

Anna, welcoming it with open arms, "Throw the condition!! I am always open for all the challenges"

Me: "You will have to help me with the plots and help me come up with naughtier ideas!! Coz I suck at romantic scenes!!"

Anna, being nice, "No you dont!!"

Me, being very pushy, "Anna, atleast let me win here? Please agree!!"

Anna, finally letting me win, "Ok. I will help you with the naughtier ideas and you will write them!!"

Me, relieved and happy, "Ok then partner, lets start it"

Anna, double happy and excited, "Lets do it"


So, we, the crazy souls, Shona and Anna, presenting you guys with the drabble series on SwaSan!!

We hope you guys like it!!!

The first Drabble Installment is in the next post!!

PS: The page number will be updated whenever a new drabble will be posted!!

PPS: Even though Anna said she won't write it, she did end up writing😆



Index:

Concept: Baadi Romance

Concept: Hit and Miss of a Perfectly Planned CM

Saiyaan
Concept: SwaSan Consummation




Edited by .IamShonali. - 9 years ago

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~Temporary Strangers in a Permanent Marriage~


Since Swara got married, she had not gotten time to visit her family. Things had gotten so busy at the Maheshwari mansion and with Sanskaar keeping her involved (Ahem Ahem!) the whole day, Swara missed her family. For few days now Shomi had been asking Swara to come and visit them and Swara complied, much to Sanskaar's disappointment. Sanskaar wanted to tag along for he could not resist staying away from his princess, but Swara denied. It was going to be her time with her family, and no matter how much he pushed her, almost like a kid, Swara did not give in to his wishes. Pouting, Sanskaar agreed and dropped her off at Baadi.

Swara spent her day with the whole of the family as they continued pampering her and showering love and affection. The mother-daughter duo had fun catching up on everything that they had missed out on all those days Swara was busy.

Finally it was nighttime! Everyone in the house was fast asleep but Swara could not rest her eyes. The day had passed by really fast but the loneliness in the night was very torturous for her. She was missing him. Terribly! She was missing those embrace in which she slept peacefully. She was missing his warm breath caressing her neck as he held her close to himself. She missed playing with his lush hair, which had become their daily evening ritual. She cursed herself for not letting him come with her. But there was nothing she could do about it now. She looked at the time and it was almost half past 12. She wanted to message him but she did not know if he would be awake. He had been working so hard these days that he would come back from work and melt in her arms in the night.

She was broken from her thoughts by a loud knock on the door. Wondering who would come to her at this hour, she opened the door to her husband who was leaning at the door, smirking. Ahh, he misses me too, Swara thought smirking at him. How did she even think Sanskaar would fall asleep without her - he could not; He loved her too damn much!

Sanskaar on the other hand, glanced at his beautiful wife. Dressed in a pink suit she looked surreal! God, he had missed her terribly! One day without her and he had gone crazy in the house. And then he had an idea and he knew Swara would make his idea interesting. She knew him well. She would see through what was cooking in his head and they would have some fun, he had thought, elated.

"Are you Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari?"

Swara knew from the smirk on Sanskaar's face that he was playing one of his games with her. Sanskaar knew how to make their married life interesting and she was going to spice it up too.

"Yes I am. But who are you?" Swara asked innocently.

"I have a parcel for you, Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari. I went to your permanent address but I was informed that you would be found on your temporary address. So here I am." Sanskaar said teasingly.

"A parcel? For me? You can drop it back to my permanent address. I actually don't have time to see anything at my temporary address!" She said opening the door wide open to let Sanskaar in, stealthily of course.

"But I was given specific instructions to hand it over to you only, whether you are at your permanent or temporary address" Sanskaar said trying to walk closer and Swara immediately walked back, teasing him.

"What was so urgent that you had to come all the way to my temporary address to deliver it to me?" Swara said raising her eyebrows.

"Your permanent husband asked me to give you these bangles, temporary hai, shagun ke. It your wedding gift mam." Sanskaar walked closer, noticing that Swara was soon going to hit the wall. He smirked.

"Temporary shagun ke bangles?" Swara said shocked for a moment

"Actually, if your husband had given them to you, then they would be called permanent! But sadly, it is me"

"I see"

By then Sanskaar had already pinned Swara on the wall without her realization. Swara glanced around and her eyes widened as she realized she had no escaped. Sanskaar handed over the wrapped gift to Swara as their hands brushed lightly at the exchange. Swara opened the gift, a beautiful set of red bangles; she loved her permanent' husband's choice. Swara tried to hide her lips by closing her lips tightly together but Sanskaar had already caught on the smile in her eyes. He could read her eyes and her face as easily as she could read him. He had already noticed that Swara loved his gift and he could not be more thrilled.

Swara stared at Sanskaar as he leaned over her and whispered Swara Ma'am, shall I help you wear those temporary shagun ke bangles?"

"No No No thank you. Only my permanent husband has a right to do so" Swara said, her breath lost and her heart beating nervously.

"If I may, I have been noticed how lonely you are feeling without your permanent husband. From the looks of it, does not look like you are going to call him to yourself. I have a solution. " Sanskaar said winking.

"What?"

Sanskaar leaned in and held Swara by her waist taking her by surprise, her eyes widening, "If you don't mind, I can be your temporary husband and help you wear those bangles"

Swara's eyes sparkled at Sanskaar's touch. Even after so many days of marriage, he managed to make her nervous and arouse her in ways she could not imagine. Sanskaar looked deep into her eyes, took out the bangles from its cover.

"May I?"

Swara in a daze held out her hand to Sanskaar. He held them possessively in his hand and without leaving her gaze; he made her wear the bangles, caressing her hand as he did it. Swara closed her eyes at his intimate touch and blushed.

"Your touch...your touch is very different from that of my permanent husband" Swara said, trying to still play the game, however difficult it was for her to.

Sanskaar moved closer to her face and taking her right earlobes in his mouth and nibbling them, whispered teasingly, "In the case, be my temporary wife tonight, I can do a lot more and show you a lot more."


"Haww, I am a very loyal permanent wife! I cannot agree to this condition" Trying to hide her shyness as much as possible.


"Is that so?" Sanskaar teasingly started nuzzling in her neck, blowing soft air, caressing her waist, giving her sweet torture, which she was happily enjoying.

All control was lost and none could play the game further as Swara leapt at Sanskaar and hugged him tightly. Oh! It was going to be an eventful night.


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We hope you guys like it.

Love,
Shonali and Anna!!
Edited by .IamShonali. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shona and Anna,
Wonderful idea and wonderful writeup!👏
Totally enjoyed this drabble..

I loved how you ve captured the small nuances of a marriage...how she misses his embrace at night, how she plays with his hair,how he holds her close and sleeps, how she doesnt want to disturb him even though she wants to hear his voice.. V v nice!

And then he comes to meet her & completes d 'san' part of swasan.I have always wanted to see them like this... Together, blissfully happy, content, laughing and carefree... Without any responsibilities of the family, just the two of them completely into each other and living their life khulke... Your writeup has just portrayed that so beautifully... I can so visualize this happening and it gives me so much of joy. Thank u!👏

And ofcourse, loved the whole'permanent' and 'temporary' game between the two 😆. Especially the first one- permanent address.. Actually her permanent adddress is his heart, isn't it!

And the romance - the love along with pasion...uuiii.. How he backtracks her into a wall and pins her there,gives her bangles, makes her wear them, the teasing, her enjoying his harkatein, both lost into each other, love and desire blending in one... Uff!! Awesome!😳

Your OS is humorous, romantic,funny,light,passionate and very very cute. Thus making it an awesome story!! I hope the CVs implement this one day!
So looking forward to more of these..

Muah..
Lots of love, sumi!
Edited by coolgal270 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That is awesome 👏
I loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww!its so naughty,cute,lovely & beautiful os.
Our naughty mr.&mrs.sanskar maheshwari.
Love it.
A awsm thread.keep posting shona & anna.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome scenario, loved the naughty sanskaar and it was great to see swara responding to it.very well written, update soon and pls pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shona and Anna

Good work girls...👍🏼
This dabble series idea is awesome..
The naughty sanskar and his sweet wife..
Pure marital Bliss...😳...our lovely swasan..

Keep writing and pm me...

Love,
Simi
Edited by simsen23 - 9 years ago
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Shona and Anna 🤗

Lovely Drabble! I loved the cuteness of the whole thing- it was romantic and slightly naughty and yet tender at the same time. The mix of the separation telling on both, with Sanskaar's clever and yet sexy idea of being the "strange" delivery man who morphs into the passionate "substitute" husband and their interaction was nicely balanced and hit all the right notes:). Really enjoyed it!

Lots of love,
Shru xoxo


Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very romantic, mischievous, sensuous and oh so passionate 😳 Right mix of sugar & spice! Really liking this Mrs and Mr Sanskaar Maheshwari who can't wait to get their hands on each other. 😉

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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awsome... 😳 the inseparable Mr. n Mrs. Maheshwari... very nicely written...keep posting more such drabbles...!! n thnx fr d pm !! ..:))

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