MaNan FS -- PAY BACK -- (UPDATED LAST PART) Pg 17 9/1/16 - Page 13

Awesome story with an happy ending note.the update was amazing. Manan's convo was beautifully penned.

nandin itne months chup q rahi

fabulous story
read in a go
loved it
written so beautifully

woe wht a story...
nice...
do come up with its sequel if not sequel then give epilogue at least...

Superb story!!

that was so awesome.

finally all misunderstanding cleared..

hureee


yipeee..




manan moments was amazing.

n that baby to kitni cute h..
a perfect happy family ending. .

loveee it...


Love Geet

Thanks for a great story
Loved the mystery
Great job
Hope to read more from you