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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

very nice update...
shlok taking wrong direction.. matlab ek aur twist...
hmm gud...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..


thank u didi
twist tho nahi lekin fun tho hain
keep following for more excitment

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Catherine06

Nice update, waiting for the next update, I like the way of your ff,no suggestion because I can't think of writing,so keep interesting updates.


thank u so much
its not suggestion dear its about guessing
anyway thanks for commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai sai superb one, but u left us with confusion,what any trouble is coming to ashlok on the way? story was going well. niranjan was happy for his son but why he wants to stop astha from going to office, what have in his mind? i think it should reveal in the coming updates...


thank u syvalini
wait dear hold patience
yes everything will be disclosed in d course of time keep following
thanks for reply
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashimamm91

nice sai. nw ashlok honeymoon on d way. even d trailr is too hot. if kavya cms anywhere near then durng d honeymoon bechari ll get burns. so its gud that sojal held her back. niranjan is happy too?! i thnk shlok ll cnfs soon if astha is firm in her demand. shlok s already impatient. n a wrong turn 2 kolhapur? what is waiting them there? hope d honeymoon is stll on. nw waitng 4 d next twist. thanks 4 d pm n d update


thank u ashima
u have to still wait for that anyway keep on discussing like this i feel happy
thanks for reply
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 38


At dhaba Shlok and Aastha ate and bought maize for each. Shlok was paying the bill. Aastha came to car but a small monkey was staring at her continuously. Shlok was asking how much far is goa from here but he said "Goa!! Goa is raaste se nahi chelega."(Goa!! Goa doesn't come in this way) Shlok "Wat!!" Shopkeeper "Haan Sir ye raasta Kolhapur chelega Goa nahi."(haan Sir this way leads to Kolhapur not Goa) Aastha was feared now. She moved a little back monkey too came forward. She moved sidewards monkey too moved sidewards. Heyy Bappa ye kya kar raha hain. Monkey suddenly came forward. Aastha yelled and ran from there. She doesn't know that monkey was following her for maize. She caught that in the hand and she ran away. Monkey too followed her. She ran into the jungle. Shlok "Tho goa kaise jana hain."(So how to go to Goa) Shopkeeper said the way to goa. He said that they should return in the same way they came and should turn to other side. He should have believed her and he saw her. She was not there. Shlok came to car and saw in car. No she was not there too. Shlok "Aastha Aastha..kaha ho" He didn't find her. He went inside again. No she was not there.

Aastha was running like PT usha. Monkey too followed her to the extent she went. Heyy Bappa bacha lena and she shouted "Shlok.." Monkey suddenly jumped on her and took the maize and ran away. She lost grip on the ground and fell and rolled down in the jungle and landed in the strange place where she saw danger zone. Aastha was thinking heyy Bappa kaha pas gayi main. She thought to shout Shlok but seeing danger zone she kept mum she thought any other animal would listen. She kept on chanting Bappa and tried to climb from where she fell. Here Shlok was feeling restless where she would have gone. He thought she might have went to wash room. He went there and didn't go inside. He waited for sometime but she was not coming. He went out and again searched. Now he is really feared he asked every one there. They said they didn't see her. Atlast Shlok took the photo he just snapped in the car and shown it to every one. There some one was laughing. He went there and shown the pic and asked "Did u see her." One of them saw the photo and said "Haan ye ladki abi us taraf gaye the monkey was following her."(Haan this lady went there monkey was following her) Shlok asked furiously "Kis taraf is it she see her clearly." And he shown photo to her. They said yes. He quickly ran towards that side.

Aastha was praying to Bappa, she knows Shlok would be worried for her. She was roaming in that jungle. She was feared. Shlok went towards that side. Shlok was shouting "Aastha Aastha..." haan kaha gayi ye ladki. His voice bcame louder. There was silent every where. He cant listen anything. Wat the hell y should she have to go this far. He again thought and thought to go back but suddenly one monkey was running catching maize. Shlok saw that and thought it was the one Aastha had. He understood and went into the jungle. Shlok "Aastha Aastha.." Aastha heard the groan of some animal. She was feared to the core. She didn't think anything. She literally ran from there. She didn't know where she was heading. She was panting. She heard it, her name it is Shlok. Aastha shouted "Shlok Shlok.." Shlok listened her. He ran towards the voice and shouted again "Aastha Aastha.." Aastha ran fast she doesn't want to wait a little bit she wans to be in his arms. He saw her running. There she is. Shlok "Aastha." And went b4 her. Aastha saw him and hugged him tightly. Shlok worried "Aastha tum teek tho ho."(Aastha are u k) Aastha cried and nodded.

Shlok "Aastha kya hua tum kyun aaya iss taraf."(Aastha wat happened y did u come here) Aastha "Shlok monkey was chasing me I was feared Shlok I didn't think it was following me for maize and I ran and fell here." She is still fearing. Shlok "Aastha don't worry don't fear I m here nothing happened to u did u hurt any where." She didnt know she was hurt. She checked her leg. There was a little scratch over there. Shlok got down and rubbed there. Shlok "Is it paining." Aastha "thodasa." Aastha "Shlok lets get out from here mujhe dar lag raha hain." Shlok got up and saw here and there. Aastha "Shlok how did u come here." He said everything how he searched her. Aastha "Shlok ab kaise chelenge do u remember how did u come here." Shlok "nahi." Aastha "Shlok mujhe bohut dar lag raha hain there is danger board too." Shlok "Danger board kaha hain." Aastha said how she fell there. Shlok "Aastha nothing happens to u main hoo na." and he kissed her. Aastha didn't undersand anything. She just want him and she too responded to the kiss. She wrapped her hands around his neck and closed her eyes. Shlok entered his tongue in her mouth. She went on tip toes and gave him more access. Shlok caressed her waist. He slowly pinned her to the tree. He cant control, he came down to her throat and licked her. But they suddenly stopped listening a groan of wolf. Aastha blushed a lot. Shlok "Aastha chalo we cannot be here." They were moving from there. Aastha "Shlok u really know how to divert my mind such main now I m not fearing at all. Shlok shall we be here itself for 2-3 days without work without contact only u and me, kya dekh raha hain achchi hain na idea." Shlok "Here I m worrying how to get out of here seriously such main gone case hain tu." Aastha "Shlok this is the nice chance I love u kahiye please." Shlok got irritated "Aastha if u don't stop blabbering from now..." Aastha "achcha teek hain gussa mat ho yaha se bhaagne ki raasta socho." Shlok thought kuch nahi ho sakta.

Anjali "Varad did u know anything." Varad "nahi Aai I didn't find her I m sorry don't worry I also asked detective to find her don't worry they will definitely find her." Anjali cried and said "meri vaje se sirf meri vaje se aaj meri beti kaise hain kis haal main.."(bcoz of me just bcoz of me I don't even know how is my daughter and where is she) Varad "Aai I said na everything will be fine and u didn't do anything wrong u did it in a right way wherever she is she will be fine." Anjali "Varad did Shlok tell anything about her and how did he came to know about Rishi u didn't say anything about it to me." Varad said everything about how he kidnapped Aastha and how he made Rani to kill her. Anjali "pata nahi Shlok kya paap kiya kyun ho raha hain uske saath aisa."(I don't know y is it happening to Shlok) Varad "Aai don't cry see now how much happy Shlok is with Aastha don't u see how Aastha brought change in him." Anjali "such main meri bahu bohut achchi hain hamesha uske saath hi honge wo"(Yes Varad she is very nice she will be with Shlok all the time) Varad "Haan Aai kam se kam galti se to sahi ye tho achcha kiya baba ne."(Yes Aai Baba has don't atleast something good without his knowledge) Anjali "Varad I m happy for she being away but is she fine I mean how is her marriage life does she have children is he good or bad." Varad "Aai cool nothing will happen to her she loved him that's y she went away she trusted him we should also trust her ok now don't cry I m going." Anjali nodded.

Shlok and Aastha were roaming by hand in hand. Aastha "Shlok ab main nahi chala jaata I m tired Shlok." Shlok "Aastha its getting dark we should be out of here b4 night u come fast." Aastha was tired and sat there. Aastha "Shlok bas please we will wait for some time here." Shlok "Aastha... achcha teek hain just imagine Aastha if day falls down we cant see anything or else I will take u in arms and will walk we have be out from here." Aastha saw him worrying. Aastha "Teek hain Shlok hum chalte hain aap sahi kah rahe hain we cant see anything." And she got up. He took her in arms and started walking. Aastha "Shlok chodiye mujhe I can walk no need of this." Shlok "pucca u said u r tired." Aastha "nahi nahi I m ok I can walk." Shlok put her down and they walked. Nothing was going in their way. They didn't find any sign of civilisation. Besides that it is getting darker. Their steps bcame smaller. Now rain started pouring. Aastha's face lightened seeing the rain. She was dancing in the rain. Oh god y cant she feel the circumstances Shlok thought. Shlok dragged her from the rain and they went under the tree. Shlok "Aastha tum pagal hogaya kya kya kar raha tha."(Aastha r u mad wat were u doing) Aastha "Shlok it will be very nice come we will dance." And she was dragging him. He dragged her more towards him. She stuck with him. Shlok "Aastha we were stuck in the middle of the jungle and we didn't eat anything since afternoon we dont have any shelter wat if u get fever haan." Aastha "Shlok thodi der keliye to sahi."(Shlok just for some time) Shlok "nahi Aastha such main y cant u think maturely haan we need to find shelter to hide from animals we cant get out of this jungle at this night come lets walk." Aastha nodded.

Atlast they found a old hut everything was disoriented there. Shlok "Aastha chalo aaj raat ham yehi rukhenge."(Aastha come lets be here for this n8) Aastha followed him into the hut. It was really scaring. Old photos, spider webs each and every thing scared Aastha. Aastha "Shlok isse jyada achchi ghar bhi hosakta hain yaha lets find that one." Shlok "Kya tum chup raho yaar u cant even think straight we got this house after searching for few hours and u r saying we should leave this such main thodasa akal isthmaal karo." Aastha "Shlok mujhe dar lag raha hain yaha wat if some snake or rat comes."

Part 39

Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai Sai... Thanks for your update and pm. U remembered us our ashlok jungle track. Today reading your update I really felt astha running and falling down and shlok searching our on queen. Because in our show we saw that. Thanks for bringing our sweetest memory of ashloks chemistry once again. Hey astha yelled seeing monkey didn't shlok hear her voice Kamal hey. Then once again shlok understand that his decesion is wrong if he trusted astha. It will be right. Ok after seeing shlok and after their romance she became drama queen's natanki.
like astha's I am also telling please make them stay in jungle for atleast one day. Okay Sai I think you are making our confusion. But v trust you very much. Please bring more twist. Nice update really I liked it so much. V r expecting more romance in jungle. Waiting for next update yaar. Keep rocking. Loved it very much.continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Saibhargav


thank u didi
twist tho nahi lekin fun tho hain
keep following for more excitment

wow fun...
excited..
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Remember the old days Sai...the memories of ashlok never going to died.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Today I am the first one to comment I think. Nice update,Jungle track started,very nice, expecting more from jungle track.

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