Ashlok ff: Journey of Ashlok's love (Season 2) updated Last Part 60 - Page 56

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

wow.. nice one remembering our ashlok jungle track so good our drama queen na so lovely in every difficult situation also so cool n irritates shlok as always like she does. shlok as usual.


oh thank u syvalini
i really feel succeeded in bringing all those memories thanks for ur support
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: unniachu

Nice update sai

please don't introduce any villain in jungle.

Good work.



thanks
no villain k happy
thanks again
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Hey..that's a funny update...its getting more and more interesting


thank u so keep following
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

I like this mad astha

Nicely written, thank you
Is anjali talking about jothi ?
Waiting for next update


thank u
wait and watch to know more
thanks for following it daily
keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashimamm91

wow! sai, jungle track! its nice. a new version f jngle track. funny n romantic. d mnky s funny. 1st thought mnky too fell 4 her. if so shlok would have had a tight competitn.! btw jungle kiss was hot. expectng more romantic moments in d jngle. n anjali n varad, they were talking about jyoti? so sm more twists? waitng. thanks 4 d beautiful jungle track sai. jungle track s 1 of my favrits. thanks 4 d pm n update too.


thanks a lot ashima
how can u even compare that little monkey with our huge baby bear haan Shlok ko dekh ke hi wo bhaag jayegi 😆 😆
romance hmm wait and watch hope u like it
twists?? lets watch
thank u ashima
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chandalekha

Anjali was talking about Jyoti, isn't it ?? Waiting for the next eagerly...

😊😊


thanks for commenting
keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

It was a Rom-Com update😳


thanks for commenting
more to come keep following
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 39


Aastha was shivering both with cold and fear. Shlok was feared she might get ill. He took his shirt. Aastha "Shlok ye aap kya kar raha hain."(Shlok wat r u doing) Shlok "Aastha wear this or else u will get cold and also fever u didn't eat anything." Aastha "Shlok we need to put fire here." Shlok went and brought some sticks. It was a very difficult task for him to bring them. Shlok "Aastha how can we ignite fire we don't have any source." Aastha thought for some time and shouted "Shlok I have an idea." Shlok "kya." Aastha "Shlok I saw a show in nat geo it is man vs wild he used to make a hole in a dry stick and insert another stick into it and used to rub it very fast by turning it in it. U do as I say as he does and slowly there will be a smoke coming from it then we should blow it and should keep a dry grass on it and then fire burns." Shlok lifted his eye brows thinking she also has something in her brain. Shlok "Teek hain."(k) They both done as she says.

They both sat beside each other. Aastha placed her head on his shoulder and tried to sleep. Shlok "Aastha aren't u feeling cold." Aastha "nahi to."(no) She stopped and suddenly shouted "Shlok did u listen." Shlok "Kya." Aastha "Shlok listen carefully it is waterfalls there r waterfalls nearby." Shlok listened and said "haan Aastha." Aastha "Shlok kal ham vaha chelte."(Shlok we will go there tomorrow) Shlok "such main don't u want to get out from here." Aastha bcame mum again and tried to sleep. Shlok slowly shifted his hands from her shoulder to her waist and pressed her navel. Aastha "Shlok kya kar raha hain."(Shlok wat r u doing) Shlok "kya matlab we came to honeymoon na then we have to justify the reason don't u remember wat vahini said they need choti bro for Kavya from us so.." Aastha "Ji nahi don't u remember wat I said u have to say I love u for that." Shlok got irritated and said "ye tum kya I love u I love u kahke jap karne lagi hain. Aastha now it's a challenge listen i wont touch ur finger until u come near me ok." Aastha "Haan to teek hain I too wont come near u until u say I love u lekin Shlok tumhe to I love u kahna padega." Shlok moved away from her as distanced himself from her maintaining a touch me not sign. Aastha too maintained distance.

Next morning Shlok slowly woke up and saw towards her side. She was not present oh god y cant she be at one place yaar. He stood up and went out and called her. She was nowhere again. He was tensed again but he reminded her words and followed the sound of water falls. He went there and he found her there taking bath. Aastha "Shlok kya dekh rahe ho aisa come u also have bath." Shlok "Aastha chalo yaha se we need to get out of this jungle." Aastha "nahi Shlok I wont come out of this until u say I love u." Shlok "Aastha bachpana chod do just get out from there anything might be in there." Aastha "Haan to tumhe kya padi hain u don't love me na then how does it matters u the great Shlok Agnihotri." And she swam here and there. Shlok "Aastha tum meri baat kyo nahi maanti just get out from there Aastha u will fall ill." Aastha "Tho teek hain na I love u kaho abhi aati hon..aah Shlok...bach...a..o" and she drowned in the water. Shlok "Aastha." And he jumped into the water. He went to Aastha and brought her to the land. Shlok was shouting "Aastha Aastha..." She didn't get conscious. Kya hua hoga. He was frightened and saw her legs and all if anything bit. But there is no mark of anything. He was tapping her cheek and shouting "Aastha Aastha.." Shlok slowly pressed her tummy. No water is coming from inside. He also blew air into her through her mouth. No reaction. He was really frightened now. He was feared to the core. He slowly kept his head on her breast to listen heart beat. Aastha slowly opened her one eye to see him. Shlok saw her. Shlok said with full of love "Aastha." And hugged her tightly. Aastha "and u said u wont touch me at all." Shlok broke the hug and saw at her annoyingly "matlab." Aastha "Oho Shlok I was just teasing nothing happened to me I just..."she didn't complete her sentence. Shlok shouted at her "Aastha.." she was feared. Shlok pushed at her and turned back to her and wiped his tears.

Aastha "Shlok kya hua tum itni upset kyun hogayi hain."Shlok wat happened y r u so tensed) Shlok grabbed her tightly and said "never ever try to fool me like this understood." And left her. She saw his love. He has pain in his heart. Aastha "Shlok I m sorry I m really sorry." She was going to place her hand on his hand. He pushed her hand away. Aastha "Shlok please I m sorry I swear I will never do like that." Shlok "chalo its getting late." Aastha followed him. They were going to nowhere. They didn't know where they r going. Aastha "Shlok I m sorry I didn't know u will fear that much I thought u will scold me but please talk to me Shlok please I said na I will never say like that." He was going front. She was following him and was coming infront him. Shlok suddenly stopped her and hugged her tightly. Shlok "Don't ever leave me like that I can't even think my life without u." Aastha buried her head in his chest. Shlok caressed her face. Aastha slowly raised her head and kissed him on his cheek and said sorry and on other cheek and again sorry and was going to kiss on his forehead but he raised his head and kissed her on lips. She smiled and kissed him hard. Shlok was shocked. She was having her way. She entered her tongue in his mouth and sucking his saliva out. She tasted his smell. After sometime she broke the kiss and said "ab chele."(lets go) She wasn't shy at all. Where did that Aastha go? Such main she is a mystery box he thought kuch bhi karte hain. While they were going Shlok got a thorn pick on his leg he squealed. Aastha saw his pain and worried. She slowly took out the thorn and smoothened it with her tongue. Shlok smiled at her antics. Shlok "Hmm Aastha let us be in our room then u wont even realise ur name u will just scream my name of pleasure." Aastha blushed and hit him on the chest and said "Shlok chi u will say watever comes to ur mouth. Jo bhi hain as I said u should say I love u first." Shlok "Tum nahi sudarogi."(U wont change)

After some walk she felt tired and exhausted. Aastha "Shlok bas ab aur nahi chala jaata bohut bhoog lagi hain aur pani bhi chahiye aisa lag raha hain ki ye meri akhri pal hain Shlok I cant.."(Shlok not anymore I cant walk anymore I m hungry too and also thirsty its like it is my last few minutes in) and she was panting and sat there. Shlok "Aastha today we need to get out of here just bear for sometime." Aastha "nahi Shlok I can't it's like I m dying." Shlok "Aastha how many times I should say not speak like that." Aastha "tek hain chalo." They walked a little bit more. Aastha's head was rotating she can't withstand any more. She just collapsed. Shlok caught her. Shlok "Aastha Aastha.." No response this time too. But Shlok was confident "Aastha bachpana chodo." She didn't wake up. Shlok picked her up in his arms and went forlong. He kept her down and again shouted "Aastha Aastha.." He was really worried so much. He saw a temple quite far from them. Shlok again took in her arms and ran towards the temple. He always kept on shouting "Aastha Aastha..ankhe kholo"(Aastha Aastha open ur eyes) he reached temple very fast. He also climbed the steps within no time. He kept her on ground and asked water. They gave him water. He sprinkled water on her face. She slowly opened her eyes and saw Shlok. Aastha almost defeatedly "Shlok pani.." Shlok made her drink water with his hands. She drank almost half of the bottle and gave him to drink. Shlok thrown the bottle aside and hugged her unknown to him tears rolled in his eyes. Aastha too hugged her. Pandit ji "Wa kitne pyaari lag rahe hain dono aap dono ki rishte saath janm tak saaath rahtha hain."(Wa how beautiful this couple is ur relation will be for 7 births) He also gave them something to eat. Shlok and Aastha ate. Shlok "Aastha ab kaise lag raha hain."(Aastha how r u now) Aastha nodded. Shlok "Aastha be here I will go and see any transport." Aastha "Shlok main ne kaha na ye Kolhapur hain dekho ye temple ko hum pehle hi aa chuki hain."(Aastha didn't I say we r coming to Kolhapur see this is Kolhapur we already came here once) Shlok "haan Aastha I will go out and get some food and transport we need to go our vehicle." Aastha nodded.

Shlok went to buy food. Aastha saw someone struggling to go down. She saw her and went to help her. She was pregnant. She came to know her in laws were going to abort her child. She was shocked. She gave her piece of mind to them. Shlok came back. He again cant find her. Oh god where was she again. He searched her in and out. He was very angry. Shlok was shouting "Aastha Aastha bachpana chodo baahar aajao."(Aastha Aastha don't be childish come outside) He sat there helpless. Aastha was coming with scolding someone in her mouth kaise log hain aaj bhi bete aur beti main farakh rakhta hain. She came there and called Shlok. Shlok listened her voice and went to her and gave a tight slap. Shlok shouted at her loudly "Kaha chali gayi tum tum bhi Swati ki tarah.."(Where have u been u too like Swati..) and he left her. Aastha looked horrified. She was out of the world. Shlok held her hand and said chalo mere saath. And he dragged her to the auto. She didn't utter the word. She didn't understand wat he was going through. His three finger marks were on her cheek.

Part 40

Edited by Saibhargav - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yay... M first 🥳

Awesome update...
Liked it...
Shlok taking care of astha..
Astha d drama queen.. Wants shlok to say ilu first... Very gud...
They move towards d road...
Astha faints due to weakness frm hunger & thirst...
Shlok gvs a slap to astha without hearing out her words.. Very bad...
Astha shud hit him with stick...
Continue soon..
Thnks 4 d pm..
Sorry for late comment...
Thanks 4 waiting...
Edited by coolhi1988 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hai friend gud evening. Thanks for your update and pm. Hey from two days u r remembering our ashloks chemistry from our show once again. For thanks for that. When we read your ff v can feel it in our eyes and heart. Thanks for giving us the treat as old memories.

But one thing you shown to we and astha that shlok loves our drama queen so much. He confessed to astha that he can't live without astha. Nice yaar. Then from show it was different u wrote the throne hit on shloks leg wow and astha fainted because of food water and tiredness wow Sai u r making us so curious but atlast I think astha helped the lady is shloks sister jyothi. Hey this is my guess. Shlok slapped astha wow what r u doing anyway. V trust u so thanks for your sweet update. Continue soon keep writing like this.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 10 years ago

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