Hamari Kahani- AR FF

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys i am a new writer. I am writing a story on our lovely couple ARMAAN RIDHIMA. You can imagine any one of the ridhima whether it is shilpa, sukirti or jennifer😊
I hope you all will like it and i'll not bore you guys. 😉

It will be a short story of 10-15 parts only.

About me - I am a reader of india forum now becoming a writer. U can call me deepi or dips. Thats it.

Most important name of the story is

HAMARI KAHANI

Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 3
Part 3- Page 5
Part 4- Page 6
Part 5(A)- page 8
Part 5(B)- page 9
Part 6(A)- page 10
Part 6(B)- page 11
Part 7(A)- page 12
Important Note- page 13
Part 7(B)- page 14
Part 8(A)- page 15
Part 8(B)- page 16
Part 9. - Page 17
Part 10. - Page 18

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hamari Kahani


Part-1

A girl was sitting in her room getting bored as she has given her 12th exams...finally she opened her fb account but none of her friends are online...she then check her other messages and found a msg from an unknown guy named Armaan Malik..
She reply a Hi to him and immediately got a reply

A: Hey how's you?
G: fn ..u?
A: I m great..is this ur real I.d
G: yes...u have doubt
A: little bit
G: why?
A: Your whole profile doesn't have a single pic of your
G: Ya not posted till yet...as u hv heard about the scandal
A: Ohk...is this ur real name Riddhima
Yeah the girl is none other than riddhima
R: yes if u having doubt then stop chatting with me..
A: ohho gussa ha
R: look Mr. Don't have any interest in talking with you..so bbbye
A: attitude problem
R: yes I have
Then she logout...and got busy with her stuff

After few days she got time to open her I'd and saw 15 msgs from single person...armaan
A: ohk
Kha gyi?
Gussa ho gyi
Are suno to

A- look I m sorry
Plzzz...I will not doubt u ever
Plz rply ...and all stuff

R: uff chipkuuu
And she wait for his rply which didn't came...later that night her messenger pop up and she look at her mobile
A: I m not chipku I was genuinely asking for an apology...but if think this low of me..then you can as I can not change ur mind.
R: ok
A: ??
R: what?
A: just ok
R: so what should I say
A: Nothing gud bye
I m sleeping
R: ok bye
After few minutes she saw armaan was still online
R: soe nhi
A: nope
R: But u said u were sleeping
A: so u r d one who is not interested in chat with me ...what else should I have said
R: nhi aisa to nhi tha
A: acha
R: Ha
A: btw Happy Birthday
R: Thanks but how u know
A: from ur profile
R: ohk
A: so I m d frst one to wish you
R: yes ok now bye...I m getting calls from my friends and family
A: bye...gn...have fun

Later it became their routine to chat on fb when ever they saw each other online and got to know a lot about each other

Riddhima Gupta is 18 years old got passed with good marks in 12th class arts side wanna become teacher...so going to do B.A honor in English...now enjoying her holidays.

Armaan Malik is 20 years old doing B.Tech given 1 year exam waiting for result dropped an year...also enjoying his holidays.

It was Month of July Armaan riddhima was chatting late at night
A: Hey waise do u have any boyfriend?
R: Nhi...aise achanak kyu pucha
A: Bus waise hi
R: Do u have any girlfriend
A: yes...but thi she broke up with me 5 mnths back without giving me any explanation
R: ohh sad...u were feeling low at that time
A: a lot have no body to share my grief at that time .got depressed..thought to suicide at that time..
R: are u mad or what...u never thought of anyone else in your life
A: yes...tbi to ruka
Riddhima feel relax after listening this as she got really disturbed after listening armaan story...here armaan feel good as he saw riddhima got tensed for him
A: acha now tou u trust me naa
R: yes

A: so plz show me ur pic na yar
R: No yar i can't
A: u said u trust me.
R: yes I do but
A: plzzz
R: ok wait
Then she send him a pic of her in red chudidar...
A: u r very cute...
R: umh thanks

Now it's August riddhima college started...armaan was having his vacations till last of August...so riddhima didn't messaged him from two days and now it was armaan birthday he next day and he was trying to sleep when his mobile vibrates

R: Happy Birthday...God Bless you...
A: Thanks ..u remember
R: How can I forgot...
A:
R: kya kr re the
A: sone ki koshish
R: kyu today is ur birthday...u r not getting calls
A: Yes But in no mood to talk to anybody
R: why so?
A: bcoz u didn't messaged me from last two days
R: ohh I m sorry..got busy with college and stuff...but missed u
A: I missed you too
R: ok leave this topic...tell me what gift you want from me
A: jo manguga wo dogi
R: ha kyu nhi
A: then call me and wish me
R: But how can I
A: by dialing my no. In your phone
R: it's not funny armaan
A: ok then leave it
Bbye
Mjhe neend ari h
Gn
And he got ofline
R: armaan suno to
But she didn't get any rply from him so she try to sleep but can't..later at 1 a.m she opened armaan profile and saw his no. Their and with hesitation called him
Armaan mobile ring but he didn't pic it as it was an unknown no. ...but when it ring for two three times he got pissed off and received the call and shouted on phone

A: whose this man disturbing this late night
R: riddhima got scared but managed to say
'Armaan'
A: whose dis
R: uhmnnh Wo ...ar..armaan
A: riddhima
R: hmmm
Armaan got really happy and hete riddhima heart beat rose
A: kyu call kia
R: Happy Birthday
A: Thanks
Silence
A: ok bye
R: kyu
A: jb kuch bologi nhi to or kya khu
R: tum bhi to bol sakte ho na
A: na I m angry on u
R: are ab to maine call bhi kia fr bhi
A: ha fr bhi...u spoiled my mood on my birthday
R: sorry
She said in meek voice as if she will cry any minute
A: hey it's ok I was just faking anger...sorry baby don't cry
R: u idiot here I was feeling guilty and u were making fun of me...go to hell
She burst on him
A: sorry na baby plzz
R: no...now I m not gonna talk to u ever
A: But
R: bhaad me jaao tum and she kept on blabbering
A: I Love You
R: uhh
A: I Love You
Silence on both the side
Riddhima heart skipped a beat after hearing those magical words from him...and her breath goes heavy which armaan can hear easily
A: riddhima...kuch to bolo
R: kya
A: riddhima
R: armaan
A: I Love You...if u don't plzz tell me
R: me too
A: pura bolo na
R: wo armaan
A: I Love You riddhima
R: I Love You too
Armaan have a sigh of relief after listening those words from her...neither of them speak a word after that...later riddhima yawn.
A: Hey so jaao it's late now
R: hmm...gud night
A: gn
R: bye
A: bbye...love u

Hope you like it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello
Nice one
Luved it
Modern generation AR
Luv
Sonia!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey!!!
Such a good start you gave to the story...
Specially the conversation between the two seemed so real...
Excited to know what happens next...
Continue soon!!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww cute looking forward to reading more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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these days i m reading less ff's bt the name Hamari Kahani attracts me coz Hamari Adhuri Kahani is one of my fav movie.. Ok so regarding ss.. Mast hai..
Arman Ridhima chatting.. Ishh mjhey b msg bejta toh paki ko de deti nmbr lolz.. Vry nice.. In ur first attempt u r flying high bt dear pls drag na krna aur negativity dour rakhna.. Try to maintain it's pureness..
Loved it.. Tk cr
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arre wah.
Chatting wala pyaar..
But kya yai possible hai?

Nice start.. Lets see aage kya aayega..
All the best for future updates..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ShahSAIR

these days i m reading less ff's bt the name Hamari Kahani attracts me coz Hamari Adhuri Kahani is one of my fav movie.. Ok so regarding ss.. Mast hai..
Arman Ridhima chatting.. Ishh mjhey b msg bejta toh paki ko de deti nmbr lolz.. Vry nice.. In ur first attempt u r flying high bt dear pls drag na krna aur negativity dour rakhna.. Try to maintain it's pureness..
Loved it.. Tk cr



mujhe kyu ghussa rahi hai beech mai :p ..

Aur reply mat dena kisi aur ka thread hai..
Keep it clean.. Ok..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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is it already posted on fb? cz if eys then i have read it from there
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous start
Very intriguing ...
Cant wait more for next chp !
Continue soon 😊

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