FFllYou'll Remain in my Heart Foreverl~~l Chap-36/Epilogue-Pg.85/86 - Page 67

Originally posted by: aasthaarora

hey my sweetest chocopie! 🤗🤗
It was a marvellous writting of urs..
it had been a great journey throughout this ff.. 😳😳
although i was not on forum earlier but i used to read ur updates as soon as it get posted😳😳
i would lije to point out some special things which i really loved
1.the personal journal of ishani
2.the twins ishara and ansh
3.rashani and alakya(my cutie pies)
4.ranveer and ishani(awww my ishveer ❤️)
5.ishveer moments(u really make me blush,smile and cry along wid them)😊😊
i hope i didnt left anything coz i loved each and every bit of ur ff 😳😳
i wish u all d best wid ur next ff(i m waitin impatiently for it)😳😳
love u so much again
UR BABYGIRL
AASTHA 🤗🤗

Hey babygirl <3

Thank you so much and I'm really happy that you liked it :) And I'm really happy that those were your personal favs. :D I mean, you have given the details of the whole FF xD

Really? Itna achcha laga?😆😆

I'll be writing them, soon :)

Love you loads,
AV

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Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

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Beautiful story dear Aarushi.

If you can please start new one dear.

Twins yippee. ... we will enjoy with our dear story writers.

I read it when you had sent pm, but had not thanked you for holday gift😉😃

Heya!

Thank you so much and I'm writing my next FF/SS :)
And I'm loving the gift!😆😆

And this journey finally draws to an end. 😒😒

Greeeaaat one dear.It was a pleasure to read this FF.you worked really hard and it shows your effort.it's just perfect. Unexplainable. Amazing 😳

Originally posted by: LadyMeringue

And this journey finally draws to an end. 😒😒

Sigh, where do I begin from? Okay, I'll first leave you a review for your final two chapter before I head forward. 😛😛 Ishaani's pregnant again and only she and Nitin knew about it. And the girl can't wait for Ranveer for get back from Pune so that she can tell his the news. 😃😃 Which reminds me that I absolutely love the clues she left him in that box. Brilliant! ⭐️⭐️

And then comes in the epilogue and they have twins! 😉😉 Ha! This reminds me of the time Chandler and Monica's surrogate gives birth to twins and when they come to know about the unexpected kid, Monica goes all, "Hello, we ordered only one!" 🤣🤣 So babies Ishara and Ansh see the daylight and Ishaani finally has a boy to support him. 😳😳 But four girls against once poor chap - he's outnumbered. 😆😆

Could the ending have been any more memorable?

But you know what's truly so special about this FF? 😃😃 Apart from IshVeer's journey, if this FF signifies another journey, it's been that of yours as a writer. You must be tired of hearing this, but I will repeat once more just how far you have come in terms of a writer, and this is just your first FF. 😎😎

Elvish and I often discuss about you (like a pair of proud mommies) and how you've been such an excellent learner throughout and how you receive to criticisms and advices so well. 👍🏼👍🏼 Trust me, this trait of yours will take a long, long way ahead in the future. Just be hardworking and dedicated to your work as you are now, and I'm sure that you have great things destined for you. 👏👏

Splendid, splendid job, sweetheart! 🤗🤗 Your writing has certainly made me hungry for a lot more. And I'm certain that it isn't a stretch to say that you have the potential to really make it big. ☺️☺️

Loads of love,

LM ❤️❤️

It is drawing, sadly😭😭 This was so special to me as this was my first ever FF/story which I had written in my entire life!😭😭

Ishani is pregnant and trust me, I had to think so much for those lines😛😛 And I'm happy that you liked those clues. I wanted it to be different and not a routine one😉😉

That was damn hilarious! "We ordered only one!"🤣🤣 From where was it taken?😆😆 They are day-babies and fikar not, it is always Ranveer for me before Ishani 🤣🤣

That was special for me, actually. The entire journey was so good that even I am able to look through the stages from the first one to the Epilogue😳😳 I'm not beating the trumpet, trust me😉😉

I am not tired of hearing this, actually. I don't know whether I even deserve so much of appreciation, in a first😆😆

You guys even discuss about me?😲😲 Criticisms are always there, from any abgle. It's just the way how you take it. I took your advices, really, really serious😳😳 I don't know what does destiny have in for me...But I will do my best and make it better😳😳

My writing making you hungry? C'mon! Don't joke! 🤣🤣 But, I 'll keep improving as I know this is not my best😆😆

Love
Aarushi

Ps. So, I showed my mom the Prelude of Departed Souls, but she doesn't know that I've written it!😛😛 She was impressed She was like "Achcha tha." I was like "Sach mein Mama?" And she was like "Yeah, it was pretty good. Not the best of course. I like the Epistle one even more." (Trust me, I'm not exaggerating) 😛😛 And I was like "Okay"

My mom doesn't even know that I'm a part of the active forum. She thinks that I'm one of the passive ones😆😆

Originally posted by: Sania03337

Greeeaaat one dear.It was a pleasure to read this FF.you worked really hard and it shows your effort.it's just perfect. Unexplainable. Amazing 😳

Thank you so much Sania🤗🤗 I'm so happy that you liked it :)

Arushi!! You are amazing! And I'm so sorry for my late coming. You know I'm a late lateef and it sucks. :/ Coming to the chapters, they were brilliant. Ishveer and their moments were beautiful, beautiful. I loved their honeymoon part. Wow. *blush* Wow, my girl has grown up! Can't believe you wrote it in bit detail cause I can't think myself to go that way yet. xD haha. The entire part of them going to Manali and before and after that was beautifully done. It felt...adventurous. Them having a free time for themselves was something they both needed. And sigh. They're beautiful. Funny, whenever I see ANYTHING about romance I only imagine Ishveer. A song, a couple in a film or book, I only imagine Ishveer. :D :D

And Nitin and Falguni leading a better and happy life was such a comfort and treat to read. Poor they never got this in the show but thankfully you gave them their happiness. :>

then come the last chapters. You know, I was bit afraid whilst reading them. The way you penned Ishani waiting for Ranveer etc. had me holding my breath for a while but was relieved when Ranveer came back for real (stupid me; crazy ideas and thoughts :D).

Epilogue was perfect. Ishani giving birth to the twins! Even I wanted her to have a boy so that he would support her when his sisters will tease her. ;) but here what I got totally unexpected. This story was beautiful, darling. And I read your dark version, too. It was scary. :| But as your story this FF was brilliant. You've improved so much in just few chapters. I love how you use commas etc. But please don't put so many of them. Whenever you're writing, do proof-read your work and wherever you feel like to stop, put a comma. Otherwise there is no need to include extra punctuation in the writing.

Thank you for thanking us, Arushi. LM and I, I mean. We are so proud of you. <3 How proud, only we both know. :D :D So, here ends this story and I'm excited to read the next FF of yours. Will finish it soon. Happy New Year, and may the New Year bring lots of love, inspiration and joy to you and your family.

P.S. For your previous message, I don't notice dialogs, just notice whenever there's some incorrect language written and I know it (eg. Hindi and English). So yeah. :D
P.P.S. I don't really want to end it but have to finish my rant. Lots of hugs to you, baby.

Originally posted by: Elvish_Hobbit

Arushi!! You are amazing! And I'm so sorry for my late coming. You know I'm a late lateef and it sucks. :/ Coming to the chapters, they were brilliant. Ishveer and their moments were beautiful, beautiful. I loved their honeymoon part. Wow. *blush* Wow, my girl has grown up! Can't believe you wrote it in bit detail cause I can't think myself to go that way yet. xD haha. The entire part of them going to Manali and before and after that was beautifully done. It felt...adventurous. Them having a free time for themselves was something they both needed. And sigh. They're beautiful. Funny, whenever I see ANYTHING about romance I only imagine Ishveer. A song, a couple in a film or book, I only imagine Ishveer. :D :D

And Nitin and Falguni leading a better and happy life was such a comfort and treat to read. Poor they never got this in the show but thankfully you gave them their happiness. :>

then come the last chapters. You know, I was bit afraid whilst reading them. The way you penned Ishani waiting for Ranveer etc. had me holding my breath for a while but was relieved when Ranveer came back for real (stupid me; crazy ideas and thoughts :D).

Epilogue was perfect. Ishani giving birth to the twins! Even I wanted her to have a boy so that he would support her when his sisters will tease her. ;) but here what I got totally unexpected. This story was beautiful, darling. And I read your dark version, too. It was scary. :| But as your story this FF was brilliant. You've improved so much in just few chapters. I love how you use commas etc. But please don't put so many of them. Whenever you're writing, do proof-read your work and wherever you feel like to stop, put a comma. Otherwise there is no need to include extra punctuation in the writing.

Thank you for thanking us, Arushi. LM and I, I mean. We are so proud of you. <3 How proud, only we both know. :D :D So, here ends this story and I'm excited to read the next FF of yours. Will finish it soon. Happy New Year, and may the New Year bring lots of love, inspiration and joy to you and your family.

P.S. For your previous message, I don't notice dialogs, just notice whenever there's some incorrect language written and I know it (eg. Hindi and English). So yeah. :D
P.P.S. I don't really want to end it but have to finish my rant. Lots of hugs to you, baby.

Elvish! How are you doing? And firstly, A very Happy New Year to you and your family :) Secondly, thank you for liking them :) I'm really, really happy :) Well, even I did not expect until I finished it :D :D I wanted to give it a shot. Bas xD And don't start the word. ROMANCE= ISHVEER for me. Even if I think of them, it reminds me of them :D :D Oh My! They are contagious, man! :D

We are never gonna get that! Be it IshVeer being together or NiNi (Amalgamation of Falguni and Nitin. Crazy, I know :D)

Yaar, I already specified that it was the last one. How can you even think of such a weird idea! xD

Unexpected? Was it? Ya! Thankfully, I tried to give something...unexpected :P And did you read that too? It was dark, I know. But was it okay-ish?

Yeah, LM too asked me to proof read it. And I hardly do them. But for the new one, I'm proof reading it.

Thank you for thanking you both? I mean, there's no need to. I am feeling lucky enough to have people like you guys who point out the mistakes in me so that I can rectify it :)

Read it whenever you're free. No issues :)

Ps. I do notice dialogues, pyaar wala ones :P And, it is not ranting, according to me. :)

Awesome writer