Jyeshta Bhrata : An Arjun-Karna TS (Thank you Note pg6) - Page 6

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

read both d parts today
very well described dere emotions
beautiful..

Thanks a lot! 😳

Finally...

Originally posted by: Mnp279

Finally...

Res😛

I know Di you will kill me

But will unress a long time ahead😃

Unres soon.😉

Ramya, first of all, a big sorry for not commenting on this earlier though I had read it. It is one of the most beautiful and unique pieces I have read. You are an amazing writer and your ideas are so original. 👏 👏
I loved the whole concept of your story and also the way it is written. Your writing has a depth and maturity to it that is quite refreshing. ⭐️

Amazing!!! 👏

Sorry for being very late.😆 Beautifully written story that turned out to be a surprise for me as I love both Karna and Arjuna. The language is simple and lucid, yet captured emotions of both brothers very precisely. If my guess is not wrong, you did great effort in writing down Karna's words and you successfully did it. That deserves special recognition.👏 And you certainly have a unique style of writing and novel set of concepts. Keep your writing going.👍🏼

Originally posted by: KURT15

Ramya, first of all, a big sorry for not commenting on this earlier though I had read it. It is one of the most beautiful and unique pieces I have read. You are an amazing writer and your ideas are so original. 👏 👏
I loved the whole concept of your story and also the way it is written. Your writing has a depth and maturity to it that is quite refreshing. ⭐️

Amazing!!! 👏

Its ok Geetha chechi. Thank you so much for this lovely comment. You think this was unique, deep and mature ,wow! It really means a lot coming from you!Thanks a lot!😳😳

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra

Sorry for being very late.😆 Beautifully written story that turned out to be a surprise for me as I love both Karna and Arjuna. The language is simple and lucid, yet captured emotions of both brothers very precisely. If my guess is not wrong, you did great effort in writing down Karna's words and you successfully did it. That deserves special recognition.👏 And you certainly have a unique style of writing and novel set of concepts. Keep your writing going.👍🏼

Its ok Jamy.😊 Good to know that you like both but i have a bit extra liking for Arjuna.😳 I always like keeping it simple and i am glad you liked my style.😳 Yes, some amount of effort was needed in karna's part because as i said, my extra bit of liking for Arjuna and the fear of overdoing him from karna's pov. You thinking i was successful is really a huge complement for me!Thank you so much for everything!😳😳

UNRESS

Originally posted by: Mnp279

UNRESS

A brilliant write up!

Your masterpiece!!

Completely blown away!

Just wow!

Never thought what Karn felt when he was choosing Duryodhan!

But now I can understand the dilemma and adamantness here...

Mind blowing di!

It's too good

Love

Mahishee😃

Thanks a ton sweet heart! You always make me go 😳 😳 with your comments and when you say you are my fan and all. I mean i know i am not that good. 😳
Thank you so so much! I am glad you could comprehend it because of my write up but i still know i am far from the perfect thing.