Ishra OS: Beauty Spots Last Part on Pg 26 updtd on 26/2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes the os torture of mine is back and this time based on a very recent scene from the show which you all must have guessed by now from the title.

Though the scene was very small,I couldn't resist from writing something on it.

It was quite bold and the guttery mind of mine got activated.
(Too active recently...I know)

Note              - Pg 18
Last Part      -Pg 26

Hope you like it.

Some parts(mostly lines of show) is in hindi to keep the essence (with subtitles)rest all in english.

                                 Beauty Spots

They sat in the car and Raman was driving.
I-Mr.Chadda is very sharp,so quickly he found that the handwriting of the lady changed unlike my husband who knows nothing about me,not even my birthday.
She said faking annoyance

R-Tera pati tera up down left right sab kuch jaanta hai.
( Your husband knows your left right up down )

I-Acha?
As the car reached the signal,the car halted.

R-You are challenging me...Me the mighty RKB...

I-I didn't challenge you

R-Madrasan tumhe mere jitna besharam aur bemisaal aashiq kahin nahi milega.
(You will not find any crazy or shameless lover like me)

He instantly slid his hand around her and pulled her closer.



R- Because Chaddha may know about the different writing styles and if a woman is lefty or right.
But up and down,left and right mere biwi ko kahan kahan aur kitne beauty spots mujhe pata hai(Where all and how many beauty spots you have I know)
Should i prove it to you?

I-Nahi mujhe nahi jaanana.
(No I don't want to know)

As she tried to escape from his hold feeling very shy.

R-So do you accept that mere jitna besharam and dilphek aashiq koi nahi hai
(There is no other shameless and lovelost lover like me)



I-Koi nahi hai
(There is no one)

As she giggled,she tried to pull back he kept on pulling her closer.
I-Leave me na...public and car romance,someone will misunderstand us as GF and BF.

R-So what's the problem in that,I am very much young and handsome and you don't look too much bad yourself.

I-Then traffic signal romance,do you leave any place for no romance.

R-Now what I can do.My house,no privacy...somebody has to come and interrupt.
Then this is the only choice I have and the only chance I get.

He started driving again.
I-Aap kabse itne besharam ho gaye?
(When did you become so shameless?)

R-I told you na and here also its all because of you.Dont know what magic you have done on me.

She smiled naughtily.
R-Now only you can think of all this.At home you become this innocent girl,now...

I-Reverse effects you see.

R-By the way...

I-Hmm...

R-Since I know all your beauty spots which you have, I should give you some more spots or rather marks which you will remember again and again.

I-Chee raavan kumar...
Kuch bhi you are saying in public.
Have some shame.

R-2/10 score also I have to improve na...

I-Dont tell me you are still behind that,it was about the idly not you.

R-No but seriously what would you score me for that and after that sessions
He asked huskily while coming closer to her 

I-Raman...
How shameless can you get,you are...
Saying so she hid herself in him

R-I am being shameless with my wife only na,not with someone else.

I-Dare you be also.

R-Ooh...jealous and possessive jkr...always a delight to see.
I love it when your nose turns red...so cute you look.
I just want to bite you.

I-Raman...bas na...please

R-Why,finding me hard to resist.

I-Plleasee don't overestimate yourself.

As he took a turn and parked the car in a dark parking lot with no one around.

R-Really,so you mean when I do this you don't feel anything.
As he started making whirling  patterns in her palms,she nodded negatively.

R-This?
He started tracing her facial features' outline,letting his finger linger around longer near her lips.
He continued teasing her more affected more,touching her at all places.

Saying Ishita was not affected would be an understatement.
She was thankful that they were sitting or else she would have melted into a pool all due to him.
She was having lots of difficulties trying to maintain a straight face when inside she had already surrendered to him before it even began.

I-So...do you accept your loss Raman Kumar Bhalla.

R-I had already lost my full soul to you,then this is nothing.

I-Me too...but this is not the time to get emotional.

R-Then what is this time for?
He said going closer to her.

But was interrupted by a phone call 
R-Offo...your mobile.Next time keep it switched off whenever we go out together alone.

I-How can I keep it switch off like that.

R-Arre now pick it up.

I-Hmmf...Raavan kumar...
Who is it?

R-When will you pick it up...God...

Saying so he grabbed the phone.
R-Mini home minister.

I-Who is that now?

R-Your chamchi and my dadimaa...Ruhi..

He put the phone on speaker.
Ru-Hello ishima...where are you?

Before ishita could say anything he kept his hands on her mouth and gestured her to keep quiet.
R-Beta ishima is not there.Papa here...

Ru-Ohh papa

R-Haan beta,she's a little busy and we will be late in reaching home.

Ru-But I wanted to sleep with ishima today and she promised she will tell me my favourite story today.

R-She will try to come soon

Ru-I want her to come fast...

R-Just like her father
He smiled thinking about it.

R-Acha baba,she will come soon.

Ru-Bye papa

R-Bye beta

As he cut the call,he loosened his hold on her.
I-What was that Raman?

R-I want to spend time with you and you are wasting my time sitting in the car and talking randomly.

I-I am wasting time...very nice huh..

R-Anyways what were you telling when the call came.

I-Me...umm...Yaa...
I was saying that...

Saying so she pulled him towards her by his collar shocking him but he grinned at this.

I-I can resist you...but you cannot resist me.

R-Who said?

I-Oh really...now you want me to show you.
Well then...

R-What is there to show,I cannot resist you ever.That kapdon ki thaan of yours...my favourite outfit of yours,giving me full view of that waist of yours on which I always imagine my hands playing,your deep blouses...giving me that look of your sexy back.
And those sheer transparent saris of yours which are reserved only for me with that deep neck in the front.
The western outfits are no less,the navy blue gown and my favourite the off shoulder pink one gown.
And...

I-Bas Raman...how much will you say.

As she put her hand on his mouth to stop him from speaking further.
I-Chalo now my baby will be waiting for me.

R-What about your this baby?

He said pointing to himself.

I-This baby will wait until my chotu sleeps,then...

He didn't let her complete.
R-Then we both will play our favourite game for the whole night.

I-Raman...what did you have in the morning today.You are not stopping only.
Thank God we reached home

R-Privacy gone now.

As they reached home and when Ishita was about to get down.
He pulled her back inside.

R-I am leaving you now so that you come back soon after putting Ruhi to sleep.

I-I will try my best

R-No trying you have to come fast.

I-Isnt it better if Ruhi sleeps with us. 

R-What?
No

I-Acha baba don't worry I will come soon.
Till then...
She pulled him and gave a quick peck on his lips and before he could comprehend what happened she went off.
Before she entered the building she glanced behind to see him standing near the car door,he smiled and then 
R-I will be waiting 

She smiled and went upstairs while he parked the car.
R-My crazy jkr...what have you done to me...
Pagal bana diya hai mujhe.
(You have made me mad)
But still you are the best thing that happened to me.
I love you 

Just a random one...don't know how it turned out...

Sorry if it was not upto your expectations...😭

Please do take a moment and give in your views...both good and bad
Will be waiting for them 😊


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Amazing. It was refreshing.
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Full flirting ..
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Hayee amazing OS traveller😳
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It was awesome OS Hetvi 👏
I literally imagined this..
Way to go girl..
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amazing os dear
the scenes are superb

you keep on writing many like these

thanks for pm
please update soon
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Wow amazing puttar and biwi in full gutter mode loved it
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Awesome OS dear
Keep coming these type of oses. Really feels refreshing. Loved it.
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Awesome one hetvi
Puttar and wifey in full Guttery mode
Loved to read more os like this from u
Thanks for expanding that ishra moment
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sooo cute!  i love that you brought back that 2/10 rating that the un-creatives nicely forgot (😡)!