Rewriting Yhm: Living for each other:pt-14;pg-129;15/11/16

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swathin

@swathin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

awesome update
this should b the actual way things should turn out
loved it

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Maya

@mayasun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: shobiya
Wow maya u r just awesome i love this story and i literally want this to happen in the story . As a girl ishita should fight for her dignity but cvs are hell bent on showing her mahanta

coming back to the story i really like how ishita stood for herself .u potrayed her chracter very well

and lol kali mata ki roop i loved it

ye raman bi na jab dekho kuch na kuch ghadbad karta rehta hai

u portrayed every chracter perfectly but i want raman realise his love and bring back ishita to the house please yaar maya

Hi Shobiya,

Thanks, I didn't have any problem with Raman defending her in the show but I wanted her to stand up for herself first and then get help from others.

Raman is not at fault for saying those things because it is valid if you think from his POV because he was already betrayed once so trusting others would not come easily.

Raman already realized his mistake in this OS but I was not planning to continue this one but I will think about it how Raman brings back Ishita and write about it but cannot make a promise I will definitely do it.

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Maya

@mayasun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: kaa1202
It was awesome Maya..
U nailed it like anything yaar..
Now waiting to see how Raman makes everything right..
Plz cont soon..

Hi Karthikk,

Thanks while writing this one you only came to my mind because you always encourage me to write on tracks which has already been aired.

As to Raman bringing her back I never even thought about it but will give it a try but definitely cannot promise because I have already three stories pending which needs to be updated

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Maya

@mayasun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb
@Mayasundar
It was awesome yaar... 👏
It'd have been so good to see this kind of Ishu in that old track other than a weak, helpless, crybaby Ishu. It was too good!
Now I'm so eager to see how Raman is going to play his part to mend their relationship.
Do update the next part soon 😳

Hi Gayathry,

Thanks, My motto in life is you should stand up for yourself first and then take the help of others later that is what I tried to bring it in to this story glead you like the concept.

As for as Raman bringing her back I never thought about it but everyone is asking for it. I will try and write it but definitely cannot promise I would do that.

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Maya

@mayasun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: swathin
awesome update
this should b the actual way things should turn out
loved it

Hi Swathin,

Thanks , glad you liked the concept

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Maya

@mayasun

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: maduragymhasium
nice idea dear

Hi Lakshmi(I am not sure that this is your name but in a different thread I saw some one addressing you by it but if this is not your name I am so Sorry)

Thanks, glad you enjoyed the story

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Maya

@mayasun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
good..

Hi Surya, Thanks

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Sharmin

@fSharm

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Thanx alot for the pm dr...
Its just awesome... But vl never happen in yhm...

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Perfect

Woman have dignity

Respect

Luv it

Keep writing

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Maya

@mayasun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: fathimaSharmin
Thanx alot for the pm dr...
Its just awesome... But vl never happen in yhm...

Hi Fathima,

Thanks, This is an already aired episode they showed it in a different way but this is how I would have liked it but many of them would not have liked it because it centers around Ishita and she is the one to solve her problem.