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Krishna and Sudhama Story - The Golden Symphony of Friendship
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Krishna and the tale of hundred offences
Duleep T. Final -(SZ v [East Z:(158/3*)( Mohan 33*)
Krishna and Arjuna " A Divine Bond of Unwavering Devotion"
Krishna's Silent Watch
Originally posted by: picadally
Lilu well written just needed to be a little more crisp i hope its ok if i said that 😊
But the part where kabir reveals rupan's plan of framing nisha was well thought of. It wud hv been extremely interesting if u wud hv lingered with the sudden change in nisha's behaviour a wee bit moreOn the whole good story but missed the bond style romance 😉
See whom I found...Nattzyy...🤗...@Red - Of course, its oky..😊. I will keep your points in mind when I write next time...@Blue - Thank you Adhyapikaji...😳@Orange - I agree, there had to be more contrast in two behaviours...I think I was writing in too much hurry... On a free day I'll write the parts...@Green - Thank you dear...😳...I guess that is becoz somewhere Kabir is just Kabir...😆
Originally posted by: picadally
Aww lilu 🤗I felt like suggesting because u write well, ur stories are different u hv a lot of scope and i appreciate u for gracefully accepting my suggestion🤗Sure u cn come up with more parts on this.Sweetheart kabir is nt just kabir he is k kabir 😉😆
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