SwaSan SS : We Found Love (Ch 4A, 4B, Pg 4)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys !!!
I am a diehard SwaSan Fan and I have decided to write an SS on our fav SwaSan...
This is a complete different story...
The chapters will be short...

Characters :

Swara Gadodia ( A bubbly, loving and sweet girl, always confident, never cries, is very brave and loves everyone, believes in love).
Sanskar Maheshwari ( A smart,cool and nice guy with a golden heart, never believed in love until he met Swara ).
Lakshya Maheshwari (Sanskar's brother and Ragini's BF)
Ragini Gadodia (Swara's sister and Lakshay's GF)

Prologue:

He entered through the College Gates, It was the Fresher's Day, the day when the College started it's new session , new faces coming through the College Gates and a whole new year awaiting the students.

He was walking through the corridor searching for his friends, he wasn't paying attention, walking absentmindedly through the corridor he bumped into something or rather... Someone.

Before he could process what was happening, his arms almost involuntarily held her waist to prevent her from falling, and her hands took hold of his shoulders, and it was then he saw Her Eyes, those brown orbs so heart warming that made his heart melt at their very sight, her angelic face made his heart stop for a moment.

They both were lost into each others eyes, when suddenly the College bells rung and she blinked her eyes, he too broke his trance.

He supported her up. "I am Sorry," she said. Her sweet voice rang in his ears. "I was in a hurry and didn't pay attention to where I was going... I am sorry" she said bringing him out of his trance again.

"No, I m sorry, I should have paid attention." He said finally trying to get words out of his mouth. She smiled, his heart did a somersault.

"Oh shit, I am getting late !!! Bye ", she said in almost panic but even her panic sounded musical to him and before he could ask her name she had already gone. He smacked his forehead but then smiled thinking about her.

His heart knew that there was something about this girl that attracted him and he very well knew that he was going to meet her again and this time he would surely ask her name.

He started walking through the corridor smiling and thinking about her.


The End !!!!


So, this was the Prologue.
Hope you guys like it.
If you like it then let me know if I should continue this...
So comment and let me know if I should start this story.



INDEX

CHAPTER 1 - PG 2
CHAPTER 2 - PG 3
CHAPTER 3 - PG 4
CHAPTER 4A - PG 4
CHAPTER 4B - PG 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice start
continue soon and do PM me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start...Continue...Plz PM me if possible!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys !!!!
I am overwhelmed by your response.
Well now that you all have liked the Prologue and want me to start the story, so, I have decided to give this SS a title of your choice.


Here are 3 of my choices which I think would be suitable as a title to this SS, comment your fav one and the one with the highest comments would be the title.


Here are the 3 titles of my choice. Choose and comment for your fav one.

1. SwaSan SS : Thinking About You
2. SwaSan SS : You Taught Me Love
3. SwaSan SS : We Found Love

So comment your fav title from the above 3 options and let me give this story a title.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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well hi dear...i like the 3rd one we found love...coz i find it a mutual love(from both side)...
Anyways all r good...
n pm me fr ur next update
simi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear,
We found love sounds good for me and even other 2 is also nice and don't forget to pm me plz😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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all are nice but I like 3rd on WE FOUND LOVE
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Guys !!!!
So, Here is Chapter 1, hope you guys like it...

CHAPTER 1
Sun rays were making their way through the curtains of a room, disturbing the sleep of an angel. Her brown eyes opened and a smile made its way to her lips, she sat up and looked at her room. She missed her room.

She was in 9th when she went to Bangalore for her and stayed at her Mama's house there. He loved her more than his own daughter but still there was not even a single day when she had not missed her family.

"Shona!", her mother's voice brought her out of her thoughts and a smile crept up on her face. After so many years she was at her Home.

And to stay with her family she had decided to get her further studies done in Kolkata and being a bright student had got her admission in Kolkata's best College , St. Xavier's College.

So, with a smile she got ready for her first day at College and went downstairs to greet her Mom, Dad and her lovely sister Ragini.

While on their way to College, Ragini said, " Swara aaj main bohot excited hu tumhe finally Lakshya se face to face milane ke liye, aaj tak tumne sirf usse Skype or baat ki hai aaj tum dono Milne jaa rahe ho.. I am so excited. I hope tumhe woh pasand aaye."

"Ragini, maine bhale hi Lakshya se sirf Skype pe baat ki hai but maine jitna use jaana hai woh bohot accha ladka hai, aur shaadi ke baad woh tera bohot khyaal rakhega... I am sure." , Swara said.

Ragini and Lakshya both loved each other and even their parents agreed to their relationship and the final verdict was that after completing their studies and making their career they both would get married.

As they reached the College, Lakshya and his friends met them. "Hi Jaan" Lakshya greeted Ragini and pulled her towards him. "Hi Baby", Ragini greeted Lakshya and pecked his cheek. " Go get a room guys !", their group said in unison while Swara laughed at their flushed faces.

Ragini introduced Swara to their group and Lakshya again. Swara was really glad that Lakshya was going to be Ragini's life partner because despite his cool attitude he was a very nice guy.

Swara then went to collect her time table and schedule for the lectures. She was walking through the corridor to reach her class and also checking her schedule and wasn't paying attention where she was going, when suddenly she bumped into something or rather... Someone.

She was about to fall when two strong arms held her waist and almost involuntarily her hands took hold of his shoulders for support, it was then she saw His Eyes, his smiling face.


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"Sanskar!", a figure turned in his bed and lazily woke up, his brown eyes still in slumber, he stretched his arms, and stood up and got ready.

He went downstairs greeted his family and went to his college with his brother Lakshya. This guy with Lakshya was none other than Sanskar.

He entered through the College Gates, It was the Fresher's Day, the day when the College started it's new session , new faces coming through the College Gates and a whole new year awaiting the students.

He was walking through the corridor searching for his friends, he wasn't paying attention, walking absentmindedly through the corridor he bumped into something or rather... Someone.

Before he could process what was happening, his arms almost involuntarily held her waist to prevent her from falling, and her hands took hold of his shoulders, and it was then he saw Her Eyes, those brown orbs so heart warming that made his heart melt at their very sight, her angelic face made his heart stop for a moment.

They both were lost into each others eyes, when suddenly the College bells rung and she blinked her eyes, he too broke his trance.

He supported her up. "I am Sorry," she said. Her sweet voice rang in his ears. "I was in a hurry and didn't pay attention to where I was going... I am sorry" she said bringing him out of his trance again.

"No, I m sorry, I should have paid attention." He said finally trying to get words out of his mouth. She smiled, his heart did a somersault.

"Oh shit, I am getting late !!! Bye ", she said in almost panic but even her panic sounded musical to him and before he could ask her name she had already gone. He smacked his forehead but then smiled thinking about her.

His heart knew that there was something about this girl that attracted him and he very well knew that he was going to meet her again and this time he would surely ask her name.

He started walking through the corridor smiling and thinking about her.


So, this was it...
This was Chapter 1...
Hope you guys like it and please comment and let me know your views.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nandu...
Its really refreshing...college romance has its own charm..
I like the fact that here raglak are couple already.
Waiting for the next update
love
simi

p.s.-send a pm 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys !!!
I am glad that you all liked the Prologue as well as chapter 1, so here I am with a note to clear any doubts regarding the story...

NOTE

Swara's age - 19
Sanskar's age - 19
Lakshya's age - 20
Ragini's age - 20

Swara went to Bangalore for her schooling and everything is completely fine in her family, no dadi-dida disputes, no bengali-marwari dispute, she and Ragini both are half bengalis...

Sanskar and Lakshya are the best of friends.

Both the Gadodia's and Maheshwari's have no problem regarding RagLak's marriage.

Swara who stayed in Bangalore has never met anyone from the Maheshwari family except for Lakshya.

Both the Maheshwari's and Gadodia's are rich but still remain down to earth and never show off their wealth and power.

So, this was Note and I hope you all guys are clear regarding the SS...

Please do comment on my updates and yes I will be uploading Chapter 2 very soon.

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