ArHi Short Story: Things beyond our control!!

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Rish_Rubles

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I'm so late, sorry! I had read this lovely TS long back but ... *sigh*

This was I guess the loveliest story i have ever read from you you know the ambiance it created while reading. They both were married yet love bloomed between them that too in such unfavorable circumstances. From their meet to the budding friendship, every words seemed dipped in innocence!

And the emotional overwhelming feeling exactly when she took off her wig, it was so unexpected but it depicted her strong personality, I was so awed! Her character was layered like an onion, so many shades to herself.

And finally, a very heartening journey had an end which I didnt want it to happen but it did 🤔 it was seriously very overwhelmingly-beautiful, the beauty of nature, the beauty of love. I loved it *sniffs*

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lechuarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

👏👏...Chechi...U r so good in writing angst type of stories...

Arnav a divorcee

his wife cheated on him wid his friend😡😡😡..

Khushi akele...separated from her hubby..is she a divorcee ?? poor gal..😭..suffering from some serious disease.. cancer patient???😕..

Awe both find a special connection and peace in each other company. 😳..

khushi is pregnant😲😲

waiting for RES1 to Unres...

Advanced 🤗xmas ashamsakal chechi...

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lechuarshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

2nd post...

She is a cancer patient...😭

they both open up to each other, painful past... their Bakwaas life partners..

their journey started...Rosy auntie, Arnav and khushi...and the unborn baby.

They both confessed their love and now very much happy..😉...

Aloo is so cute...

but at the end Arnv khushi hamesha in their chotti si dunia...👏👏

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bubulswt

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Posted: 10 years ago

wonderful story one of best ff i ever read 👏

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Aishu

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Posted: 10 years ago

Such a sweet story it is!
Such an amazing writer you're!
Loved reading every bit of it:-)

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Gosh! This was an excellently written. If this is called a comeback, then It is bang on and too good. A very sensitive topic taken and executed very exceptionally well. The sorrow when one's loved ones don't love them. This was the case with both and the two strangers who fell in love very beautifully. The lost love and closed chapter was once again opened and filled with unrequited love. Certain things are definitely beyond our control like Khushi getting a disease and They both loving. You portrayed that very beautifully. And I am glad that having cancer didn't stop her from living and him from loving her. I would definitely rate this story above all the stories of yours. It was heart warming to read this one story of two beaten by life meeting under strange circumstances and being United by fate! I loved this to bits and I liked the fighter Khushi. Rosy aunty is as rosy inside and out. You were fabulous with this one. Love you and this story chechi <3 and yet again she has had a relapse, but she is living. Certainly life has to be lived and cherished with the right person! Thanks for giving us such an ultimate one.