Story: NEW LIFE...Thread 1

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everybody, I am a new member in this forum, and an ardent Jodha Akbar fan as well😊. I was a silent reader of this forum when the serial was running and had thought to open an account to join the interesting discussions many times, but however it never happened...
Then our Jodha Akbar ended, with quite a dissatisfaction from my part as a viewer; however, it has been quite a long, but still the attachment, the addiction and the nostalgia has not get over!😳

From that addiction, attachment and love for the show, I had started to write a story on Jodha Akbar some months back, which is just a trial of continuation of a track our cvs left untouched... Somehow becoming fed-up with the so-called creativity of the creatives I had started to write from my own, and nowadays it has become my new addiction to miss Jodha Akbar less...😛
I was nervous and somehow was hesitating to post the story in this forum, but at last came out of my hesitation and want to share it here, in this land of Akdha, to all my fellow Akdha fans... 😃

So here goes the prologue...

About one year has passed since Hassan and Hussain's death. Everyone has become normal except that two person whose love had been grown stronger with the birth of their babies...The sudden demise of two tiny kids has scattered Jodha and Jalal's life and they are now habituated of living their lives without each-other...But they both have lost the cause of their lives...Where Jalal is trying hard to pacify the anger, grief and depression of his heart by drowning himself completely in the works and duties and destroying his own entity of being a man, Jodha is living a reluctant life being aloof with all the happenings around her being succumb under the load of depression...at this moment an opportunity comes to unite them again...to make them feel that they are still in love with each-other, which is the main base of their life...The story of how two individuals, devotedly in love with each other, again learnt to find the way of their lives by taking each-other's hands in hand...The portion which the writers of the show Jodha Akbar had forgotten , I try to write that in my own language...

My first attempt in a different language, so plz excuse me for the silly grammatical mistakes especially in Hindi...And don't forget to post a comment with your valuable feedback after hitting like button, if you like my effort...

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CHAPTER 18 AT PAGE 82
CHAPTER 19 AT PAGE 96
CHAPTER 20 AT PAGE 120
CHAPTER 21 AT PAGE 133


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sho123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice concept dear.
welcome to forum
all the best for ur story
do pm me dear whenever u post plus what's ur name
Edited by sho123 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey buddy welcome to ja forum
we r glad that u finally broke ur silence and posted ur story.
oh yes hassan hussain track ,this track was really messed up and u know i left the show after this track 😆.
Anyways Nice prologue this sounds interesting
pls continue soon
and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dear..
welcome to JA forum 😊
Congratulation fr ur frst ever story dear..
prologue is interesting..hmm aftr hassan hussain death track...i was also nt happy with JA creative writers thy md tht track a mess...really curious n excited to read a diffrnt side..
please do continue soon n if possible please do pm me 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyy buddy...
Welcome to the forum 🤗
congrats for ur first story 🥳
btw i've already read ur story on facebook 😉
but will read n comment again...:-)
Please pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to d forum dear...
congrats for ur 1st ff...
ur idea behind it is superb. ..
update 1st part soon.
do pm me to plz...
thansk u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sho123

nice concept dear.
welcome to forum
all the best for ur story
do pm me dear whenever u post plus what's ur name

Thank u dear...😊 I will post soon and definitely will pm you...
My name is Debastuti. And what is your name?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Welcome to d forum dear...
congrats for ur 1st ff...
ur idea behind it is superb. ..
update 1st part soon.
do pm me to plz...
thansk u...

Thanks dear...I will do pm you whenever I will start to post.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajalparijat

Heyy buddy...
Welcome to the forum 🤗
congrats for ur first story 🥳
btw i've already read ur story on facebook 😉
but will read n comment again...:-)
Please pm me whenever u update

Thank you dear...
Wow so you are reading it already? Ok koi baat nehi, I will wait for your comment here too.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


Thank u dear...😊I will post soon and definitely will pm you...
My name is Debastuti. And what is your name?

my name is sherry
if I am not wrong u r posting this story on fb right
Edited by sho123 - 9 years ago

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