ISHRA II OS JUDE DO DIL KUCH AISE II epilogue on page 21 dec/29

Hey my dear friends...

So I am again comes up with a new story to bother you all... I hope you all will like it.. do comment and long one... So enough of my banters here go the prologue... THANKS SUSH... i love this title...

ISHRA OS: JUDE DO DIL KUCH AISE...

PROLOGUE:

Vandita: are you sure ishu??? Really you want to marry raman...

Ishita: I am sure vandu...

Vandita: but you does not know him... look its better for him that he get shifted to rehabilitation center... its not safe dear.. he acts violent... He is mad ishu try to understand its just an infatuation..

Ishita screams: he is not mad vandu... he is alright.. he only need love...and I love him truly... dekhna wo theek hojaye ga

Vandita: I am scared ishu... jab wo theek hoga to tumhain bhool jayega...

Ishita: nahe aisa nahe hoga...

Raman comes there holding a Barbie doll in his hands and says: guriya... guriyaa kahan ho tum??? He stumbles and was about to fall but ishita holds him...

Raman: kahan thi tum.. kabse dhoondh raha hoon... Tum bhi muje choor dogi???

Ishita firmly holds his hand and says: I will never leave your hand raman... never...

 

That's it... I hope you will love the prologue... will post the os when I get some good time to write and post... waiting for your lovely response...

OS: JUDE DO DIL KUCH AISE (updated)

epilogue updated

 

Edited by ishrasoul - 8 years ago

prologue posted... waiting for comments...

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Me first...me first...me first



Coming to the prologue...;

Awe...such a cute start 😳
RKB with Barbie doll 🤣
I couldn't help but laugh yaar...!!!! I just couldn't help place KP there...doing such antics 🤣🤣🤣
But on a serious note, he's so fragile 😔
Hope Ishu will be able to help him recover...
The main thing, I'm praying that he should remember her and her immense love even so he recovers 🤔
In spite of all these, I know he may forget her. if so, I want to know how you're going to make him remember her.
*sigh*
You've gotta do a lot in this OS girl... 😉
I'm waiting...
Update soon...

PS. I tried to give long review... This is what I could manage 😆

PPS. Please add English Subtitles...😳

Love you Rida...

Gaya3Edited by Gaya3sb - 8 years ago

Nice start dear

New n interesting prologue plss update soon

Originally posted by: kras

Nice start dear

Very emotional

Very different concept

But what happened to raman

Why is he like that

Originally posted by: Rayaland

New n interesting prologue plss update soon

Hey Rida It is beautiful concept ...

Ishita will take care of Raman...will love him...will heal his wounds.

But The question is...why Raman is in that position???

& How Ishita know him...

Ishita is Raman's Guriya...so because of her he is in that situation or he is consider Ishita as someone else...

But I am afraid of Your Twists...Rida... What if Raman will leave Ishita after he will be alright ...

I know I am over thinking ...Continue Soon...But the title is OS????

Originally posted by: prayosha

Hey Rida It is beautiful concept ...

Ishita will take care of Raman...will love him...will heal his wounds.

But The question is...why Raman is in that position???

& How Ishita know him...

Ishita is Raman's Guriya...so because of her he is in that situation or he is consider Ishita as someone else...

But I am afraid of Your Twists...Rida... What if Raman will leave Ishita after he will be alright ...

I know I am over thinking ...Continue Soon...But the title is OS????

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

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