Collaboration Fiction : Mystery of History (Aham Double Role) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update...⭐️⭐️⭐️...Rajveer and his love Monika were getting engaged...🥳...Monika is a middle class girl who has a very good heart...😎...Rajveer is a Suryavanshi whose work is to save the people from bad people...👍🏼...He met Monika on a train and seeing her kind nature fell in love with her...😉...after their engagement ceremony they both went to spend some time together when a bullet hit Monika's heart and killed her...😲...she laid dead in Rajveer's arms...😭...the murderer ran away from there...😡...Rajveer became stiff after that and his only aim was to find his love's killer...👏👏👏...He didn't want anybody's help but Samrat decided to help him......finally Rajveer found the killer and eradicated him at once......loved it...❤️❤️❤️...waiting 4 the next update......thank u 4 pm...😃...pls continue soon...😊...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A lovely chapter..👏

Rajveer's character very well sketched 👍🏼 it reminds me some traits Arya Stark from Game of Thrones. After losing her loved ones, she too became like this. However, her struggle was more than Rajveer as she was just a little orphan girl in a man dominated society..

But her inner struggle was same as Rajveer...

after reading Rajveer and writing Durjay I just remember one famous quote from Game of Thrones, "Winter is Coming"

[read a battle is coming]

and I am sure it would be an epic battle because you can't make your hero lose and my villain hates to lose..😉

The coming characters are interesting... write them soon. I am a big Hiten Gauri shipper. Can't imagine they could have a big daughter like Sona 😭 However, as far as they are together it doesn't matter 😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Astoria

P.S:You and Panchu should join hands and write down a novel.It will surely end up becoming a bestseller.⭐️


awwn you deserve a big hug 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoseFairy



@Ashtoria dear you were pretty quick and am sorry that i am late in replying. i bow to you for such encouraging comment and honoured to get reader like you. honestly after Durjay i was in doubt whether Raj will be able to impress. i am glad that i am successful to some extent. well that is the major contrast between Rajveer and Durjay. even though they possess same face and traits they are in opposite path given to same situation. but about Durjay he hadnt become what he is for his childhood tragedy. notice he didn't feel bad that his grandmom and villagers died becoz of him even after growing up. he is happy he could overpower those terrorists and just not a poor boy tagged as surviver. he is what he is not becoz of those terrorists but becoz of him own. on the contrary Raj has grownup seeing blood for honour as well. he lost his father too. but he is standing against evil. its just becoz its in his nature. he broke down avenging Monica's death. he didnt relish killing the murderers. its just contradicting nature of the two.
about writing book. well only barrier is time and money.
btw you didnt comment on the character sketch 2? you didnt check it?


Aru you are crazy..

Hero means hope so people like them instantly..😃 and you have written Rajveer very well 👍🏼

I was doubtful about Durjay, especially about posting his character in IF... and you know why 😆

Durjay hates losing, he hates being helpless, which he was when the terrorists killed his parents..

In that tender age, he was barely aware of feelings of right and wrong.. he loved to play games and hated losing. So as a grown up he made sure to become DURJAY... No matter whatever it takes.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing update Aru 👏 ⭐️
It was such a tragedy for Rajveer😭...the bullet meant for him ultimately took the love of his life...on his engagement day...it was so sad...that innocent Monica who wanted to make the world a beautiful place to live was taken away from him...the bright light and hope...taken away from him forever. You have aptly described his reaction towards his loss and what this grave loss has ultimately made him. Atleast he got a friend like Samrat who did not abandon him even when Rajveer pushed everyone away.

Aru, SRJ as Samrat is a great choice. Aham & SRJ as friends, colleagues & dashing IB officers will be great to imagine 😳

Nice character sketch. I think ur next update will be with these characters.

Continue your next part soon 😛

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