Ashi FF://Dominated Love Chapter 19 is Up.*completed* - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago


Love the update dear






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Posted: 9 years ago
Three deaths, whose ? Looks like they were murders, but was it Dadi ? Who killed whom ? Looks ike only when that truth is out, they Anjali and Arnav will know of how misplaced their hatred was towards Mira and Khushi, but will it be too late..?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aaashijii🤗

Really loved it 👏 but yeh kya😲..u gave only past 😕

I seriously am hating asrs dad now..I mean how can he even think about any other lady after starting a conjugal family life already😡. I m telling u..use yaha ksa bhejo..gardan uda denge aisa karne ki koshis ki to😡

And wats wrong with anjali man😕..she knows r8 that it was her dad that started things then where the hell is to mira blamed for...really back dated thinking of CINICAL PEOPLE😡

And yeh arnav..he knew everything then why is he hurting khushi..this is so wrong..u shouldn't be soo blinded with emotions to not see the truth n If u did act oblivious to this

I do feel bad for lav though coz she was used against her will...thanks to this jerk asr but thankfully he is still loyal to khushi...I m happy for that ...wonder wat more evilness is stored in anjalis mind n this subhadra plzz budiya tum sudharjao😡 warna mujhe sudhaar ne aata hain.😉

I want nxt update sooon se bhi zyada soon..eagerly waiting to know wat halpened exactly and the asrs emotions towards khushi is confusing..kabhi pyaar phir war😕😛

I loved yhe suspense here👏 very well described

Ur nutty nutter
Zee😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update.. Loved it. Anjali is not ready to accept Khushi well Arnav loves his Khushi.. Looking forward to see what anjali plans ahead..

Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
how much arnav redeem himself
the fact is he had killed khushi wirth torturous life
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Posted: 9 years ago
So he is doing all of this because of her sister's wish and he also loves Khsuhi.Interesting point.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.. arnav loves her... why he dont know the truth?
I dont like anjali
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Posted: 9 years ago

Guys i write all my imaginations there is not reality in this piece of fiction as I've not heard or witness anything like this :/ one more thing while reading my fictions always remember they aren't pre-planed plot twist depend on my mood 😆 if it is crap than think i wasn't in good mood

Chapter#9






"LOSING HOPES"







"KHUSHI..." she got up hearing someone calling her, she rubbed her eyes and looked at the source of sound to find her husband and she pouted before saying "ARNIE..." Arnav gulped hearing his old name from her mouth and he didn't realize when his eyes widen "WHAT?"

"YOU SAID I SHOULD HEAR YOU AND SHOULD DO WHAT YOU TOLD ME TO BUT NOW I WANTED TO SLEEP PLEASE LET ME SLEEP" he sighed and stroll toward her and sat beside her. He cupped her face and said "DEAR YOU NEED TO EAT SOMETHING...AREN'T YOU HUNGRY" she nodded as yes and got up from bed and left to freshen up.

She moved downstairs with his hand holding her hand tightly "I WON'T RUN AWAY ARNIE"

"STOP CALLING ME ARNIE" he said still holding her hand.

"WHAT IF I DIDN'T STOP?" she demanded smiling "THEN I WILL SCOLD YOU" her eyes flickered hearing him and she didn't say more and Arnav knew why she didn't responded, he sighed before sitting on the chair and this time he made her sat next to him.

Khushi looked at the gorgeous girl and heard Anjali "LAVANYA, SHE IS THE GIRL TO WHOM CHOTE MARRIED ...KHUSHI" the girl looked at her with mixture of emotions; she blinked her eyes, bite her lower lip and then finally smiled saying "THAT'S SO NICE TO MEET YOU MRS. ASR" khushi didn't smiled back, her senses were disturbed by the way she talked.

"HI..." she just replied shortly, she wasn't in any case going to believe on the people around her when she knew she can get hurt and everyone around her is just for REVENGE.

"KHUSHI YOU DON'T HAVE MANNERS TO TALK WITH OTHERS" khushi looked at her sister-in-law and said "I DON'T KNOW HOW TO TALK WITH STRANGERS? I HAVE NEVER TALKED WITH THEM"

"DI KHUSHI IS HUNGRY LET HER EAT PEACEFULLY" Anjali kept quiet but she was angry, Arnav knew it.

Lavanya had notice love in his eyes; oh how much she wished that love was for her.

Dinner was silent till Anjali broke the ice shocking everyone "LAVANYA WILL LIVE WITH US FROM NOW" Arnav looked up at his sister and said looking at khushi "SHE IS MY EX-GIRLFRIEND...DO YOU HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH HER LIVING IN THIS HOUSE" khushi looked at him gulping down the food she chewed her lower lip and said I DON'T HAVE ANY PROBLEM...WE MUST HELP HER WHEN SHE DOESN'T HAVE HER OWN HOME' everyone gaped hearing her innocent reply and Lavanya looked at her with glint of sadness, she is really naive and obviously better than her.




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Flashback starts

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"I AM SORRY...AMAR, ITS ALL BECAUSE OF ME AHH' Mira cried hugging her husband tightly.

"EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE PRINCESS" Amar give silent support to his broken wife. She was feeling miserable; never in her life had she thought that she will face a situation like this. Her heart was crying in immense pain and agony and a known fear to be left alone. Was it her fate to see the situation again, this time worst situation? She lost her only sister before she could even cherish her love completely. Oh how many dreams she had seen for her doll and then suddenly she hugged khushi tightly who was on the backseat of the car silently feeling sad looking at her mother.

"MY DOLL" she kissed her face and suddenly started giggling and as do Amar with khushi.

"YOU ARE RIGHT AMAR EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE. LOOK OUR DOLL ISS FINE AND *touching her tummy* OUR NEW GUEST IS FINE...*cupping Khushi's cheek and smiled through tears* EVERYTHING IS FINE" this time Amar hugged both of them and said "LET ME DRIVE, FEED THIS TO KHUSHI" he said handing over some biscuits to Mira and started feeding khushi giggling at her doll's antics..

After 15 minutes

"WE ARE GOING TO YOU AUNT'S PLACE AND THEN WILL FIND SOME NICE PLACE AND JOB" said Amar and Mira nodded understanding what her husband wanted to say. They were on highway.

"I LOVE YOU AMAR" Khushi giggles hearing her mother and clapped her hand and pouted cutely.

They both laughed and Mira blush HARD making khushi giggles more "YOU TURNING SO NAUGHTY DOLL"

"I AM DAD'S PRINCESS SO I WILL BE NAUGHTY NA" they again laughed as khushi kept on blabbering and asking so many questions at every turn of roads.

But suddenly a truck came toward them with full speed making them shriek; Mira pushed khushi behind and screamed "BREAKS..."

"BREAKS ARE FAILED..." Amar shouted back as truck was nearing. Amar tried to change the direction but to their bad luck, truck hit right side of the car with the intensity that it with turns and many hits fell in to the deep valley with three highly wounded peoples.

"MIR...A" Amar breathed heavily before trying to got up. His head was bleeding like hell and it seems like his both legs were lifeless and his upper body was burning with pain of fresh wounds. He with his all might tried to reach his wife.

"AHHH" Mira cried out loud, her 8 month pregnant tummy was aching like hell. She felt sweat beads which were mixing with blood making her scream as salty water touch her fresh wounds.

"I WANNA SEE MY CHILD BEFORE I DIE BOTH" she breath with so much difficulty and again cried in pain giving birth to a dead child which wreck her heart with pain. Amar hold her tightly and his daughter *khushi* breathing heavily as if it was his end. And yes he with all his might touch his new born child, who dead before he could see his parents.

"MOM, DAD..." Khushi cried her innocent being shook with the heart wrecking incidents happening around her.

"SHH, DON'T CRY DOLL...EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE" said Amar for the last time to his daughter with his index finger indicating her of his presence in her heart and he passed away just like his wife lastly and she couldn't even kiss her doll.

This is life just a drop of water, you can lose it anytime but losing your own life sometime isn't so bad as compare to see your loved ones dying in front of your eyes but you could nothing other than cry helplessly, this is what happen with khushi at such a small age she saw her pieces of soul dying asking for water and she couldn't even brought water for them.

She looked down at her wounded leg which was under a heavy piece of their broken car and then around her only to find blood and her family died and the scene changed her eternity.

Took away her childhood, if only she could get a mother who loved not so much but just some affection which she couldn't get in her rest life of 10 years.

Flashback ends.




This was very emotional for me to write as i wanted to clear the reason of khushi being not brave and feisty. hope you all like it.

have a good day/night :)

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Posted: 9 years ago
wow awesome update loved it thank you for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
So, the sudden loss of her parents in the accident resulted in Khushi being all scared..
Lavanya seems to be a much better person than Anjali and Arnav.
Edited by jyothirockz - 9 years ago

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