[NIBIR TS - TU KITNI J HAI]part 3 updated PAGE 1 (COMPLETED)

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finally i unres it

nibir TS
the story starts from where nisha settles down the fight between dosa
and saurav asks her whether he shall talk to kabir about it

saurav - mai baat karu usse

nisha -try just once and thx

saurav - wah beta ab tu mujhe thx bolegi

nisha and dosa laughed

saurav went to KN house to talk to kabir

kabir was already frustated about the thing that he could not propose his own wife

he was roaming around the room

when saurav entered

saurav - kya hua

kabir (monologue)- ha saurav help kar sakta ha meri

kabir - tu meri help karega

saurav - ha bolna

kabir started blushing a bit

saurav felt something

saurav - kuch nisha ke baare mai hai

kabir(surprised)- tujhe kaise pata

saurav understood that kabir loved her

saurav - tere chehre se

kabir - matlab

saurav - bhai ek insann blush tabhi karta hai jaab kissi special ki baat karni ho

kabir smiled widely

saurav - par tu toh london jane wala tha na

kabir- jane wala tha ...par ab mai nisha se aur durr nahireh sakta

saurav smiled

kabir - pata nahi wo mujhe pyaar karti bhi hai ya..

he could not complete his sentence

saurav - mere pass ek idea hai

kabir - kya

saurav - usko jealous feel karva

kabir - nahi

saurav - dekh kabir iss situation yahi ek option hai

kabir agreed

kabir called up someone

the person agreed to come

tbc



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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2
an hour later nisha came home

she was in the kitchen

kabir was in their bedroom

the bell rang

nisha shouted from the kitchen

nisha-kabir darvaza khool

he didnt answer

she got frustated and went to open the door

a girl of about her age was standing

she was wearing mini skirt and a sleeveless top

she was beautiful

nisha - yes

girl -hi kabir hai

nisha felt little bit strange

nisha - ha ek second...KABIR

kabir came out of the room

Ritu

he screamed

he went towards her and hugged her

nisha felt jealous

kabir saw her reaction and hugged ritu more tight

ritu broke the hug

ritu - hi bunny how are you

nisha - bunny

kabir - ha

ritu -actually kabir sirf mai pyaar se bunny bolati hoon

ritu stressed on the word pyaar

nisha looked at ritu as if she will kill her any moment

kabir - arre ritu aavo na andar aao...nisha ghar pe mehman aaihai ja pani leke aa

nisha gave him and stare and went disheartedly to bring water

kabir whispered to ritu - thx yaar kuch aur time bas pakka

ritu - chill you have done so much for its nothing btw she is beautiful

kabir blushed and gave ritu a smile

nisha came with water

and gave to ritu

ritu smiled nisha reciprocated it but a fake one

nisha went and sat beside kabir

ritu - tum waha kyun bethe ho yaha aao

nisha was not comfortable with ritu

kabir got up to go and sit there

but nisha held his hand and told him not to go through her eyes

nisha (trying to change the topic)- tum yaha kaise tum dubai mai rehti ho na

ritu - ha par mujhe kuch special dosto se milne ka man kiya

nisha was getting too much jealous

kabir saw her

he felt guilty for making her jealous but he had no other option

as time passed by nisha's anger and jealousy were increasing

she could not she HER kabir with someone else

for her it became unbearable now she went to her room

nisha(monologue)- samaj ti kya hai ye khud ko ...dekho kaisi mere kabir ke sath flirt kar rahi hai aur ye duffer uski flirting ko enjoy kar raha
gadha kahika...par nisha kitni der tu kabir ko apne pass rakhegi wo toh london chalajyega tab waha toh kitni sari ladkiyaan hongi tujhse bhi jyaada khoobsurat ...waise sahi bhi hai kabir enjoy toh karega hi na wo kitni sundar hai..kaha wo kaha mai

though nisha was talking to herself this all was heard by ritu and kabir

kabir felt really bad

tbc



















Edited by Aha121 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 3
kabir entered the room

ritu left as she knew they needed some privacy

kabir - umm nisha..

nisha turned around

nisha was still fuming with anger and jealousy all over her face

while kabir was enjoying it

nisha - ritu kaha hai

kabir - bahar kyu

nisha - tu...tu usse dur reh

kabir felt happy as he could see his plan work

kabir came close

kabir - kyu

nisha - mujhe wo pasand nahi

kabir - toh

nisha was surprised

nisha - wo...

she was stammering

nisha - tune hi kaha tha na wo teri ex-girlfriend hai

kabir was shocked as he remembered when he had said that but nisha would remember those things ...like wow he thought

kabir - toh tujhe kya farak padta hai

nisha's anger raised and she was out of her senses

nisha- kabir i m your wife

kabir felt good to hear from her

kabir - par nisha mai toh london jaonga na waha ise bhi hot ladkiyan hongi meri toh life set hai boss

nisha felt like hitting him black and blue

nisha - i hate you kabir

and she turned to leave

kabir - but i love you

nisha stopped there

her eyes widened listening to that she was craving for

nisha turned around

nisha - kabir...

kabir pulled her close to him by he waist

nisha gasped

nisha - ...

she was about to say something when

kabir silenced her

kabir - tu j ho rahi thi na

he said giving his signature smile

nisha - esa kuch nahi hai

kabir - esa hi hai

nisha - maine kaha na esa kuch nahi hai

kabir - theek hai mai ritu ke pass jao

he was about to leave when nisha

she started cribbing not to go

kabir smiled

kabir- phir...bola kyu nahiab tak

nisha understood what was he talking

nisha - promise aur tu

kabir - huh

nisha - yaad hai i had promised you neither me nor my family will come between your dreams

kabir felt overwhelemed by her

kabir - aur mai kyu

nisha - because i ...i love you

kabir had craved these days to hear it from her

nisha - i cant let you down and i know ye kitna important hai tere liye

kabir - par tujhse jyada nahi

nisha had tears in her eyes

kabir wiped her tears

-mere dreams hum sath mai bhi pure kar sakte hai

nisha - par

kabir- theek haiphir yaad rakh waha bohot sari ladkiyan hongi jo tere ye kabir pe fida ho jayengi phir mat bolio that i didnt warn you

nisha - kabir

she made a baby face

kabir just took her into a hug

they gripped each never let the other one go away

kabir - btw tu j ho rahi na sach bol

nisha - ha

kabir -wifey tu kitni j hai

nisha made an angry face

kabir - acha but tujhe j hone ki koi jarurat nahi hai mujhe patana itna asan nahi hai

nisha laughed

kabir - ese hi hati reh jyada beautiful lagti hai

nisha -uss ritu se bhi

kabir chuckled at her jealousy and - ha meri ma

saying so kissed on her forehead

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Edited by Aha121 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome👍🏼
OMG😲
Nishu to get J🤣
update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww kabir nisha ko j feel karwaega..sach mai kabir kitna bada K(bht bada k hai na isiliye capital k use kar rahi hun 😆 ) kya yaar tumne to suspense mei chod diya kabir kis ko call kar raha tha?cant wait for next update 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love when someone you love is Jealous to see you with someone else.. Waiting for the next part. Continue soon. And congrats for becoming a goldie😊🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nishu ko J karne k lie Kabiraa ne kise bulaya?? 😲


But jo bhi bara maaza ayega 😉



Continue soon & thanx for the pm n ha plzzz thoda long update dena 😊
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Originally posted by: ...Shibu...

Awesome👍🏼
OMG😲
Nishu to get J🤣
update soon😊

tysm
dusra update hi likh rahi hoon
u will get it today only😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: newIFmember

Aww kabir nisha ko j feel karwaega..sach mai kabir kitna bada K(bht bada k hai na isiliye capital k use kar rahi hun 😆 ) kya yaar tumne to suspense mei chod diya kabir kis ko call kar raha tha?cant wait for next update 😳

tysm😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niya_789

I love when someone you love is Jealous to see you with someone else.. Waiting for the next part. Continue soon. And congrats for becoming a goldie😊🤗

tysm😳😊

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