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Rachel

@.Vrushanholic.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This is perfect!
Beautifully written! Sharon complexity was perfectly written.
And also I loved the ending sentence. It fits perfectly for them <3

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Because you told me to. :p

I loved it Chi. <3 It was different from your usual style of writing and was very pleasing. No offence and don't mean to sound conceited, but I could feel a tinge of my writing style in this one, and the familiarity made the one shot more profound.

Sharon had been shown as to only notice Swayam on that day, but if her character is as I've understood it, she'd have noticed him before. You did a good job on exploring that scenario.

One line took the award 'Swayam was the mystery I preferred unsolved.' Maaan. *-*

Cheers
Me.