Because I LOVE You.. (Chappy 12{Pg 32}) [IMP NOTE Pg 31]]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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MaNan SS : Because I Love You..by

Vidushi [Chocopie26]
Hey guys...
I'm vidushi also Chocopie name toh sun a hi nai hoga..
So I have read many MaNan stories on this forums
Seen the works of amazing writers...
Really hatts off to them...
So padhte padhte mere andar Ka Jo writer HAI na wo
Kood kood k ...high jump k new records bana kr bahar ana chahta hai
So I thot if writing a Short MaNan story...
Full of my imagination ...
Hope u will lyk it...

Promo:


A tall...well built masculine figure standing in a luxurious cabin

Blood flowing from his hands and eyes all blood red tears making their way out..

Boy : I hate you...I hate love... I hate that I love you...

Ahhh... (Shouts his lungs out...and breaks the big glass window standing there

In his cabin on behalf of the wall...with Hus already blood flowing hands..)



...

A girl as fragile as a doll...

Sitting in the floor if her crying like a two year old baby



Girl : I'm sorry...I'm sorry..BT main yeh nai kr skti...

I know abhi tmhe Pain hoga...Bt thode se pain k liye main tmari lyf barbaad nai kr skti..

I can't... I love you... I love you itna ki I can even let you go...







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So guys ye Rha promo hope u lyk it...plz give ur views
Joote Chappal tamatar ande all xcepted...
This z my first attempt in writing a story so plz do tel me how's it...
Jaldi zaldi comments do n tell me shud I continue ..
I'll update d prologue soon..
Til then
Stay Happie
Stay Blessed...
Okay thanks byee





Chapter5

Chapter6

Chapter7

Chapter8

Chapter9

Chapter10

Chapter11


Chapter12
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome prologue...
Continue soon...
Waiting for it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: abcd00

Awesome prologue...

Continue soon...
Waiting for it...


Thank you so much dear glad that u lyked it..
Will update ASAP
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Those Who Want PMs Can Buddy me 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue
Cont soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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haye...
start hi itni emotional hai...
bt i loved it and would love it more agar jaldi jaldi update milenge toh...haha...

aisa kya ho gaya nandu ko...
y she left him...

waiting for ur answers...


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys do you have any problem if I update the prologue late ni8 today????
Desperate writer I' hai Na???
Heheheje koi Na jhel lo mujhe so keep waiting
N yeah I'll send PMs if u want so buddy me for PMs




Okay thanks byeee...
Love Vidushi


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

haye...

start hi itni emotional hai...
bt i loved it and would love it more agar jaldi jaldi update milenge toh...haha...

aisa kya ho gaya nandu ko...
y she left him...

waiting for ur answers...


LOVE
SANJANA


Sure dear I'll try to update jaldi jaldi..
BT can't promise cz I'm a schoooly Na
Toh kabi kabi study pressure rehta HAI still I'll try doing it..
N thanks for liking it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chocopie26


Sure dear I'll try to update jaldi jaldi..
BT can't promise cz I'm a schoooly Na
Toh kabi kabi study pressure rehta HAI still I'll try doing it..
N thanks for liking it😊


no problem...can understand...hum bhi uss time se nikle hain...school study kills...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue:
A black BMW enter the campus of India's Leading Buisness Empire
"The Malhotra Empire"
And a handsome hunk wid muscular physique and sharp features
Hott jawline and a sexy mole at the left corner of his upper lips
Stepped out removing his shades..and exposing his ever so dark chocolaty brown eyes...
Wid an oceanic accent..
Entered the Multi Storey luxurious building of "Malhotra Heights"
All the female staffs drooling over this smoking Hott creation of god..
BT he widout paying nay need to all that walked inside his cabin


U guys r pretty smart th abtk samajh Gaye hoge who this hunk is
Ovio the hottie the handsome the hunk the only heir of "Malhotra Empire "
And the MD of the music company "Fusion"
The Manik Malhotra

Inside the cabin:
Manik : WTH Ssly all this bullshittt bloody hell annoying (said throwing d newspaper on the floor which boiled his blood)
Cabir:I don't knw yaar
Manik: what I don't knw?? All this ye HAI Kya!!!!
Cabir : article HAI newspaper Ke 1st page pe "Malhotra In Love" said cabir dramatically
Manik: shut up Cabir this z not funny at all bilkul v nai said manik hell pissed n angry
Cabir: chill bro itna hyper kyu ho Rha ha??? After all u guys gonna marry soon!
Manik : so ..u knw Na Cabir I hate all this love nd all..these things are bullshitt
Cabir: toh Tu uss se pyaar nai krta?
Manik: mujhe tera face todne ka koi mood nai HAI...so Stop instigating me..u very well knw I don't love any1..and not her especially
Cabir : main Soha Ki baat nai kr Rha main uski baat kr Rha hun..I knw u don't love Soha I even knw u r marrying her cz of buisness purpose..
Manik: kon ...kiski baat kr Rha HAI Tu..Maine bola Na I dont love ny1..(said Manik stammeringly)
Cabir: accept krle Manik aj v Tu uss se pyaar krta HAI...u still miss her..u still watch the stars u still love her
Manik (hell angry wid eyes spitting fire ..throws some stuff on his cabin table ) : Enough is Enough Cabir !!!! I said Na I don't love any1 ...I hate her I hate loving her!!!
Cabir: Manik Tu sbse jhoot bol skta hai bt apne aap se nai accept krle ..(Cabir was cut in between)
Manik : Kya accept Karun yahi Ki she betrayed me ..yahi Ki she left me yahi K only thing mattered to her was buisness??? Huh wo gayi thi mujhe chod kr main nai..
Cabir: Manik tune reason jan be Ki koshish Ki??
Manik : cz I knw my dear Best Friend can't say no to her parents.!!



...
So this is a emotional SS..
Akhir aesa Kya hua that Manik hates his Best Friend so much???
Who's she???? Aesa Kya kiya usne??? Kyu kiya????
So many questions ri8
Or unke answers janne Ke liye stay tuned to this SS..



Guys as I said IMA new writer my first ever work on MaNan ur reviews are really needed
Cz it will help me in improvising as a writer...mayb I'll learn many things from u
Do plz feel free to share ur views n all plz comment good bad..
Joote chappal tamatar ande sb chalga ...all welcomed!!




Stay Happie
Stay Blessed..

Love Vidushi 😛
Edited by chocopie26 - 10 years ago

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