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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys this is my ever first writing and I got inspired by many like namita,snamika,muskan,ashvneet,payal
but my special thanks is to Muskan
I hope u like it
sorry for all mistakes,please leave ur precious view

Jodha:20 years beautiful girl who have come to Delhi for MBA from patna,a middle class girl
Maan:jodhas elder brother
very possessive about her lil sister also a MBA holder and doing job in one of good company in patna
Maina:jodhas mother,a house wife
Bharmal:jodhas father a supervisor in a small company

Jalal:22 years handsome boy who lives in Mumbai but recently in Delhi to complete final year of his MBA
Salima:little sister of jalal doing bcom in Mumbai
Humayun: father of jalal
also owner of number one company of India,a kind and successful man
Hamida:mother of jalal ; a kind hearted lady
minor characters will be introduced during story


Prologue:a girl slapped a boy that is jalal, tightly on his birthday itself that is none other than our jodha, in front of so many people and exit the club.behind her is following her friend and the boy who has got a slap few seconds before
Girls friend shouting behind her but the annoyed girls ears turn into deaf
finally the friend could caught her and tried to explain the matter but the girl continue her work of walking that suddenly she felt a strong and masculine hand on her wrist.For this courage of the boy ,the girl was going to land an other slap on his handsome face but the boy get hold of her hand
Jalal:What u think of ur self.how dare u slap me
Jodha:how dare u touch me and tried to touch me
Jalal:So much attitude but u urself know that u cant resist the charm of the most handsome boy and for this slap u have to pay
and start decreasing distance between them.when suddenly a heavy puch landed on his face but before boy could react one kick landed on his stomach by a furious man.
the furious man would kill jalal but stopped by jodha.Jodha started dragging the furious man towards their vehicle not before listening the last words from the ego hurted boy " I will FOUND YOU"

Index
-ch-1 on pg 3
ch-2- pg 5
ch-3(a) - pg 7
note- pg 10
tzr-3(b) on pg 11
ch-3(B) on pg16
ch-3(C) on pg 21
ch-3(D) on pg 30
ch-4 on pg 39
ch-5 on pg 46
ch-6 on pg59
Ch-7 on pg 74
Ch-8 on pg 85
Ch-9 on pg 94
Ch-10 on pg 109
ch-11on pg 121
ch-12 on pg 134

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats dear for d new story
Nice prologue😊 Jo slapped Jalal


Waiting for d chapter. Continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SreshthaBiswas

Congrats dear for d new story

Nice prologue😊Jo slapped Jalal


Waiting for d chapter. Continue soon😊

thanks for liking and giving ur positive view
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear congo for ur first attempt
Coming to story its quite interesting
Ooolaalaaa she slapped and punched jalal
Poor seee
Waiting for next part
Continue soon
Do pm if possible :-) :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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a big big congratulations fr ur 1st story dear...
really an intersting prologue...
Omg!! jo slapped Jalal...
hehehe..its really gonna b intersting to know where all this will lead to..
but who ws the 1 who punched jalal??
update nxt soon...
n pls pm me if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: avika444

Hey dear congo for ur first attempt
Coming to story its quite interesting
Ooolaalaaa she slapped and punched jalal
Poor seee
Waiting for next part
Continue soon
Do pm if possible :-) :-)

thanks for ur positive view
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

a big big congratulations fr ur 1st story dear...

really an intersting prologue...
Omg!! jo slapped Jalal...
hehehe..its really gonna b intersting to know where all this will lead to..
but who ws the 1 who punched jalal??
update nxt soon...
n pls pm me if possible

thanks for ur positive view
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congo 4 ur first story...
Nyc prologue dear...plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sony23akdha

Congo 4 ur first story...
Nyc prologue dear...plz continue soon

thanks for ur positive view
will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsum start dr

hahhahahaha
jalal pit gaya
hehe

update soonish

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