raeysha,Ariya: our love forever

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Hey guys I old member of this forum but had to discontinue due to some reasons.. . But I am back now and miss g all so thought to rite anew story pls cooperate
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovvinit

Hey guys I old member of this forum but had to discontinue due to some reasons.. . But I am back now and miss g all so thought to rite anew story pls cooperate




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And ha obviously the stody will be romanric md emontional

Should i continu??
And pls send me buddy req and
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Arjun suryakant rawte. ... Same as show no past.. Sams younger brother and fallen for riya..

Mr. Sammer damsing dathore... Etf chief and arjuns elded brother... Loves riya as a sis ..

Ayesha kappor... Loves sam d riyas bff

Riya.. Same as show fallen for arjun...

Shree, liza chotu same as show


So

Proluge


Etf memeber at jungle for case ... Ayesha in danger. ..

Age ka intejar karo yar...


Should i cmtinue... Pls tell nd likes nd comments 😊 [0][/COLOR][SIZE=3]</f


Hey all 😊 thanks for response i will continue...
so heres the fisrt upate enjoy
and same with ariya...


let me clear
sam and ayesha have already fallen for eachother nd their love cycle is going on..


Chap -1
ETF office
Rathod: godd morning all
All: good morning sir..

Rathod: We have a new case so have to go..
so team get ready..

Its in jungle so be carefull
shree and chotu tumlog asas me nagar rakhoge , shree apna lappi sath lel lena hamein directions pata karnein padenge.

Chore: Ok sir..
Sam: Rawte tum aur riya sath rahoge aur mein aur ayesha dusre jagah talash karenge..

Liza ko kuch ka, hhain lab mein to agar uski jaruat padi to usko bad mein boldenge..
Shree tum liza ke contact mein rehna.

Shree MV: Kya yar mein hi mila tha sir lo us liza ke sath ..

Chalo team be ready we have to go and girls be carefull kafi dangerous hain..

Ayesha MV: sam jab ap mere sath hain to muje koi chunta nai hain...


Team reaches jungle and find some clue all are discussing about that.

aarjun: rathod muje lagta hain yeh jarur koi underworld ka admi hain, koi ais waisa nai hain ..hum aur bhi satrak rehna hoga...

Tabhi sam ka phone bajta hain its unlnown num:

Sam: hello
Admi: To ap hain woh ETF ke chief sameer rathod woh kya ahin na muje policewalo se ladne mein aur bhi maja ata hain to tum aur tumahre admi .taiyar ho jao..ab to maaja ayega


Sam: koun ho tum aur tumko kaise pata hum jungle mein hain ?


sorry guys jana padega thdi der mein post kati hu..
lekin comments chahiye jaldi karo😛





Edited by lovvinit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Help sorry ha kuch. K am that to gain this here is the continurd updateupday



Continue...[SIZE=3]rathod woh admi kopichta hain ke use kaise pata chala ke uskiteam jungle mein hain

Admi : muje sab pata gain rathod... itne mainusko pata chalta hain. Ki etc team me sath do ladikya bhi gain..


ADmi : oh oh rathod kya bat apne team me I not ladiya bhi rakhte ho... kya bat gain an to air aka ayega waise mal (girls) to acha hi hoga...

Sam and arjun became angry...


Sam: ttum Jo koi bhi ho same so... tumne etc walk se panga lene ka sochkar apni maut no davat di gain...



Admit: itni bhi kua jaldihain ... abhi to khel shuru hua gain... itni asani se thdi me in hath aunga... mere admi sarie jungle me in gain him at him to lado...



Sam says shree to trace the number all became alert...


Admit cuts the call




Sam: team be alert..

Charo jagah fel jaon...

Ayesha: tum or ri sath me in kaoge...


Ri: OK bhai...



They start searching their admias... half day pas in searching and searching all etc members are in ntch withh each other...




After sometime rathod tells etc team to gether at one place...


All come at that place.



Sam:: kiwi no much clue mila...???where num trace hua???

Agree: sir signal nai mil raha lagta gain kahi n aisi jagah se phn kiya gain jahan hum na porch paye.




Sam: think gain..

Arjun: rathod much to chut raha gain... aise to much nai milega much sochna padega...



Suddenly chotu notices something




Chotu;: aieysha kahan gain???


All see to chotu
Sam: kya Aisha nai gain???



Riya: lekin last take to won mere sarh hi this...



Itne me in phir se call ata. Hain.


Sam: kahan gain meri ayesha.. usko much hua to me in time in kinda nai chodunga...



Admit: kya bat hain... kya tadap gain.. thara mal mere pas gain abhi too sahi salat hainn bad ka pata nai.



Sam get fuming..



Arjun::: dekho chod no uskko...


Phone cuts.


Sam arjun:: hello hello

Achanak unko gloi ki avaj Sinai deti gain...
They all became allert.


Sam: team be careful chalo lagta gain goli ki avaj yahan se ayi gain..



They all went thode due unko ek chat jaise dikhai data gain wahan do admit bahar ghum rahe gain...


Arjun dekhta gain ki ayesha no wahan bamdha gain...



Arjun: Sam dekho ayesha...


Sam eyes starts fuming

Ria: bhai ayesha no much nai hoga... chalk.


Sam: team sbhal me Jana...




They reach there.


Sam ayesha me pas jata gain..
Agree undono ai no pakad me raha gain air Mar raha gain...



Utne me in ek admi bahar. Ata. Hain.


Admi::: oh to tum log poch hi hate idhar...


Sam usko Marne jata gain lekin tabhi do admi ake Sam arjun riya shree no bndh date gain...



Sam::: ayesha no chodo..


Admi ayesha ke. Pas jata. Gain..


And tries to touch her..


Sam:: heyy.. chilla lar.. usko hath mat lagana.



S arjun no ikuch ishata karya gain...

Achanak chotu akar undono admi no Marta gain wog log gir hate gain..
Tabhi chotu sab no chudata gain ayesha no bhi..


Thdi der take sab laddte gain.. lekin ek admit wapas ayesha no gale se pakadkar bolta gain.


San guns niche rakho warns yeah upar jayegi...



Sam:: usko chodo...


Ayesha:: sir isko mat chodna muje kuch nai hoga...



Arjun: chodo use warns..

Admi aur gun ayesga ke pass le jata gain..

Sab guns ko niche rakh dete hain won ayesha no dkhaka Marta gain...

Ayesha dod me idhar at I gain tabhi won dekhti hain ki won admi Riya no goli Mar ne wala hota. Hain. Tabhi ayesha bich mein ati h ain air goli usko lagti gain...


Ayesha falls down... blood is running out...



Sam: ayesha..ha...


Arjun riya ko puchta hain won thik hain ??... Riya nooded yes



Tabhi picje se koi unsab ko goli mardeta hain...
All sees it's Liza


All: Liza tum yahan kaise???
Li: won sab bad me in ayesha no hopistal eike chalte gain..



Precap::: ayesha in hospital nd much more.



Kaisa laga age chahye???????????... to like nd comment.



Jaldi jaldi...


Hello mein a logo se nalaj hun.. muje like nd comments nai mile raje hain😭


chalo jaldi se like and comment karo next update jalhi mil jayei




thanks for the comments do comment more


heres the next update


recap: aisha kko goli lgti hain... blood is running from her shouler.. all are tensed. liza ne sab ko goli mardi us underworld ke admi ko khatam kar diya hain...
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ab age...


sab log SUV mein betkar aisha ko hospital le jar rahe hain..
arjun is driving car... aisha sam ke godi mein sar rakhar dard se chila rai hain... riya ko bura lagta hain ki uski wajah se aisha ko goli lagi.
Sam had tears in his eyes..
Sam: aisha tumhe kuch nai hoga. mein tumhe kuch nai hone dunga...

All : sir aisha ko kuch nai hoga pls sambhaleye apne ap ko.



At hoospital

Sam: shouting emergency emergncy...
doc comes and takes aisha to opd on strecther..



Sam had tears in his yes.. Riya sam ke pas jati hain.
Riya: bhai sorry aur sam ke age do hath jodti hain aur kehti hain
Bhai aj meri wajah se aisha bhabhi ki yeh halat hain muje goli lag jati to acha hota aisha ne kyun muje bachaya?

sam: pagal ho gai ho kya...tumhe kuch ho jata to arjun aur mera kya hota.. badi mushkil se tum wapas ayi ho humari life mein khas kar arjun ki zindagi mein..

Tumhari koi galti nai ahin usme... sab thik ho jayega...
Riya: aisha bhqbhi ko kuch nai hoga woh jald hi thik ho jayegi..

saying this riya hug sam.. and sam also hug her to console her..

thdi der bad doc ate hain/..

arjun: doc kaisi hain aisha?

doc: ab woh khaytre se bahar hain lekin goli kafi under tak lagi thi to ghav gehra hain.. bharne mein waqt lagega..

Sam: hum aisha ko ghar kab le ja sakte hain?

Doc: usko hosh ane bad ap use ghar le ja sakte hain..

sam: thik hain thankyou doc..


doc goes

sam: sab log ghar jao. aj day off kal agar koi case nai aya to paper work complete ka denge..


all: ok sir..

arjun: liza tum wahan kaise pochi??

Liza: sir shree muje continously update de raha tha.. lekin thdi der bad muje signal nai mila to muje laga jarur koi gadbad hain..

to meine net per se location nikali us jungle ki aur poch gai...


Sam: good job liza..
liza: thanks sir/..

Chotu (teasing liza): liza kya bat hain shree ke sath reh rehkar tum bhi gadgets mein master hoti ja rahi ho...😆😆

Liza: chotu.. acha joke tha..

Shree looksa at chotu..


Sam: ghar jao sab.

Riya: bhai ap?

sam: mein aisha ke pas rukta hun ..

arjun: rathod mein aur riya bhi rukte hainn

sam: nahi rawte tum aur riya gar jao..

arjun: thik hain lekin pdates dete rehna..

sam: thik hain..




kaisa laga? should i contiunue...

ha ha muje pata hain meine kaha tha ki romantic story hain... lekin thoda sabr kijiye ..milega romance..



precap: ariya and raieha moments... a


jaldi se comment karo aur like karoo jaldi jaldi...


😛





Edited by lovvinit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fab updates dear
Loved them
U just pm to ur readers then they will get to know tat u have updated
Pm me when u updt it
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
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Originally posted by: jeharshu

Fab updates dear

Loved them
U just pm to ur readers then they will get to know tat u have updated
Pm me when u updt it
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon






thanks dear i will do send pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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nice story keep updating Thnx for pm and update
pls pm me too
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hey ariyas and reaisha pankhas... thanks for comment it mean a lpt...😊

so am back with another update... enjoy...
recap: aisha is in hospital and all went home except sammer...
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Chapter -2

yahan se sayyad thda romance start hoga..ahem..ahem..😛😉😉

Hospital...

Sam is sitting outside aishas room... aisha is shifted to general room..

Tabhi sam ka phn bajta hain. Its arjun.

Sam: hello arjun kya hua? sab thik to hain na?
Arjun: ha sab thik hain.. tum batao tum kaise ho?..arjun knows that sam is very disturbed.
Arjun: aisha bhabhi ko hosh aya?

Sam: nahi yar.

Arjun: dont worry woh thik ho gayenge..

itne mein nurse ati hain..
nurse to sam: Ji kya ap aisha ke sth aye ho?
Sam: ha kyun kya hua?
sam: arjun mein bad mein call karta hun tumhe..
Arjun: ok. sam..

Nurse: aisha ko hosh a gaya hain ap unse mil sakte hain. lekin pls dyhan rakhe unko dard bahut hain to bilkul strees na ho..
Sam: ok dont worry...


Nurse: ok.

sam; thankyou.

Sam goes to meet aisha..
he see that aisha is sleeping.. he can feel that how much pain is there .

sam goes and sits beside her and take her hand ih his

aisha open her eyes..

Aisha: Sir,,, woh m..mein i am sorry..mein unlogo ko pakad ani paye.


Sam: ssshhh. bus yeh sab kya hain aisha? kyun liya tumne ais? agar tumhe kuch hoo jata to?

And some tears came in sameyes..

Aisha:Riya akiasi hain?

sam: woh thik hain..

aisha faintly smiles.. sam knowns that aisha need him badly..

Aisha tries to sits but her hand slips and pain starertd.

aisha..ahh

Sam; aisha kya hua? tum lete raho uthne ki jarurta nai han..
bilkul samji tum.

Sam makes aiisha to sleep again..
aisha eyes filed with tears because of pain and seeing sameers care..


sam stars to go from tehre to take water for aisha but aisha took his hand..


Aisha: sam pls bethe na mere pas..pls. she has tears in her eyes..


Sam comes and sat besides her.. he put one hand on her hairrs and carreesess ..

aisha: thankyou sam agar ap meri life mein hote to sayad mein mar hi jati./

sam: bus kuch mat bolo... pata hain mein kitna dar gaya tha..

sam slowly hug her adn kissess oon her forehead..

aisha also hug her...

ssam: i love you aisha... pls muje chodkar mat jana kbhi..

aisha. i love you too sam...

...

abhi ke liye itna hi bki ka dophar ko post karti hun.. comment karo.. your time satart now...😆

precap: ariya moments... and some other...



ha aur romance hain dehkte jao.. aur comment karte ajo...



PS: jo log buddy list mein nai hain can send me req nd woh log bhi padh sakte hain aur comment kar sakte hain.....






Edited by lovvinit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update soon I want too see ariya rom sce
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing
Continue soon. Thanks for pm

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