Abhiya SS- Mr and Mrs Killer, NOTE pg11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

hhmmm now this seems to be a really different and out of the box story where the leads are murderers and the atmosphere is deep , dark and mysterious . i would love to try a different taste on abhiya's love story .

since i didn't commented about the first chapter , i will start with that part .

it seems chand is quite scared of abhay and so as everyone except kabir . glad that someone can tell abhay what he is doing . LOL misha and kabir thought abhay is gay 🤣.

so abhay's mother was killed , may be that's why he has turned out to be like this. i think every villian or killer has a story behind their deeds and the same case is with abhiya .

pia is a killer and she enjoys it 😲😲

this story i feel is like onion , a lot of layers and mysterious are hidden and hopefully will reveal with every passing day .

great concept and very interesting way to present it .keep it up.

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

hii..sry fr this late comnt..was inactive,busy wid exams... Superb updt..Abhay's questn made chand lost all his wrds, he is going 2 meet jeh..Jeh introvert, dekh ke lagta nai hai..i thnk he too hold sum secrets.. Abhay going 2 that place with some mission?

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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

And pia happy 2 gt rid of hr sistr kiara..While talking she ws imagining Jeh wid broken neck & all,haha..I too wish 2 blow his head wid a hammer as i remembrd hw he behave wid pia in serial..Jeh bettr b careful she is nt an easy chick 2 gt.. Tnxx fr pm :))

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Outstanding story

Brilliant concept

Starting was fabulous and mysterious

Thanks for pm

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Part one

Mind blowing update

Ah Abhay our dark hero

Well this piya is new to me

Thanks for pm

Please continue soon

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Part two

Fantastic update

I love this story

It's so mysterious

Thanks for pm

Please continue soon

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Isha Simon

@Ms.Purplegoth

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

NOTE

To all those people out there who read this story , I am sorry to tell u that I won't continue this story for a LITTLE WHILE. My study schedule is super packed , and I get only time to write 1 story . I am NOT discontinuing it.

But I am forever grateful to all those who supported me in this story , and I know this isn't really a popular genre , but kisses to all of u for encouraging me . :)

Reality calls me to achieve my career dreams 😆

So meet u guys after a few days ( or months ! ) :D