ArShi OS - A Spooky Surprise *Happy Birthday Nisha*

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A SPOOKY SUPRISE

It was a tiring day at work. No matter how much I complain, I know, as soon as I see my crazy chipmunks, all the exhaustion will take a second to vanish off. Arnav, Payal and Aakash - my life starts with them, and apparently, my life ends with them.


Arnav, the most notorious of us, leaves no chance to bug me. I want to kill him for irritating me, but alas, I am hopelessly in love with him! You know, ishq vala love'. It isn't like he doesn't love me, but you know girls are more emotionally into such things, while guys are, ahem, more into physical stuff. We are in relationship since past seven months, though we are more comfortable by being best friends.


Payal, she is the only one in our group who spends most of her day in the kitchen than in the dressing room. She loves to cook and we love to eat. Can anything be better? And regardless to mention, her cooking skills are amazing!


Aakash, our inverse coconut! He is soft from exterior, all goody kinds, but from interior, he is no less than Arnav. Once the two get together, we two girls have to work really hard to get the two apart from each other. Some may call it Bromance, but I'll call it Ways to Enjoy without Girls', if you know what I mean!.


All three of them call me Hitler. I mean, how can an innocent, cutie, sweetie, dearie girl be equivalent to such a cruel man?! Nonetheless, I enjoy the sound of the chorus when they call me Hitler. Everything is right when you have these kind of buddies to die for! As I already said, my life starts with them and ends with them.


As I walk down the lane from my workplace to the common apartment we four share, I feel the numbing pain creeping behind my eyes. First, I was working on an off-day. Second, my friends would be enjoying the pizza that Payal was to make this evening - all alone, urggh. Third, why do I even exist?


I fetched a water bottle from my bag and gulped half of the content in one go. Feeling a little better, I started walking again. I needed sleep, anyone who would see my eyes would tell me the same. I mentally made a note to go to the spa the next day. Payal? No, I wouldn't take her with me if I don't find any pizza left for me.


As I looked upon the gates of our apartment in the foggy air, I heaved a sigh of relief. I snuggled more into my furry coat as the cold nip of wind blew, sending shivers down my whole form. I could sense something fishy with the lightings of the apartment. They slept at eleven? That was way too early for our normal hours of sleeping. Nevertheless, its good for me. I won't have anyone to disturb me as I will have my hot chocolate while watching Titanic and then drift off to sleep. I love that movie, especially at exhausted moments, though I drift off to sleep even before the ship drowns. Bleh.


I rung the bell, hoping Arnav to open the door. I need his warm body to cuddle into in this hurting cold weather. After the wait of five seconds, I rang the bell again, and no one answered. Fishing through my bag for the spare key, I opened the door, only to reveal stark darkness inside.


"Arnav?" I said into the air as I stepped inside, feeling no movement near me.


The door made a noise and closed on its own, freaking the senses out of me. These November blows won't let me be in peace! I rolled my eyes and searched for the light switches. As I stumbled ahead, I felt my leg being groped tightly and I screamed on top of my voice.


"Aakash, if this is you, then I am going to kill you and I'm very serious!" I yelled, dropping my bag blindly and kicking my bound foot with the other one. Gawd! I wished I was wearing my pencil heels right now! Damn these flat shoes!


I felt the hand finally unwinding and creeping away from my feet and without looking ahead for another second, I sprinted towards the switch board.


I turned all the switches on, seeing no change in the lighting of the apartment. It's a power cut? At this time? I sighed and turned back, feeling everything creepy to be the hallucinations of my tired mind. I blindly walked forward, only to step onto something slimy and the atmosphere was filled with a diabolic laughter that sounded real scary.


I stepped backwards until my back hit a wall and I screamed aloud, my heart rate ahead of my breathing rate! This isn't Payal's voice. That means...?! Oh my god, that means there is actually a ghost in our apartment! Where are my friends? Did the ghost kill them and hung them on the tree? What will I do without them?!


I couldn't stand the laughter for another second. It was intolerable! It sounded as if the witch had a sore throat since years together and now being fed up of the soreness, she inserted a knife in her throat that made her laughter creepy! Ew.


I measured the steps and sighed in relief as I found the knob of the main door. I decided mentally that once I am out of my haunted apartment, I'll run straight to the police station; but to add to my terror, the door was locked. Tears coated my eyes as I felt someone's gaze on my back. Just breathe your last breath Khushi, the ghost is just behind you!


I screamed again, this time more loudly. I turned back, deciding to surrender to the ghost, when something fell from the ceiling, right in front of me. A deafening shriek escaped my mouth, anticipating the fallen thing to be the corpse of my friend. Phew, it wasn't. I knelt down and touched the thing, it was a doll. Her fluorescent dress was giving out some kind of light to see her form. Her eyes were unequal buttons and the cloth over her cheek was torn off, the cotton filled within oozing out. It's mouth had some kind of pointed pins protruding out, along with a sticky liquid that smelled yuck. I threw the doll away in disgust, glancing at the ceiling for once.


My heart stopped as I saw a human skeleton hanging over the ceiling fan and grinning at me devilishly. Its bones were pointed and pale greenish in color and its whole body shined with scary red light. I found my vision getting blurry with shock and fear. Cold water dropped onto my eyes from the ceiling suddenly and I screamed hard, getting up and running towards the door.


"Help someone, please!" I cried loudly, tears spilling out of my eyes and mixing with the wetness caused by the water.


"Arnav" I screamed for him, my voice cracking up due to tears filling my throat, "Aakash" "Payal"


I closed my eyes as my lifeless hands continued to bang on the door, "Get me out, please!"


"Happy Birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday dear Hitler, happy birthday to you!" I heard the melodious chorus of my friends, as they sang together, the light finally coming back and I opened my eyes and turned back. There stood Aakash, Payal and my Arnav, all wearing pointed kid-caps over their heads, and not to mention, their evil grins pointing at me.


"You b*stards" I stepped angrily towards them, already feeling very exhausted to beat them up.


"Shh relax" Arnav came cowards and embraced me in his warmth, holding me close to his chest and rubbing my back to calm me down. I immediately wound my arms around his waist, sighing in his chest as I finally felt my breaths getting normal.


"I hate you so much!" I whined in his chest, punching his back lightly.


"I love you so much!" He replied back, kissing in top of my head and breaking into a soft chuckle.


We parted from the hug and he softly pecked my lips, "Happy Birthday, Khushi!"


"Payal, it's time to close our eyes!" I heard Aakash whisper to Payal and they both burst into giggles, while Arnav smiled.


"All this was your plan, right?" I glared at Arnav and Aakash, while they nodded sheepishly.


"You --" I started with my cussing, when Payal cut me off.


"Who wants to cut a mouth-watering, heart-numbing, extremely delicious chocolate cake, made by none other than the awesome chef - Payal?" Payal fanned her face, winking at me and pointing to the covered lid on the dining table.


"Oh my god, really?" I squealed in excitement, stepping aside from Arnav and Aakash and hugging Payal.


The clock struck twelve and the knife pierced the creamy texture of the cake, followed by all four of us going crazy with eating and applying cake on each other's face.




Ha. Ha. Ha.
Nish, don't kill me baby


I laughed so hard while proof-reading it 🤣 It wasn't even a bit scary 🤣


Sorry I spoiled your birthday gift baby :( I wanted to write something nice, but you don't like cheesy stuff, so I planned to write horror and see how I messed this up ._. Ho sake toh apni iss PC ko maaf karna *crawls under the bed*


@All :- Please wish our birthday girl here - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/4517571/apharan-23-11-15-hbd-hitler-doll






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.LadyHitler. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Are you the one who said that, 'How can someone write horror?' a month ago??

And here you've already tried it!

Kudoos kiddo!

I'm proud of you for writing something out of your comfort zone and sorry for creating trouble! Mere liye likha na tumne?

I don't know why people found this funny but i did find it a bit scary! Maybe bcoz i imagine things too much! Or maybe bcoz you've written it for me 😳

Wonderful job PC! Sach mein!

But seriously, who gives this kind of surprise for Birthday?? I can imagine Khushi's state! Ye Arnav and Akash toh... Oh god! Mujhe toh heart attack aajayega!

But friends are like that! If they can give their life for you, they will tease and scare you to bits too! And that's the fun!

Btw, Akash and Payal are not a couple?

I loved this OS baby!

And haa, you nailed it! Don't say its bad!
P.S. Perfect banner! And you say, you are a learner?

P.S.S. Thank you for making my Birthday special! You are truely an angel! ❤️
Edited by .LadyHitler. - 10 years ago
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hehe Thank you 😳
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Wonderful OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm
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Thanks yaar 😳

Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

Wonderful OS
Loved it
Well written
Thanks for the pm



Thank you 🤗
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Very spooky surprise wala sweet OS!
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Originally posted by: kavyanjali08

Very spooky surprise wala sweet OS!


You thought it is? 😲 Eh Thanks baby 🤗
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Hahaha... it was really funny+creepy HBD birthday girl..
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ITs awesome... scary...birthday blast...🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳

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