MaNanff- I've always loved you! (Part 22) 22/08

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Hey people, I'm beginning a new fanfiction on our lovely Manan. Here is the prologue more like a little intro to the story. Please leave your precious comments to let me know about the response. All kinds of comments, good or bad, are welcomed wholeheartedly. Thanx. Here you go with a part.

PROLOGUE - THE feelings

Today was different. It felt new altogether. Its been so long since we talked but today it felt good. You know Manik, last year was soo good. But unfortunately I realize this now. Being in the same school house and being the prefects of the house was amazing. Not that we were the prefects and had good authority over juniors but we were working together and shared a good close bond. But we were only in class five. But... After coming in senior building, we never conversed Manik. I thought we'll still be the same good old friends. But today we're not the same anymore. It's been one year now and we're soo apart Manik. Today, after seeing you with Soha in school, dont know but nothing seemed right. Is this what my bestie Mukti says... YOU ARE IN LOVE dude!! I dont feel like believing her but neither do I feel like ignoring this.
Where are you Manik?? Had you been with me, I could share my worries with you, my true feelings with you and we could clear everything. Isn't it Manik?? But you're gone Manik. And may be this is the reason that I don't want to believe Mukti. But if Mukti's right na then yes I feel good, new and different from the friendship phase.

So here you go with the part. Plz shower ur precious comments here. It really means a lot.
Thankyou
Loads of love
Manan_trs

~INDEX~
Chapter 6
Chapter 10
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow.. Interesting prologue !! 😊
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Part 1 - Breathing


They both were in seventh standard and still the ignorance game was on. Nandini had accepted Manik's behaviour by now and expected no further changes. Mukti always encouraged her to step forward and talk to him but she was too shy to do that. The actual reason behind not going and talking to him was not that she was shy and all but his new friend circle and their condescending nature. She never liked those people and wanted Manik to stay away from them but she had lost all those rights over him.

Gradually their time passed and with that grew stronger Nandini's feelings for Manik. She knew that she was thinking rubbish, she was hallucinating about her and Manik's future but deep down inside her heart there was this little thing called hope that kept encouraging her to still keep those feelings alive for him.

She never actually had friends besides Mukti and Manik. She knew Mukti ever since childhood but their true soul sister type friendship bubbled when she received that friendly trust once again after Manik had started ignoring her. Basically Manik was her first true friend who gave her all the friendly trust she ever craved for. Since childhood she had always been cheated by friends. They always used to come, appreciate her, become or maybe just pretend to become her bestfriends and then when their work was done they would just abandon her. But she knew Manik never cheated her. She knew there was something in his heart that he did not wish to reveal to her and kept himself away. She gave him time that one day he will walk upto her and tell her everything. But now this wait kept on increasing with no possibilities of his coming back.

In the course of time she began to make new friends. She got a group of friends to trust upon and get the trust back. Dhruv, Aliya, Cabir, Navya and Abhi. They all were actually in Mukti's class who then accepted her in their group as well. They got to know everything from Mukti and they promised to keep her happy and help her to get over him.

They all were passing their time. Everyone was living their lives to the fullest with new friendships and love bubbling amongst their group but there was one person who was not living but just breathing. Nandini. She had now accepted everything and decided not to ponder over spilled milk. She decided to forget Manik. She decided to forget his memories.

On the other hand, the other person was not at all bothered about anything around. Or maybe just pretending to not be bothered about anything around. He was occupied with his friends and his so called girlfriend Soha.

Aryaman, Maddy, Soha, Harshad and Rose were his so called bestfriends now. He only liked to spend his precious time with them. And his girlfriend ofcourse, Soha. A manipulative cat that she was, she convinced Manik to be in a relationship just to gain popularity in school. She did not love him but thought herself as a beauty queen for whom guys go head over heels and she thought Manik to be one of them.

But Manik even got frustrated. He was guilty to do such things to his dearest Nandu. Sometimes, he too felt that he was not actually living his life with his so called bffs, but was just breathing. But his ego was too big to realize the importance of Nandu in his life, his love's importance in his life.
They were just breathing.

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So guys here is tge part. This is more like an intro to the story abt the lives of Manik and Nandini.

Well speaking honestly, I was not planning to write this further but thought jst one last time.
I knw u might not loke the starting but trust me its far more interesting further.
All I need from you guys is that plz shower ur love, blessings, likes n comments n I assure to entertain u guys.
Plz I really need it.
Vaise this story of mine is also on-going on Wattpad. My account is MananRads. Plzz if u r tgere on wattpad, do pay a look.
Thankyou
Edited by MaNaN_trS - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: suraiya77

Awesome update
loved it


Thankyou soo muchh!!
U r always the first to read.
Thnx for that.
<3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc concept. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE ~

Guys...do you wish to read this story further...??
Coz there are only 3 ppl reading this ff. ONLY THREE. That hurts yaar. Main itne mann se aur mehnat se likhti hoon but u guys don't reply. Plzz let me if you want to read the story. Plzz yaar bata do. Plzz.
Just don't come, read and walk away.
Thanks anyway!
Love
Manan_trs.
❤️
Edited by MaNaN_trS - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Do continue waiting fr nxt chappy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: barkhachawla95

Do continue waiting fr nxt chappy


Thankss for that dear!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MaNaN_trS

NOTE ~

Guys...do you wish to read this story further...??
Coz there are only 3 ppl reading this ff. ONLY THREE. That hurts yaar. Main itne mann se aur mehnat se likhti hoon but u guys don't reply. Plzz let me if you want to read the story. Plzz yaar bata do. Plzz.
Just don't come, read and walk away.
Thanks anyway!
Love
Manan_trs.
❤️

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Thnxx for liking it!!

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