NIBIR TS- I am always with you[part 3 page 5] completed

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NIBIR TS- I am always with you

The story starts from Kabir leaving Nisha and their agreement about it

Kabir- log sahi kehte hai pehle pyaar bhulana aasan nahi hota

Nisha- pehle pehle pyaar ko samjo aur phir bolo

Kabir looked to the other side in attitude

Nisha continued

Nisha- wo shayaad mera pehla pyaar tha hi nahi attraction tha jisse mai pyaar samji jo meri life ki biggest mistake thi ...shayaad first time esi feeling aayi thi na issliye

Kabir- lekin ab tu Viraj se pyaar karti hai na

Nisha- maine esa kaha kya tujhe...

Kabir was confused but didn't show on his face

Kabir- toh wo Nisha loves Viraj esa tissue pe kyu likha

Being possessive

He tired to hide it too but he also knew he could not hide anything from Nisha

Nisha smiled mentally and blushed a bit making Kabir more interested in the topic

Nisha- wo ...mai waha tera wait kar rahi thi

Kabir- mera???

Nisha- ha ..ma ne hi idea diya tha ki wo tujhe kissi bahane waha bhejengi toh hum humari misunderstandings clear Kare

Kabir was shocked that his mother knew Nisha was waiting for him and she provoked him against her

Kabir didn't react to it

Nisha- aur ek reason tha tujhe waha bolane ka...kuch important batana tha

Kabir- kya

Kabir was a little scared what was to come next as he feared Nisha would tell him she loves viraj
But what she told made him smile widely

Nisha- ye batana tha ki mai jisse duffer, stupid idiot, bandar, joker aur pata nahi kya kya bolati hoon shaadi ki usse 'do do baar '( she said this with her fingers quoting it) uske sath contract banaya uska rule maine hi todh diya

Kabir came close to her a bit

He just prayed what he expected was to come

Kabir- kaunsa rule Nisha

Both were looking in each other's eyes lovingly

Nisha feared that Kabir could say no but today she had to say it

Nisha- tujhse pyaar mai na padhne ka rule

Kabir's happiness had no bounds

He had a guilt that he would lose her if she had not said it today

Nisha still worried about his answer

Nisha was deeply hurt about him leaving her

Nisha- par tujhe kya farak padhta hai tune toh meri DEAL ki hai na

Kabir came more close
Held her by her shoulders to make her look into his eyes

Kabir- I m sorry...tune akeli ne rule nahi todha maine bhi todha hai

Nisha waited for his answer desperately

Kabir- woh rule Ho maine hi likh waya tha ...woh rule tha tujhse pyaar karne ka

Nisha smiled pouring all the heart into her smile

Kabir was happy looking her like this

He didn't think twice and pulled her in a tight hug

Both were crying

Nisha broke the hug

Nisha- promise kar kabhi chod ke nahi jayega

Kabir - promise ...aur waise bhi tujhe yaad hai na itna aasan nahi hai mujhse picha chodana

Kabir tried to make her smile

And as always it worked

Nisha giggled

They both sat on the sofa

Kabir side hugged her

Nisha hugged him tight

Kabir smiled and placed a kiss on her forehead

Nisha- par LSA

Kabir- tu kabhi out of India gayi hai

Nisha nodded no

Kabir- ek idea hai

Nisha- kya

Kabir- mera course 2 saal ka hai ...toh 2 saal ka honeymoon kaisa rahega

Nisha smiled but blushed at the same time

Kabir was surprised he had never seen her blush

Kabir teased her

Kabir - wifey blush bhi karti hai mujhe pata nahi tha

Nisha hit him lightly on his arm

He giggled

Suddenly something struck to Nisha

Kabir- kya hua

Nisha- papa ko phone

Before she could call Ramesh she saw Ramesh and Laxmi entering

Nibir got up

Laxmi was as usual hyper

RL both were shocked to see Kabir

R- Kabir toh chala Gaya tha na

Kabir- nahi woh misunderstanding hoi thi and Laxmi relaxmi... I promise kabhi nahi chodunga isko

RL laughed

Kabir walked to Ramesh

Kabir was guilty of his behaviour

Kabir- papa I m sorry really I mean it

Ramesh - chalo sab theek hogaya

Kabir became tensed

Kabir- matlab apne mujhe maaf nahi kiya

Saying so he pouted

The other three laughed

Ramesh - kya ek baap apne bete se naraj Ho sakta hai

Kabir hugged him

Ramesh patted his back

Nisha and Laxmi were happy

After some chit chatting of four Laxmi and Ramesh left to give this news to the family

Nisha and Kabir were more than happy

Nisha- coffee piyega

Kabir- abhi nahi ek usse bhi jaroori kaam baki hai

Nisha got confused as he came close to her

Before Nisha could understand anything or Kabir could speak something Viraj came To take a check

Viraj was angry

Viraj- app abhi tak gaye nahi

Nisha was about to say something when Kabir stopped her

Kabir - bade bhaiya wo kya hai na maan Badal gaya hai

Viraj ignored him and walked towards Nisha

Viraj- miss Nisha yeh wohi isan hai jisne apki family ko dhoka diya

Nisha- oh really ...jitna mujhe yaad meri life ke best din pe I mean meri shaadi pe ap hi the na wo jisne meri family ki insult ki thi wo Kabir nahi tha

Viraj- aap abhi bhi iss dohke baas pe viswass kar rahi hai isne apki deal ki humare sath aur app

Before Kabir could react

Nisha shouted - Mr. Viraj Singh Rathore app apne app ko samajte kya hai huh

Viraj was shocked and hurt as Nisha never spoke to him in this manner

Nisha- app please do baate yaad rakhiye
First ki mera naam Mrs. Nisha Kabir Kumar hai

Kabir was looking lovingly at his wifey who proudly spoke her name with his

Viraj was hell shocked as he still believed summit 's telling him that Nisha still loved him though he was a lier


TBC


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it was awsum.update d next part soon.
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Totally loved it👏
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Lovely start to ur TS
Can't wait for next part
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Originally posted by: shrutigaur37

it was awsum.update d next part soon.


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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Totally loved it👏

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Originally posted by: Piya1199

Awesome sana👏

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Lovely start to ur TS

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