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PREVIOUS : CHAPTER 3

PROMO

He taking the chance kiss her. She slip her arm over his back pulling him closer & other hand in his hair. He cups her face with one hand & other on her waist after a few seconds Swara pushing him away says) Sanskar please go if Dada comes here he will be hurt (Sanskar says) I will talk to him (Swara says) just go please (Sanskar says) I will never force you don't worry I will wait (Swara says) Please go just go (Sankar is leaving. Swara fall on floor & think how could I get carried away he doesn't even love he can't love me he still loves Kavita I have already once misunderstood Lakshay felling I took his attraction & infatuation to be I can't do that again that night SANSKAR WAS JUST TOO DRUNK THAT IT HE ONLY LOVES KAVITA. Sanskar was hiding behind the curtain he heard & realised what Swara thought & he very well understood why. He at the same time couldn't see her cry

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Interesting promo...

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PREVIOUS : PROMO

CHAPTER 4

(Maan comes & stand in the middle of the hall & call Swara) SHONA COME DOWN (Swara & Sanskar are in between their hug Swara hear the call pushes Sanskar away & runs down right into Maan's arms he hugging her says) Shona pack your you are coming with me (Swara says) okay (Arnav enters. He hugs Swara) SHONA how are you. Now we are here don't worry about anything we will take care (Swara looking at Sanskar says) I know dada I go and pack my bags (Ragini comes forward to hug Arnav. Ragini says) Dada (Arnav looking at her with hate says) You MRS RAGINI GORDODIA LAKSHAY MESHWARI I am not your brother don't you try even coming close to you are no one to me (Swara goes & comes with her luggage. Then she goes takes blessing from the elders. She hugs Sanskar. Arnav says) Shona go to car there is someone waiting for you (Swara says) Who ??? (Swara goes out her Sister in laws are waiting for her inside the car. ADPM says) Who are you (Maan comes sit. He says) does it matter (Sanskar says) Yes it does matter (Maan says) You will know soon Sanskar don't worry (Arnav says) if you are interested tell both your younger brother & his wife to go (Ragini says) But (Maan says) You have no right to know (Lakshay says) But she is part of family (Maan & Arnav says) Thank god Shona was saved from marrying you that the only by chance your wife did one good deed (Lakshay angry leaves. Arnav says) Now you also go with your husband (Ragini also leaves from there. Maan says) now that these two are gone Durga Prasad ji I am MAAN BOSE you must have heard of me anyways your company is doing a deal with me (Arnav says) Dada not one but two (Maan says) Now only one will sustain (Arnav receives a message & says) The one with the your sister concern DHARAM Pvt Ltm will be the one we are giving on the other one (Arnav leaves. Where everyone is happy Ardarsh says) The other one Lakshay has worked very hard on (Maan says) good for him but your not getting that we have better proposal for it you want you can tell him (Lakshman says) but who is he (Maan says) Looks like before doing a deal you don't read all the documents the deal I cancelled right now was with the BOSE ENTERPRISES subsidiary MAAN PVT LMT I own it & the one your son got Mr Lakshman Prasad Meshwari is with the other subsidiary ARNAV PVT LMT & Chote owns that (Sanskar says) So you & him are brothers & Swara is your sister (Maan says) Yes (Maan leaves. DPM says) BOSE ENTERPRISES is the biggest private company in the country. (ADPM asks) Why is Sharmithaji living in the Baadi (DP says) because of Shekhar (Outside the house. Khushi says) Maan Shona has fallen in love with Sanskar (Maan says) I know she is MY SHONA but who told you about the company Choti (Rea says) Shona (Arnav says) let's go home now (Maan says) Shona so much happened why didn't you call me (Swara says) you are always busy & over that Badi Maasi was also staying with you as she was ill & so how could I give you more problems (Arnav says) Shona have you grown so old or your brothers are not capable of taking care of you (Maan says) Swara I didn't expect this from you (Arnav says) Swara, Dada is right (Swara says) Bade Dada & Dada I didn't mean that you know that (Khushi says) forget these two see we have reached (They all get down from the car. They go in Dida does her aarti, she enters the home. She see her uncles & anuty she hugs them all. After that she says) How come you are here I thought you will never come to Kolkata (Ashwariya says) Shona you are right we all had decided never to come here but already Sumi has spoiled her life we couldn't let you do the for the sake of GRODODIAS we can't afford loosing another DUAGTER TO THEM (Swara says) what ever the reason is at lest you all came here & finally we got to come & live here (Jai says) I know your Bade Dada already would have asked you how is your singing (Surya adds) Right you wanted to become a singer Shona (Swara says) Bade Mamaji I have changed plans now I just want to keep it as a hope (Ashwariya says) But you are so good (Komal adds) come with us to Mumbai we help you make it big (Khushi says) anyways Maan has a recording studio also as part of his company (Rea says) Jiji is right then your brother are always there for you (Jai asks) what's wrong Maan & Arnav (Arnav angry says) Swara thinks she has too grown up (Maan says) Swara thinks her brothers can't take care of her (Jai & Surya smiling saying) She gone on Sumi (Jai continues) Sumi was alone but here Shona had Maa & Sumi. (Ashwariya says) stop being angry you all are meeting after so long (Komal says) Jiji is right now Maan & Arnav stop being angry with SHONA (Rea says) come with me Shona (Ashwariya, Rea & Swara leave from there. They all go to kitchen Swara prepare food for both Maan & Arnav to make them happy. In the afternoon Swara serves food to Maan & Arnav while eating realises that it's cooked by her for them. Swara is take food she spill hot dal on hand. Maan & Arnav rush to her. Both together says) Shona be careful see again you hurt yourself (Swara says) I fine just chill (Maan says) Shona come you have burnt your hand (Arnav says) keep the plate aside Shona Dada is right your hurt (Swara says) I am fine leave me you both understand (Khushi & Rea are sitting at the table says) Shona very well knows how to sought these two out (Ashwariya & Komal say) she their sister only (Jai says) she not as short tempered as these two (Sharmitha says) Maan is just like you Bade Dada & Arnav is just like Dada (Surya says) she is smart, intelligent & tolerant (Swara says) Leaves me (runs from there. Mean while Sanskar realises that Swara old number has been discarded. He find a letter on table & reads

To,

Dear Husband,

This is my new if you feel like talking to me 9876543210. Beware don't know ones gets to know actually doesn't if someone gets to Dada will handle it.

Your Wife

Swara.

He dials the number. Swara's phone rings. She see it's Sanskar & picks it. Sanskar asks) where are you (Swara says) why (Sanskar says) your fine (Swara says) I with my family why will I not be fine (Sanskar says) Are you hurt (Swara says) how do you know (Sanskar says) love does that you know (Swara says) how filmy is that (Sanskar says) what happened (Swara says) I burned my hand (Sanskar says) since when have you got so care less (Swara says) that's so mean of you (Sanskar says) why did you do that don't say it was mistake (Swara says) long story (Sanskar says) I have the whole night (Swara says) I don't you might (Swara says) are you in Baadi (Swara says) no I am in my actually house that was taken by Ma few years back for us to live as we wanted to live near to Baba (Sanskar says) okay but where are you (Swara says) do you know where is Bade Dada office I mean BOSE PVT LMT office (Sanskar says) yes (Swara says) same road go straight there is a house BOSE MANSION I am there (Sanskar says) okay (Swara cuts the call. On her door Maan & Arnav are knocking) Open the door Shona please open don't do this (Jai comes there & say) move Shona open the door it's me (Swara already opened the door & was lieing on bed. She says) Bade Mamaji door is open (Jai & Surya go in. Jai say) Shona show me your hand (Surya says) Shona put something (Swara leans into Jai's chest. Jai says) you are no less than them (Swara says) I am their sister after all (Surya says) now forgive them (Swara says) why don't they understand (Ashwariya says) Because for them you are the only one (Komal says) they love you more than their lives (Outside the room. Dida, Sharmitha, Maan, Khushi, Arnav & Rea are there. Maan worried says) why is Shona doing this (Arnav worried says) Dida why she is so stubborn (Rea says) see who is talking (Kushi says) Maan stopping worrying so much it's just a small burn (Sharmitha says) If something so small hurt you two how would have you seen her go through all that (Dida says) Shona knows that. That why she didn't tell tell you both nor did she tell Khushi & Rea about it you two don't realise how difficult for her to not tell her brother you both know what you mean to her don't you (Jai says) Maan, Arnav you both are old enough to understand that Shona knows you both well she didn't want to put you through all that you would have been more hurt than her (Maan & Arnav say together) but she is our responsibility she is our sister (Jai says) that exactly where we lack as brothers don't realise our sisters are strong enough to handle situations themselves & face the world Chote & me made the same mistake at Sumi's time don't repeat it (Ashwariya says) Over that Jai & Chote decided to leave Kolkata & never return (Sanskar was hidden somewhere & hearing all this. He realised why Swara & Sharmitha's never mentioned them at all. Khushi & Rea go in the room. Komal says) Shona knows this well that why she didn't tell you (Maan & Arnav say together) We are sorry (Khushi comes out of the room & says) Maan you know Shona cooked for you both now it's you both who have make it up to her now (Rea adds) you both know very well what to do (Maan & Arnav go inside Swara's room. Sanskar slips in to room no one see him but Khushi notice someone. She tells Rea. Rea also see him but doesn't say anything. Maan & Arnav says) Shona (Swara says) Leave me alone (attacks them with pillows) you heard me leave me alone (Maan walks to her & says) Shona please listen to me (Arnav says) Shona I am sorry (holding his ears says) Shona please forgive your Chote Dada please (Arnav has tears in eyes Swara immediately gets up hugging him says) Chote Dada stop crying. I love you Dada how could you think like that I know it would hurt even more then Dida, Maa & me (Arnav says) but at lest you should have told Dada or me. We would have supported you & not let your life get spoiled like Bua's her father spoiled Bua's & she spoiled yours (Maan says) Shona you ignoring me like I don't exist (Swara ignore him Arnav) Shona stop this you know Dada care for you he just over reacted I also did (Maan with tears in eyes says) Shona sorry forgive YOUR BADE DADA I was extremely worried (He walks towards Arnav & Swara & hugs both of them. Swara says) why do you both do this to me always (Maan & Arnav say together) SHONA (Jai & Surya says) Because these two stupid (Sharmitha says) Just like their fathers ( Dida says) Be it Jia & Surya or be these two Maan & Arnav are highly possessive about their Shona her Mamas are also possessive about her (Swara noticing Sanskar there says) I am tired I want to rest for a while will see you all in evening (They all leave then Swara looks at Sanskar and asks) what are you doing here (Sanskar says) I was missing you so came to meet you (Swara says) if my brothers get to know they will bash you up (Sanskar says) I am not scared (He hugging Swara continues) why didn't you ever mention them to me not even Ragini seem to know probably Shekhar uncle & Parvati Dadi don't even know (Swara says) So what if they don't know there are lot of things they don't know about & when time will they will know & one thing is for sure Ma will divorce Baba (Sanskar says) you did so much to get them together you wouldn't do anything (Swara says) You just saw Bade Dada & Chote Dada small wound on my hand they worry some much how much ever angry they might not be with me just think what Bade Mama & Chote Mama would be how hurt by they would be by what Baba & Dadi have put Ma through & somewhere mom also realised that Baba doesn't deserve her that's why she here after so long in BOSE HAVELI this is Bose residence for generations which Bade Mama & Chote Mama left few years ago as they couldn't see their only sister go through the humiliation & hurt because of Gordodias & now they back only for me as the same family is putting me through hard times & humiliation again (Sanskar says) that a lot of information & it is true as I checked on MAAN BOSE & ARNAV BOSE so found history about the whole BOSE FAMILY the oldest & the richest Bengali business family (Swara says) why would you do that (Sanskar says) I was worried (Swara smiling says) you knew they were my brothers (Sanskar says) I knew but you changed your number (Swara says) Dada only send I mean Chote Dada (Sanskar asks) that letter (Swara says) Chote Dada here it's with me I didn't know within a few hours he will come to pick me up from there (Sanskar says) Okay (Swara says) still didn't tell me why you came here (Sanskar says) to meet you I was missing you (Swara says) I talking to you a while ago (Sanskar says) I wanted to see you I was bored & alone needed some company (Swara says) Okay you should leave & be safe (she putting distance between them he is not liking it but doesn't do anything in the process by chance their lips brush each other. She looks into his eyes. He taking the chance kiss her. She slip her arm over his back pulling him closer & other hand in his hair. He cups her face with one hand & other on her waist after a few seconds Swara pushing him away says) Sanskar please go if Dada comes here he will be hurt (Sanskar says) I will talk to him (Swara says) just go please (Sanskar says) I will never force you don't worry I will wait (Swara says) Please go just go (Sankar is leaving. Swara fall on floor & think how could I get carried away he doesn't even love he can't love me he still loves Kavita I have already once misunderstood Lakshay felling I took his attraction & infatuation to be I can't do that again that night SANSKAR WAS JUST TOO DRUNK THAT IT HE ONLY LOVES KAVITA. Sanskar was hiding behind the curtain he heard & realised what Swara thought & he very well understood why. He at the same time couldn't see her cry so to create some noise he jumped out the balcony that sound made everyone alert. Khushi & Rea had silently seen & heard everything & very well understood why Sanskar did what he did. They saw Swara on floor

Precap : Swara reveals her true feelings about Sanskar to her brother & sister in laws

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Edited by JADEKKD - 10 years ago