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paddu503

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats on new thread. ..

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Uttara.D.Jaiswar

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Posted: 10 years ago

congrats on new thread.. :)
nice update.!

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paddu503

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Posted: 10 years ago

Lovely update. ...nice songs. ...continue soon. .tc

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Alicia2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow great story please update soon

I can not wait for the next part of your story and congratulations on the new thread. Thanks for the pm and Happy Diwali to you and your family and friends

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sailaja

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awsome update sangeet was superb kushi chose a right song for teasing arnav arnav he can't nk dance with kushi arshi dance was superb and their talk about marriage rituals i mean frist night so sweet pura update was amazing

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ameena671

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Posted: 10 years ago

wow mind blowing update loved it can't wait for next part and congrats on new thread thank you for pm.

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Maham Iqbal

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Posted: 10 years ago

Superb dear... Can't wait for next update...

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrts for new thread

Amazing updt

Waiting for next part

Tanx for pm

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Arooma

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Posted: 10 years ago

Congrats for the new thread.

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Hey dear, sorry for late commenting here, was busy with work and my own story.

Ok so when i read the prologue, i thought it will be something like a girl has betrayed Arnav and he is doing stupid things due to heart break 😆

when i read the Character Sketch, i thought that Arnav may have some special abilities, you know super heroes type.😆

But i was surprised when i read further parts and understood Arnav's character. And believe me, when he said that he want to experience pain, the thought came in my mind that he will at some point, in the story, will loose khushi, and when the time came, i was right 😳

I loved their first meeting, Miss Jungli Billi Gupta, 😛 and how Khushi got confuse with his personality.

I like the way how you used the ramp and falling scene from show, in your own improvised version.

Love their journey from hating each other to caring and then friends. The story was light hearted and sweet, exactly the ones i wanted to read and i just LOVED your way of using hindi dailogues in between. And those were some awsome ones.

Sometimes the impact of and expressing one's thought and feelings are done more beautifully by using hindi/urdu dialogues. 😳

I literally cried when Arnav woke up from coma and repented on his actions. And going to Panchgani to manoofy Khushi was so cute.

The awwh moment for me was when Khushi rush into meeting and hug Arnav, after getting to know about his accident.

Love how they confess their feelings to each other, Arnav changed becaz of her and her expressions were cute after finding a changed and more responsible Arnav, hehehe, when she couldn't believe it that he woke up even before her 😆

Very beautifully written story. 😳 , looking forward to more parts.

Edited by Bubbles76 - 10 years ago