Life gave a wonderful gift to us ,our safed love.. - Page 3

Originally posted by: Guruvishva

Beautiful Di 😳

Just loved it 😳

Wonderful treat 😉

Keep rocking 😳

Originally posted by: samanthana

Ware Waah . Indeeed Beautiful poem

Originally posted by: abshcool

what shud i say...it was awesm di...😳😳

as always u left me speechless...😃😳

gr8 work di...👏👏

ur wrds leave me in dreamland...😆

Originally posted by: Janaki696

That's a beautiful one Jenny!!!

Originally posted by: rerose

Wow,life ...itself is a gift from heaven's almighty,

Then what can,we call this gift...is this mighty??

aha lovely 👏

Life can u answer our questions pondering in our inner minds??

If u can prove ur state,then we will surrender ourselves that ur the mightiest mind,

omg jenny this is a philosophy being written out artistically 👏

Can majestic looks added to bond of two ,ENRICH it as the gift of all,

Or your stand can't make out the variations of true qualities of gift from all,

If love is pure in it's eternal form? is that so honourable to become a gift from you?

Then love is present all over the world,in it's pure scenario in minds of lovers,so tell me what is gift according to you.

i loved these lines the most in ur stuff ❤️

Why can't love become a gift to one?

this is damn impactful 👏...a question but a realization 😳

If the one who indulge in love are more pure than the love they have for their loved one,

Moon which glitters and paints the horizon,

Was ready to cover them with it's heavenly white shade as a symbol of their love's zone,

Chocolate the happiness of all people,transformed itself as life giving food,

In the hands of her life giving saviour,which was treated upon by magic of God and disguised as the FAST BREAKING FOOD,

wow love of nature 👏

Husband's love and wife's immense care are the results of Karwachauth ,which are nature's wonderful creations,

And these creations for sure are gift from God,in any way of thinking,that too awesome creations of creations,

These people are not couple in real ,

But they made Karwachauth in real,

His love is pure ,her care is more,

special mention for this last line...don't know why but it shook me up 😃

Hence they are suitable for a future couple's seat,offcourse as the chances for them are more,

He broke her so to be called fast of confusion,

fast of confusion 👏 fab...yeah she was having a fast of being entangled in many aspects 👏

In the land of love that ,I gave them as a result of their honesty's personification,

You asked me a question ,as to how love can become a gift ?

If these people can care for each other more than anything,

THen that love can be and deserve anything,

If love exists in it's pure form in the minds of lovers,

Then these lovers minds are embedded in the hearts of safed's emperor,they are the testimonial lovers,

Wow,this is what ,I didn't ever except from you,

Ur answer holds the justification of reality,which makes one clear about the ideas of a gift to be deserved from u,

I accept your decision to choose love as a gift,

To an ample gifted couple,is the biggest gift of all,

I am sure ur gift makes us jealous,because the loves of the world are pure but the love you have bestowed upon them is immortal,

Which can be engraved on the mighty heavy rocks and stones as the heavenly portal,

The couple for sure will rejoice up to the sky,

For getting a treasure countless of all their desires,which are not as light as the feather that fly in the sky

And they will profess"LIFE GAVE A WONDERFUL GIFT

TO US ,OUR SAFED LOVE,

Which is a prophecy from God for our infinity defeated love.

Originally posted by: Nandita123

what a beautiful, amazing poem pretty.

great work. want to read more of your poems in future.