MaNan OS: Strange Fascination - Page 4

Originally posted by: chair1992

Loved it 😃

you should write more

Originally posted by: Na1na

This is just so amazing!
You've actually made me like this couple so much more..

I'm so glad to have read something from you after so long!
As always you never fail to amaze me!
Love you! :*

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

so beautifully written

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Beautiful post

She also talked to herself, looking towards the sky, as though someone would be listening. If that alone didn't scream crazy - he didn't know what did.

she smiled - at anyone and everyone but him.

Behind him, he heard Nandini's happy exclamation of "Dhruv!" in the midst of her shouting, and somehow he found himself turning around and walking back to the place he had just left, only so he could drag Dhruv away from the stupid girl.

It didn't have anything to do with his ex-Spot, of course.

Originally posted by: Nickel8

This was well-written! You really got down Manik's state of mind in those days. Obsession, attraction, denial. 😆

She also talked to herself, looking towards the sky, as though someone would be listening. If that alone didn't scream crazy - he didn't know what did.

^And he made fun of that pretty often. Nandu and her Aiyappa. 😆

she smiled - at anyone and everyone but him.

It bothered him so much! He even landed up at her place saying you were smiling at Dhruv but not when I told you to! 😆

I loved the way he just kept thinking about her without listening to her rant at him, trying to figure out why he felt that way and just denying that he was attracted to her.

Behind him, he heard Nandini's happy exclamation of "Dhruv!" in the midst of her shouting, and somehow he found himself turning around and walking back to the place he had just left, only so he could drag Dhruv away from the stupid girl.

It didn't have anything to do with his ex-Spot, of course.

Sure it didn't. 😆

A very well written piece!