Unthinkable- A SwaSan TS- Part 2, The Comprehension Series - Page 4

Awww...

Shruti, wow 👏
I'm always ready to read something on SwaSan, especially when someone describe a jealous Swara 😆
When we will get to see those scenes in the show? 😒
Anyways, i loved DP here when he refused to take along Laksh with SwaSan 🥳 Pati aur patni ke beech mein wo 😕
Thank god DP hai 😉
It is wonderful to see a jealous Swara, who finally (yes!) cares for Sanskar.
The dialogues between Arpi & Swara were lovely 😳 And loved how she changed her perception about Arpi at the end.
Sanskar was confused seeing Arpi & Swara as friends 😆 Sanskar ladkion ko samajh na mushkil hi nahi, na mumkin hai 😉
The couple dance was the cherry on the top
This line was absolutely beautiful: 'Swara moved into Sanskaar's arms, as if she had meant to be there from the start.'❤️
It was a delight to read this story 🤗

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Awww...

that's nice..

Loved it..

Sanskar mesmerized by swara's beauty..

Swara falling for sanskar still not ready to accept it...

Party me jealously wala track...

Kaha me a romantic dance expect kar rahi thi aur becche e Sasnakr ke dost aa gai..🤔

Soory for that..

Continue soon...

Loved it

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Shruti, wow 👏
I'm always ready to read something on SwaSan, especially when someone describe a jealous Swara 😆
When we will get to see those scenes in the show? 😒
Anyways, i loved DP here when he refused to take along Laksh with SwaSan 🥳 Pati aur patni ke beech mein wo 😕
Thank god DP hai 😉
It is wonderful to see a jealous Swara, who finally (yes!) cares for Sanskar.
The dialogues between Arpi & Swara were lovely 😳 And loved how she changed her perception about Arpi at the end.
Sanskar was confused seeing Arpi & Swara as friends 😆 Sanskar ladkion ko samajh na mushkil hi nahi, na mumkin hai 😉
The couple dance was the cherry on the top
This line was absolutely beautiful: 'Swara moved into Sanskaar's arms, as if she had meant to be there from the start.'❤️
It was a delight to read this story 🤗

Thank you honey for the lovely comments. So glad you enjoyed it. Me too- so want a jealous Swara too! DP is so awesome at the moment with his SwaSan shipping, I want them to show soon on the show that he "chappeds" Yucks and puts him in his place:). Haha, poor Sanskaar, bipolar Swara totally threw him off! Exactly, it's like don't even try to figure it out Sansku! Glad you liked the dance too! X

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

WOOOWWW!

This was awesome! Truly awesome.

I hope we see a jealous Swara in the show even though there's no reason for her to be jealous since her husband has eyes only for her😉

Please continue👍🏼

Hey! Thanks for liking and commenting:). Exactly, Swara jealous for no reason whatsoever lol! Even poor Arpita was a sweetheart, no designs on hubby pinching:). Will update as soon as I can figure out what to include in the next part:)

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Good morning Shruti...

Un-reserving...

Shruti ..Like always amazing piece of writing... 😳😳 You have again penned down emotions of SwaSan so beautifully. Coming to plot... Loved our taklu... a true SwaSanian as always...😆😆
The poem lines you used..I have read this poem twice... both in reference with Twilight... first time I think I read when I was new to Twilight and was searching for Midnight Sun😆😆 and second time ...It was an fanfiction which I read few months ago.. about Edward being a lawyer .. but this poem left an impression thats why reading the first line made me remember it... 😳😳 I am not a poetry reader but It was so beautiful and simple that you can't forget it... 😳 However ..here it fits so well with SwaSan. Just loved that scene... I would really love to see such scene in show too... And the green-eyed monster... I think Swara really needs a visit from it... otherwise girl will always be tangled up in her parent's or sister's affair... aur apne hubby ko bhooli rahegi... 😆😆 Loved the way used used jealousy concept here... But yahan bhi Swara is so stubborn... Lets see what you have for us in next update...Will Be waiting for it...
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Hey sweetie! Thanks so much for this! Before I say anything- the emoticoms- wow! I sooo love!!! And yayyy you like the poem! Oh midnight sun is awesome- so wish she'd finish it:(. Sansku is a bit Edward (in a nice way) too I think- his love for Swara remind me of how Edward would really do ANYTHING for Bella. Incidentally Swara can be irritating like Bella too:). Totally re the jealousy, this girl wouldn't understand normal speak so these types of measures are necessary for her, kya karein?! That's why I wanted to make Arpita point it out to her. Thinking on next part but I think tonight's plan is the letter to Swara from Sansku:). Lots of love xoxo

So beautifully written...

Originally posted by: anu91

So beautifully written...

Swara jealousy. ...

And their dance was so cool...

Loved it dear...

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome..👏