RaGa TS: Sukoon Mila(prologue-pg1)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Inspired by the precap for Monday's episode... Hope you like it..

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Prologue:

For the first time in their few-day old married life,she saw Ranaji breaking down.She never thought that she will have to witness this sight that pinches her heart. Her heart wrenched seeing him breaking down. Tears formed in her doe-shaped eyes as she felt his pain.

Ranaji was continuously hitting the wood with the sharp axe,venting out all his anger,frustration,pain and sorrow. Gayatri went towards him to stop him. He was unstoppable.

He continuosly blamed himself for ignoring the pain and sorrow of his own people and also blamed for drowning himself in his own pain and sorrow.. He felt really guilty for it.

Finally,he slumped down and broke into fits of tears. Gayatri came beside him to calm him down.. He became hysterical. Gayatri cupped his face and turned him towards her and took him in a warm and loving hug. He kept his head on his shoulder and cried for a long time. Gayatri felt his pain and asked him to relieve himself of the pain. She tried to calm him down by stroking her hand over his back. He hugged her tightly and cried.

It became night and it was now impossible for them to return to Rajmahal. She helped him to stand up. For the first time,Indravadhan heard what his heart said and co-operated with Gayatri. Both had an eyelock which conveyed their feelings. Both of them went towards a hut to stay for the timebeing.

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shailusri1983 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful beginning. Loved how Ranaji shared his pain with Gayatri and how she understood it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue is very interesting...how will the story go, am wondering?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good going girl👏

Thank you for the PM dear🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
Awesome concept...
Just loved it...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome dear thanks for pm !

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