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Posted: 10 years ago
Raat ke humsafar - Updated
I think I can write something for this chapter. May be later if time permits.

Deeps I would have loved to have this chapter as part 3 of your last update instead of that scene. But well you are the writer and so you get the choice.

@ Gutterness hopefully Is raat ki subah nayi ho and that too early 😆 😆
Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update
khushis beginning to question her worth
poor lassie feels so lost
seeing n getting the love that shes getting from Arnavs parents is making her compare it to her past n realizing how much shes missed out on
like how shes needing to know shes got Arnav n he wont leave
def step in right direction
Arnav just has to keep his wits n wait shes slowly starting to need Arnav n want his love
looking forward to next update
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it! Nothing else to say! Your update has said everything that needs to be said!
Beautifully penned down! And just brilliance sheer brilliance!

Cheers
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Bhavi

Are u for real

Its happening again and seems like I am falling into this habit while reading your update Deeps.
Kya boloo? Am out of words for now.

Although my heart is all for Khushi Its Arnav that again takes the cup as always. What are you doing to that poor soul You are torturing him. Bol diya Bas bol diya (like in KKKG)

There is something serene about night and its conversation. The stillness of nights always brings out the storm of the heart. In the midst of darkness once own darkness peeps out encompassing the light that tends to pass through it. Khushi was at the lowest low with her heart yearning to find atleast one soul for whom she meant something. She wants to scratch that words from her past, those statements and prove that one person wrong and so she is asking the question WHY? Arnav is totally confused with that question and so he asks her what she wants to hear and she said in clear terms with not mincing a single word what she wanted to hear and why? That was one moment where I wanted to hug Khushi till all her pain is out of her system and I was surprised that Arnav kept a distance. No I am not complaining. His pain was visible.
I would say this is their first conversation so far. They communicated at all levels. He nurtured her, he supported her, he cheered her up, he spoke to her, he asked her wish, he wiped her tears, he gave her a smile and most imp he made her sleep meaning that he made her heart at peace. 👏 Khushi is one lucky soul to find such a person. Despite brain who does not want this as a friendship heart has started to learn that this is not a friendship. Its beyond it.

Khushi went to the plethora of emotions this night. From being sad to being enthusiastic, from being lost to having hope, from meant nothing to meant everything and you my dear did a splendid job in depicting it. I loved when she smiled with f**k those people.

My heart danced with her 3D action saying how she was auspicious to some one. My heart yearned with her when she wanted Arnav to call him with other names other than Khushi but I guess i am partial to your Arnav as i felt more proud of him today. He is the guy who is ready to accept her with all the past demons and is ready to walk her out of it. He feels with her however his pain is more to me as he takes everything in his stride. His heart breaks every time he sees her tears, he wants to kiss those tears but alas its not yet possible. He wants to shout at her that she means world to him but he can not do that. His silent thankyou to his parents and then asking her to study more. The guy is just a huge support.

I sincerely hope that he gets his share soon and that too without regret. I don't want Khushi to fall for him because of some ehsaan but want to fall for him for the man he is.







I guess will leave with these 2 songs for now and its from Arnav's perspective.😃

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0Qhe1ShaXQ[/YOUTUBE]
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5vPvg9BMkKc[/YOUTUBE]



And finally food of thought for Khushi who is starting to fall for the goodness of this man.
(I so wanted to use this quote the moment i saw it and it fits in here so well😳 )





Oh my my thank you for the wonderful comment. I am so glad u liked this chap...

The song Mujhe Raat Din, never heard it before. Its beautiful I wonder which movie it is.


PS: The quote on marriage, 😆 I have to show that to my husband.

And yes I am waiting for those signatures lines from you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh that was a real surprise
Loved it - excellent update deepthiya - what a night it has been for Arnav and Khushi - one among the most cherished nights, I guess
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Posted: 10 years ago
Deeps the name of the movie is Sangharsh, Mahesh Bhatt movie and I want to write it down but mind is jumbled up in the numbers and dead lines these days

I have a question for you:
IN midst of all the angst and drama that Khushi's life is facing has she forgotten that Arnav proposed him? 😕 😕

I am sure Arnav must be singing this song once he reach home😆

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFxEmdEtBN0[/YOUTUBE]



Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
just beautiful update
thanks for the pm xx
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Bhavi

Deeps the name of the movie is Sangharsh, Mahesh Bhatt movie and I want to write it down but mind is jumbled up in the numbers and dead lines these days

I have a question for you:
IN midst of all the angst and drama that Khushi's life is facing has she forgotten that Arnav proposed him? 😕 😕



Nope She has not. Its only been a day since she left her family, and her emotions are high on the edge. And the chps 36, 37 was needed to give closure to them wrt to her parents. She is right now living under delusional world that she got her friend back.

From chp 38 you will see changes, as I dont wish to drag the loss of her parents anymore. Its time to break the bubble. 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ToxicLove



Nope She has not. Its only been a day since she left her family, and her emotions are high on the edge. And the chps 36, 37 was needed to give closure to them wrt to her parents. She is right now living under delusional world that she got her friend back.

From chp 38 you will see changes, as I dont wish to drag the loss of her parents anymore. Its time to break the bubble. 😉


@bold.. Now your posts also became like teasers.. Poor my tiny brain.


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ToxicLove



Nope She has not. Its only been a day since she left her family, and her emotions are high on the edge. And the chps 36, 37 was needed to give closure to them wrt to her parents. She is right now living under delusional world that she got her friend back.

From chp 38 you will see changes, as I dont wish to drag the loss of her parents anymore. Its time to break the bubble. 😉


I feel like an achievement 😆 I posted the correct song above then 🥳 🤣

I guess I have spammed this thread enough 😳
Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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