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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you so much for this surprise Deepthi.. You are really a darling...🤗.


No one ever touched my feet... No one ever.. Her heart flinched for his touch .. for the first time ever.


She never lived her life as the way it suppose to be. She never got the importance she deserves, She never got the Love she deserves.. She never got the life she deserves...


Everything she is experiencing now knocking her senses and whispering her there are many things she never felt in her life.. ever. All her first times are happening with the man who is loving her unconditionally.. but she is not in the state to accept him .. what an irony... I think it is called Life and life's never fair. It needs patience to bring the journey of life on to the right track when it gets out of the track. For that she needs support and he is offering that support with love.


You showed Khushi's emotions so beautifully Deepthi. The unwantedness she felt all through her life.. and the things happening in her life proving the words of the most disgusting person in her life.. all together broke her down pushing her into the tsunami of unpleasant memories.


She is yearning to hear from him.. that she is not alone in her life... She is not unwanted as he said.. She is not left with nothing, as he cursed... But why she wanted to hear it from him... His every action is speaking that he will never let her alone. He proved that again by coming back for her.. But her depressed mind needed the assurance. It's needs the push to fight back her demons.


But his silence when she needed his words, unnerved her. She is understanding slowly .. the importance of him in her life.. which is beyond any relation.


"Will I ever matter to anyone" ...


Deepthi.. how well you make my heart wince with the emotions you evoke with just simple statement like this. This sentence spoke loud enough how much her soul is in pain.


"You matter to so many people out there Khushi. You just need to open your eyes and see to yourself that You are their world!"


A perfect answer to advise her it's just you to see how much she is surrounded with Love. She is trying to see the world around her with her eyes closed while her mind is clouded with the darkness of her past. He just told her to open her eyes and look at the open arms trying to reach her with hands full of love to pour into her heart.


But whenever she tries to see the light he shows her... her own family pulls her back into the darkness. His own family is proving the dejected words of the jerk.. and that is not making the situation of her mind any better.


Arnav.. for this update.. I never saw Dr. Rji... It's all about Arnav.. who touched the feet of the woman of his life for the first time... Who wanted to wipe away the tears she is shedding... He just became Arnav tonight being an anchor to his woman who is in need of his shoulder to rest on to control her emotions. And he gave what she needed his shoulder. Brilliant Deepthi..


"Always appreciate those who love you, but never forget those who hate you. People who play with your emotions make you stronger. They teach you how to fight back. That doesn't mean people who love you are going to play weak in your life. They will be one step ahead of you to protect you, they will be one step behind you to catch you from a fall"


Deepthi.. This para is the most favorite of mine in the entire update. You just said what Arnav became for her .. what Khushi is yearning for.. What SBH is all about.. What a life is.. How much people are important in one's life.. and what is Deepthi capable of.. In this one single Para... I was blown away with these marvelous words. I am paying you with a bow for the amazing writer in you Deepthi. You are simply the best. Love youuu.


Yes.. so true.. People who hates you are very important in anyone's life as much as their loved ones. Actually we learn how to live from the people who hates you.. How to be tough in life.. how to fight back.. In life we cannot connect with all the people. There will be always few people around you whom you hate or who hates you.. Either way it is you who should deal with those people. I was stuck at this pars for so much time.. I really loved it...loved it a lot.


"F*ck everyone who messes with you!"..LOL this is the only one line where I saw a glimpse of Dr. Rji..


Ok After this all became very blurry to me.. You know.. My mind got stuck at that Para.. So I took a break and read those lines many times ...


Finally .. she talked about he job.. So after all the discussion.. she said she is good at cooking.. Mmm .. will Arnav think to make her start a catering business.. Delektable Morsel,,,LOL.. This TVK never goes out of my head..


I really loved the sweet moments where these two souls just talked .. one to ease her heart.. another to calm his heart. An amazing and beautiful and romantic in its own sense.. language of it's own.. wrote a silent poem in my heart.


Mmm.. he took off for her.. I wonder how she reacts after knowing that.. Ahha.. Khushi please take a look at the man who is giving his best to make you feel better.. He is not t all trying to make you feel his feelings.. He is making you to feel yourself strong.. Arnav he is the man.. A dream every woman wants. Deepthi why all of your Arnav's has to be the most wanted and desirable ones.


Deepthi.. Outstanding update.. I loved it so much.. I felt like it is the most important update for Khushi to feel the push she needs. The emotion is in right dose and the subtleness in his voice and the touches is just mindblowing. Simply .. it's only possible for you to give such an awesome words etching my heart with the golden words written by you. You are the best.. Period. 🤗 How many times you will make me ask you.. Are you for real.


Coming to the alignment.. it happened to me too earlier once.. No matter what I did ..it didn't work.. and the alignment buttons in the post window never works.. So just use the Left alignment BBcode.. .. it will fix everything.. usually it happens when you try to align the title using central.. sometimes it doesn't recognize the ending the code. I hope it helps you.
Edited by lovedrops - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woww...post reserved for an update. .can't wait really. ..
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Posted: 10 years ago

unres 😊

beautiful update as usual deepthi😛
and the conversation they had was lovely... the way he lifts her and puts her on bed, and the way he applies ointment and the way he consoles her about her loved ones, the way he encourages her, and everything was very beautiful...
kushi had done it all her life.. she is a selfless person.. she keeps herself before everyone and always thinks of others happiness.. as a daughter, as a wife, as a sister... but I felt sad, when she says that she has no one in her life to love her.. and what Arnav said is right,, there are so many people who loves her, and all she has to do is, open her eyes and see..
I thought kushi would love to join the hospital and assist Arnav .. as she has lost her babies, I thought she will find some happiness in helping others to bring their child into this world.. but, when I thought about the way you have written it, I felt even that is true,, she has bad experience with hospitals, so she might not like it... depends on how we take things😊
i'm glad that he is encouraging her to study...
I loved every bit of this update deepthi👏⭐️ read it so many times...
though there are so many problems in her life, I felt some kind of peace in the way they both were chatting in the middle of the night, like two close friends chatting on everything and anything about their lives😊
this is what I felt in the end.. no matter what, he is always there for her and with her...
thank you so much for this early and beautiful update deepthi😃
ps: very sorry for this late comment,, AD is not hectic at all. but not finding time between mom's pampering in my mayka😉😆
Edited by pravallika - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for late editing:/ AD is pretty hectic these days..:( thanks for giving update as i was expecting teaser:) lovely conversation.. Khushi sharing her insecurities of being alone, her past incidents related to karan, her family's ignorance, her failure towards job and many more..:/ but their is only one answer and i.e. ARNAV" the way he advises her, almost takes away the pain from her heart.. He is the one that will tend her bruises not only physically but given by her past, her family:)

I love the way khushi mixed herself with his family and considering them her own:) arnav knows how to give direction to her life as he wi her choose her career and this will help her come out of those things that she suffered badly:/ her new realisation towards arnav brings enormous joy in my heart..:) beautiful update deepthi.. Thanks for pm:)
Edited by Dhrenu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Un ress

So many firsts in this chapter for both of them. Khushi was always cared for others and Arnav got cared by his family and family. But now their roles got reversed and both found satisfaction, for Khushi is was being cared for the first time and for Arnav, caring for his loved ones.

Khushi needs some more time accept her present condition, even though the Raizada's are kind and loving people, I think it is making her more sad thinking why her parents are not as understanding as the senior Raizadas. She needs some distraction and she should look for work, even if it is not paid one, like volunteering at a NGO.

Awesome update akka.
Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update dear please update soon
Edited by sweetydoll32 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Are u for real
Its happening again and seems like I am falling into this habit while reading your update Deeps.
Kya boloo? Am out of words for now.

Although my heart is all for Khushi Its Arnav that again takes the cup as always. What are you doing to that poor soul You are torturing him. Bol diya Bas bol diya (like in KKKG)

There is something serene about night and its conversation. The stillness of nights always brings out the storm of the heart. In the midst of darkness once own darkness peeps out encompassing the light that tends to pass through it. Khushi was at the lowest low with her heart yearning to find atleast one soul for whom she meant something. She wants to scratch that words from her past, those statements and prove that one person wrong and so she is asking the question WHY? Arnav is totally confused with that question and so he asks her what she wants to hear and she said in clear terms with not mincing a single word what she wanted to hear and why? That was one moment where I wanted to hug Khushi till all her pain is out of her system and I was surprised that Arnav kept a distance. No I am not complaining. His pain was visible.
I would say this is their first conversation so far. They communicated at all levels. He nurtured her, he supported her, he cheered her up, he spoke to her, he asked her wish, he wiped her tears, he gave her a smile and most imp he made her sleep meaning that he made her heart at peace. 👏 Khushi is one lucky soul to find such a person. Despite brain who does not want this as a friendship heart has started to learn that this is not a friendship. Its beyond it.

Khushi went to the plethora of emotions this night. From being sad to being enthusiastic, from being lost to having hope, from meant nothing to meant everything and you my dear did a splendid job in depicting it. I loved when she smiled with f**k those people.

My heart danced with her 3D action saying how she was auspicious to some one. My heart yearned with her when she wanted Arnav to call him with other names other than Khushi but I guess i am partial to your Arnav as i felt more proud of him today. He is the guy who is ready to accept her with all the past demons and is ready to walk her out of it. He feels with her however his pain is more to me as he takes everything in his stride. His heart breaks every time he sees her tears, he wants to kiss those tears but alas its not yet possible. He wants to shout at her that she means world to him but he can not do that. His silent thankyou to his parents and then asking her to study more. The guy is just a huge support.

I sincerely hope that he gets his share soon and that too without regret. I don't want Khushi to fall for him because of some ehsaan but want to fall for him for the man he is.







I guess will leave with these 2 songs for now and its from Arnav's perspective.😃

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b0Qhe1ShaXQ[/YOUTUBE]
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5vPvg9BMkKc[/YOUTUBE]



And finally food of thought for Khushi who is starting to fall for the goodness of this man.
(I so wanted to use this quote the moment i saw it and it fits in here so well😳 )


Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Loved it
Arnav z so understanding...
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Posted: 10 years ago

😆🤗

Good night. Hitting the bed now.
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Originally posted by: bhavali4RR

Thanks Kavi, and what a surprise Deepthi 😃Is it our Navrathri Special?


Manasa, I didnt realize it as Navaratri special update. Since you reminded me, Why not...

Will I be digging my own grave, if I think aloud that Diwali is coming up reminding...😉

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