NiBir TS || Yaadien || (Part 2 - pg 5) *12/10*

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I am back 😆


Actually I wanted to an OS but then the OS I wrote crossed 2500 words so now it became a TS (Two shot) 🤣

So here I am posting it so that you guys get a head ache after you read it 😆

Hope you like it I will be waiting for your feedback 😳


Note : This is a two shot you won't get another part for this TS 🤣





* INDEX*

Part 1 - pg 1

Part 2 -pg 5







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NiBir TS


|| Yaadien ||

" Kabir ... Kabir ... Kabir.. kahan gaya yeh... Kabir ... "

Nisha had searched the entire house but Kabir was no where to be found... She was scared that he would have left her.. Yesterday when she stopped him on the station and they both confessed that they love each other he promised her that he will never leave her and go but today he was missing ...

Her heart started racing and she felt that it she will get a heart attack any moment , she started to intake deep breaths thinking that it would calm her but that was not helping either... she felt like her crying...

"Kabir...please mazak bandh kar .. mujhe daar lag raha hai.. "

She finally broke down and sat on the sofa holding her head

"Tune promise kiya tha Kabir tu kabhi nahi jayega par tu chala gaya... I hate you Kabir ... "

She was crying her heart out when she felt a hand on her shoulder ... she turned to see her cousins there... She got up and hugged Dolly...

"Nishu.. kya hua tur o kyun rahi hai ...??"

Dolly asked while patting her back waiting for Nisha's reply but she never got one

"Main pani leke aati hun "

Jwala went in the kitchen and got a glass of water for Nisha , After a lot of insistence she had a few sips and then Dolly asked her again what the matter was ...

"Vo Kabir ... vo chala gaya... Usne promise kiya tha phir bhi vo chala gaya ..."

She hugged her and cried again... the cousins face-palmed and started at her ...

"Ohho Nisha .. tu issliye ro rahi hai ?"

Dolly asked casually making Nisha shocked she looked at the others and they had similar casual expressions on their faces , this made Nisha angry ... She got up and yelled

"Kabir mujhe chodke chala gaya aur tum sab itne normal behave kar rahe ho ??"

Dolly caught her hand and pulled it making her sit on the sofa again , she wrapped an arm around her neck and said

"Nishu .. Kabir kahin nahi gaya ...Vo sirf ghar gaya hai Dadaji se kuch baat karne ke liye "

Nisha closed her eyes and sighed in relief

"Pata hai kitna daar gai thi main... Kaise ajeeb ajeeb khayal aa rahe the maan main"

She confessed her fear infront of them and they took her in a hug they heard someone cough and all turned towards the direction of the sound , Kabir stood there with a stern expression on his face ...

"Tum sab kya kar rahe ho yahan ??"

He asked and came near them

"Hum yahan Nishu bro ke saath time spend karne aaye the "

Jwala replied cheekily

"Aur maine jo kaam kaha tha vo ?"

He went and looked at Saurav and Sukku , he gave them deadly stares and they both gulped saliva in their throat

"Vo.. hum.. vo "


Sukku started stammering with his words

"Hum sab chalte hai chalo.. "

Saurav caught Jwala's hand and Sukku signalled others to leave , before Nisha could react all were out already... she looked at Kabir with questioning eyes...

"Kya .. aise mat dekh tere liye kuch surprise plan kiya hai uske arrangements karne hi bheja tha but sare yahan aagaye tere pass"

He came to her and gave her a hug , Nisha reciprocated the hug and complained

"Tu aise mujhe bina bataye kyun chala gaya.. ? pata hai kitna daar gai thi main ..."

Kabir broke the hug and cupped her face...

"I am sorry Nisha... but tu bohut gheri neend main so rahi thi aur bohut cute bhi lag rahi thi issliye tujhe disturb kiye bana hi chala gaya "

He kissed her forehead and then started walking towards the room without giving her anytime to react ...

Nisha frowned and followed him , she was surprised to see him taking out their bags ...

"Kabir kya kar raha hai ? "

"Wifey hum bahar ja rahe hai do din ke liye issliye samaan pack kar raha hun ... Tub hi apna saman pack kar le ..."

He gave her bag to her and started packing his stuff... Nisha was confused but she did as her said... after sometime Saurav came to their house and gave him the car keys ...

"Everything is done .. enjoy the trip " he wished them and took a leave...

Kabir went and opened the door of the passenger's side for Nisha and then went to the driver's seat ... after a while of driving he stopped the car ...

"Kabir hum pohunch gaye kya ??" Nisha asked curiously

"Nahi... par thode der main pohucnh jayenge " Kabir replied and started searching something in his pocket

"Arey phir tune gadi kyun rokh di ? " She was getting curious with every passing minute

"Kuch kaam tha issliye "

Kabir replied and leaned towards her , Nisha's heart started beating faster than usual

"Kaisa.. kaisa kaam ?" she closed her eyes when she felt Kabir's breath on her cheeks...

Kabir kept reading her expression and smirked as he understood what she was thinking.. he tied a blind fold and then placed a kiss on her cheek... Nisha felt the blind fold cloth and asked ...

"Kabir .. yeh kya kiya .. main isse khol rahi hun..."

She was about to untie the cloth but Kabir caught her hand ...

"Arey.. kyun khol rahi hai.. surprise hai thoda toh interesting hona chahiye na .. abh chup chap beth hum thodi der main pohunchne hi wale hai..."

He started driving again and Nisha kept questioning him about where they were going .. what he had planned etc etc... Finally they reached the destination and stopped the car ...

"Pohunch gaye " He declared ...

"Main blind fold kholun ? " Nisha said excitedly but Kabir again stopped her...

"Rukh .. Main khud kholunga ..." He got down of the car and came towards Nisha's side , he opened the door and caught her hand helping her come out of the car.. he untied the blind fold.. after adjusting her eyes to the sudden light Nisha started seeing around to see where they were she was pleasantly surprised to see where Kabir had bought her...


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A/N : As usual I have not proof read my work so please ignore the errors 🤣 and do leave a feedback , silent readers like hi kar dena agar acha lage toh 😳


Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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jaldi post karo waiting
unres
nisha kitna daar gyi
bechare cousins ko yeh dono pagal kar dege
nibir trip wow
Kya niyu suspense mein chod diya
jaldi update karna please
Ritika
Edited by mishrialways - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

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jaldi post karo waiting

posted 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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luved it bhabhi... I understand nishu's fear... kisi ko khone ka darr itni jaldi nhi jata... but I luved cousins... kabira ka plan janne k lie m so excited
Edited by mansi_as18 - 10 years ago
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are ye kya hua its awesome yaar tu kabir jaisi kyun hogayi suspence mai hi mardegi lagta hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute story, niya... 😊 .Waiting for the surprise to be revealed...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishrialways

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jaldi post karo waiting
unres
nisha kitna daar gyi
bechare cousins ko yeh dono pagal kar dege
nibir trip wow
Kya niyu suspense mein chod diya
jaldi update karna please
Ritika


Thanks Ritika ... Sabar karo sabar ka phal meetha hota hai ... 😳
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

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luved it bhabhi... I understand nishu's fear... kisi ko khone ka darr itni jaldi nhi jata... but I luved cousins... kabira ka plan janne k lie m so excited


I know ...😆
Jaldi pata chal jayega 😆

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