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Jenny

@Laugh.

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Awh *pulls your cheeks* This is damn cute! ❤️ They met, they talked, they teased and they fell in love

The OS did start off according to the song video and I thought that you would exactly show us the video by your writing, but you didn't which made me more happy 😳 I love your creativity!

The cycling scene was superb! The kid loved his bribe and we loved the so-cute race! Crocodile on road, seriously Khushi? 🤣

Next the scene where Arnav is bare-bodied and Khushi blushes Wow they matched colors in clothing! Blue-blue <3

And of course, I loved when Arnav sand the song for Khushi and the things that followed ❤️ Damn romantic!

Sanju, please I want a second part 😳 With more of teasing and blushing With more love and hot romance

Ily! <3

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Sanjana

@-SanjanaSobti-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Laugh.
Awh *pulls your cheeks* This is damn cute! ❤️ They met, they talked, they teased and they fell in love
The OS did start off according to the song video and I thought that you would exactly show us the video by your writing, but you didn't which made me more happy 😳 I love your creativity!

The cycling scene was superb! The kid loved his bribe and we loved the so-cute race! Crocodile on road, seriously Khushi? 🤣

Next the scene where Arnav is bare-bodied and Khushi blushes Wow they matched colors in clothing! Blue-blue <3

And of course, I loved when Arnav sand the song for Khushi and the things that followed ❤️ Damn romantic!

Sanju, please I want a second part 😳 With more of teasing and blushing With more love and hot romance

Ily! <3

Aww Jenny 🤗 Thank you so much for this wonderful comment<3 I'll see if I could continue 😳

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Sanjana

@-SanjanaSobti-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: .LadyHitler.
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You haven't told me but i still got a place in the first page!

*Edited*
You are really good at writing One Shots!
Coming to this OS, i don't even know how many times i've read this! This always brings a smile on my face!
Marriage is heaven if you get a perfect partner and Anjali is experiencing that!
Arnav's introduction was great with group of girls drooling over him and sparks between ArShi at their first sight itself!
Loved this childish Khushi who won race with Arnav by cheating! Pagal hai par cute hai;):P
And then the sherwani scene...hayee What do i say? Arnav's teasings, Khushi blushing and not to forget, Arnav in towel ☺️
Arnav's proposal was the best i've ever read! Calling her to meet him with such a beautiful song,

"An angel who is supposed to reciprocate my feelings, but instead is asking stupid questions!"

"A crow will bite you then!"
Haha! 🤣
Great work kiddo!

P.S. Nice banner! :)

Nish🤗 Thank you sooo much <3 I know I've said this before, but again, aap best ho The way you analyse things, notice the things which the writer want to be noticed and then point it out in the comment, surely makes me smile! <3 Thank you for the banner 😳 I love u^___^

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coolie001

@coolie001

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

WOW!

it is a real wooow ji

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Sanjana

@-SanjanaSobti-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: coolie001
WOW!
it is a real wooow ji

Thank you :*

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Rish_Rubles

@Rish_Rubles

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: -SanjanaSobti-

Rishhh 🤗 Thank you 😳 Have you seen Dil Dhadakne Do? Arnav and Khushi would have looked more cuter than Anushka and Ranveer are looking 😃 Thank you so much! <3

Yes I have and indeed they would have just fitted well in the picture!

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Sanjana

@-SanjanaSobti-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Rishaal

Yes I have and indeed they would have just fitted well in the picture!

Yesh

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Will come from lappy
Awesome OS

-edited-

Okay let's start

When I started reading it

I said oh no, here is the ASR and the cat and dog fight will start, the she will fall for the arrogant ASR it's gonna be typical like the others, but as i continued it was not like i though.

So I'm happy. I see you have took few things from the video and made them better, adding more ditails and changing them for a better OS.

The second part was the best. But the part that was out of the word was Arnav's confession.

Simply, adorable, romantic and unexpected.

I enjoyed it a lot 🤗.

Thanks for the beautiful piece of work.

Well done

Keep writing more 👍🏼

Edited by Preet.Kc - 10 years ago