Short FF: Park Road House #666 (THE END) - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
now im thinking..is it nachiket?😳🤔 man..suspense is good ben...keep it up...??😆


Continue soon😃
Edited by ~Pachu*n*Abhi~ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#62
hey guli................

suspense is building up....................

who killed pia.......

adi??????????nachiket?????????????

update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#63
NOTE FROM GULI:

Sorry for not updating this morning due to not writing any parts last night, while talking to me, pachu 😃 😆 ..kidding, well she couldn't update cuz she has barely 2 parts pending for this FF, but she did say, she will update in about 4 hours!!! 😃

HAPPY WAITING ALL 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
Hai Guli,
Great going 👏 👏 👏 ...Man this is just more and more entangled....you are really making us think 🤔 .....Now where did Nachiket go 😳 🤔 😔 ....Pls cont soon 😳 😃
Edited by melonie - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
Part 20

Natu came inside into his room!!!!

And then

He reaches in his pocket

And he's like

Oh man

Where's the knife???

He's stunned!!

He looks outside

And he sees it on the floor!!!!!

Wen he's looking

The insp car pulls up again!!!

And he's like dear god!!!!

Damn!!!

He goes back inside!!

Insp comes…

And he's walking towards the main door…..

And he sees this shiny object on the floor

And he comes to it

And sees that it's a knife!!!!

Wat was a knife doing there…?

He picks it up with a napkin

So that way his fingerprints..

Don't get on it!!!

And he gives it to one of the cops

And sees

Who's fingerprints are on it?

Rano is still crying!!

Ranveer was there with her

She told him to go!

But he refused!!

He's like

I want to be here with you

And make sure that you are okay!!

Rano: But Raashi…
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
Part 21

Ranveer looks at her

He's like

U know what I feel about her

And then you still want me to go to her

He's like

That's not wat will happen!!!!

She looks at him!!!!

Ranveer: U know I love you and only you!!!

And I cant love anyone else!!!

Rano is crying

And getting all emotional!!!

And those words…

I love you….

Are playing over and over again

**Flashback**

It was Valentine's Day!!

Bani was in the kitchen…

And she was making a cake for Jai!!!

And this one was a special one

And it was his favorite

She was decorating and what not

And she put those three words…

I love You!!!!!

This was the 1st time that she was going to say I Love you to him!!!

It was always him

But today

It was her turn to express her feelings

And she wanted to do it

On this cake!!!

She had called him from the office

And asked him

To come home early!

Jai: Any specific reason???

Bani: Yes!!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
#67

firssst !!!
Now where did Nattu go?

Aww Bani is gona say i love u!!!

Edited by InTheZone123 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
saved all parts, will read and get back to comment 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
Part 22

Jai: And whats the reason???

Bani: U should know!!

Jai: Hmm

He thinks and thinks!!!

Bani: This is no time for jokes!!!

Jai: But really I don't know…

Bani: Oh so…

U don't want to come home for me??

I see that ur work..

Is way important than your wife!!

Jai: No…….

Its not that!!

Bani: So I asked you to come home early…

And you have to think about it!!!!

That's very rude!!

And she hangs up the phone!!

Jai looks at his phone…

And he's like

Omg!!

She hung up on me!!!!

He finishes everything in about 15 mins!!!!!

And he gets into his car

And he goes home

Bani was done with the cake

And she put it in the fridge!!

She had heard Jai's car

And she ran to see

And it was him!!!

She was smiling like anything

But then

She changed her emotion

And she's like

Let him come!!!

Jai got of his car….
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Posted: 18 years ago
#70
Part 23

He came inside

Yelling for Bani's name!!!

Bani was going up the stairs

He called her

But she turned around

Gave him the stare…

And then

She continued to walk

Jai is like oh man!!

She's mad!!!!!!!

He goes upstairs

And he follows her

And she's by the window

Standing there

And he comes behind her

And he wraps his arms around her

Bani: What???

Jai: Bani????

I am sorry!!!!!!!

Bani: Why are you here??

You should be at work

Cuz you like ur more work!!

Wen ur wife tells u to come early

U don't want to!!

So why did you leave ur work!!

Jai: Today my wife is very upset!!!!

I want to know why!!

Bani: Becuz!!! I planned the whole day…

And ur ruining it

Jai: U planned the whole day????

Then why did you make me go to work!

Bani: Becuz!!!

Jai: Well now I am here

What did you want to do?


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