Short FF: Park Road House #666 (THE END)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hello!!!!😆😆 Sick of me??😆😆 Well tough!!😆😆 Me never stop coming!😆😆

Cuz i am back with FF #24!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This one will be probably be the shortest FF!!!!!! It will def be less than 100 parts!!! Maybe only 50 parts!!!!!! But i am not sure!! But it will def not be long!!!!

Park Road House.......#666.......

What happened???........ Well you will easily find out.... in the 1st two parts.....


Victim: Pia Dixit

Suspects:

Adi
Jigs
Ranveer
Rano
Raashi
Natu
Dadi
Masi

What were they all doing?????

I just hope you guys will read this FF as there is no JB!!!!... They will be in here... but only as flashbacks....... Only becuz they are "no more"!.. but plz do read it....... thats why this FF is short!!!!!....


I hope you guys will read it!!!!😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1

Starts off in a house…..

This house was located on Park Road..

And it was house #666…

It belonged to none other than Pia Dixit!!!!

Its all dark!!!

It was about midnight….

It was quiet like anything!!!!!

You go inside the bedroom

And there was Pia sleeping on her bed!!!!!!!!

She had a smile on her face!!!!…..

No tension!!!

Just sleeping away!!

And then

She heard a noise!!!!

She opened her eyes

And saw!!!

She was alone in the house

So no one was suppose to be there!!!

And she knows

All the doors are locked!

So where did that noise come from?

She had sat up on the bed!!

There was nothing there

Ad nothing was moving!!!!!

She thought maybe she was imagining it!!

She had laid down again!!

But then

She heard a noise again!

But this time

It was coming closer and closer

And she had yelled out

Is anyone there????

She started to get freaked out!!!!

She closed her eyes tightly!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2

She was thinking

That she was losing it!!!!!

But then

She slowly opened her eyes

And no one was there!!

She laid back down

Wen she heard another noise!

She quickly shot up!!!!!

And she's like who is there??

She was yelling!!!

And then

She saw a shadow!!

Who was that??????

Pia; Who????

Who are you?

What do you want??

The shadow came closer!!!!

Pia was trying to see

But she really couldn't…

The shadow was in the room!!!!!!!!!!

Pia is like who are you??

The person had a mask!!!……..

They were pointing a gun at her!

And then they took off the mask!!!!!

And then

Pia looked up!!!!!

And she was stunned!!

She's like you????????

And then

BAAAAAAAAAAAAM!!!

She was shot!!!!!!!!!!!

Right in the heart!!!!

And she just fell back!!!!

And there she was lying there dead on the bed!



The End!

(Please do comment and let me know what u think)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I really don't know what to say...I juuuust finished commenting on Ek Hi Rishta...And another FF again... 😆 I want to say Congratulations on your 24th FF... 😉 👏
Wow...This story is really different from others...Awww...Bani and Jai are no more... 😭 Let's see how the story progresses... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Congrats on your 24th ff
A mystery and horror ff
Pia got killed in part 2 👏 👏 👏
i can imagine this being one of the hunted house
please continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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a mystery ....
frist one you 24 fanfic
i have read is a mystery
great part
i think i just read a new fanfic
from u yesterday and u got another
one already were do u get all that time from????????
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Posted: 18 years ago
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guli dear really great work, in first part only repto was killed, wow whenever repto dies in any ff also that is time for me to party 👏 continue soon, hope murderor is none other than bhoots of JB 😉

continue soon

swati
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow a suspense ff...cool!! 👏 👏 Pia's place of residence...triple 6, park road hey? And Pia got killed in the first two updates!!! 👏 Woo Hoo!!! I'll dance to that. 🥳

So we have some suspects...🤔and no JB. That means Pia must have killed them off 😭 ... and was sleeping peacefully when she got murdered. 😃

Whoever the killer is...tera bahut bahut shukriya...duniya se bahut bada bauj utha gaya! 😆 😆 😆
Cont soon...this one is good!!!! 👍🏼 👍🏼

Tazoo 🤗
Edited by Taz234 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow like the ff so far awwwwwwwwww but no JB becuase they are no more how they die 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
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im going to kill you... 😡 ...i cant catch up with one and u got more on the way...chill...breath...uff...ill read from work later...
JAZ

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