TS: Rings (Pg. 1 and Pg. 10)

Originally posted by: poetic

Thanks Shikha for this OS. 😃

Though it reminded me of the horror movie THE Ring 😆, the OS here is dreamy and practical at the same times.

Elements of hope and despair woven together in one intricate thread of life. 👏

I feel for Ragini - that vermilion on her forehead, the mangalsutra round her neck and the ring on her finger - all bearing testimonies to the lies that they are leading. A lie which is going to bear down on her once it ends, with it's disastrous results.

Could there be a companion piece where Nachiket does realise a part of what she is feeling and dreaming, as she fiddles with the ring? Just thinking!

Originally posted by: neiralove

Thanks for reading Di! 😊

Horror movie?! Yikes! 😕 But I'm glad you liked it! 😳 Ragini is going to have a tough time letting him go in the end; I really hope they reconcile without that heartbreak!

I knew you would ask for a companion piece! 😆 Let's see, maybe at some point... 😳

Originally posted by: metoyou

God bless you my child!

This is a very unique piece; that ring is not just an ordinary ring but it is that piece of gold around her finger given by him. And how that one motion makes her go back in time.

but despite her efforts to keep the doors to her heart shut forever, she had ended up falling in love with him again. How could she not; he was the one who held the sole key to those doors, the one who could enter whenever he pleased and...

I love these lines...😳

Dhyaan rakha karo Ragini

This sounds familiar... 😉

It can't be. It isn't. It isn't real

Ouch...

I'm actually blown away by this. It looks very simple, but the way one ring reminded her of that night before her engagement really took my heart away. We have seen many FB with the two of them, but this FB was only about Ragini and what she feels for him. And how his thoughts can create that havoc inside her despite not being together, yet.

Even I have the same habit of doing that with my ring, but trust me, I don't get those romantic flashbacks 😆

Shikha dear, you nailed it again and how! You surprise me every single time and I just fail, every single time, to praise you because sometimes feelings can't be expressed in words...

🤗 You are amazing... ❤️

Originally posted by: poetic

LOL, the companion piece always helps in understanding the opposite perspective - hence the request. 😃 But I do understand it is not always easy to come up with a complete different aspect, always. Not because one cannot attempt to write, but because men and women fundamentally think differently.

Yes, the heartbreak is coming alright. And once they reconcile after that heartbreak, kicking the chhipkalis out of their lives, then only will we witness the beauty of their relationship.

And of course, the MC

Originally posted by: metoyou

It is funny how some of us find it easier to write from Ragini's POV than Nachiket's POV and vice versa...

I'm definitely more of a Nachiket's POV