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innocentflower

@innocentflower

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

hi 😊 i am newbie 😳 just read your story must say it is amazing completely new and different concept 😊 and i love it 😃 and about suggestion i think if you wrap it up in 2 to 3 parts it spoil the shape of your story
from slow pace to fastest one i think make it to 20 parts bcz i think everyone here want arnav to regret and repent and khushi be fit and fine
that is my suggestion otherwise you are free to do anything and i am sure we will love it 😉 bcz you are a quite great writer so anything you will write will be good one 😊
Sorryy if i hurt you 😕
and plz pm me for your next update an plz continue sooon eagerly waiting for next update 😉

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@Deluna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: innocentflower
hi 😊 i am newbie 😳 just read your story must say it is amazing completely new and different concept 😊 and i love it 😃 and about suggestion i think if you wrap it up in 2 to 3 parts it spoil the shape of your story
from slow pace to fastest one i think make it to 20 parts bcz i think everyone here want arnav to regret and repent and khushi be fit and fine
that is my suggestion otherwise you are free to do anything and i am sure we will love it 😉 bcz you are a quite great writer so anything you will write will be good one 😊
Sorryy if i hurt you 😕
and plz pm me for your next update an plz continue sooon eagerly waiting for next update 😉

Thanks for liking it dear... Arnav's redemption will be shown surely😊.. Thanks for the suggestion..

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@Deluna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

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Ashu

@Avalanche.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Res/UnRes

Yes I am first 🥳

Loved the update <3

Ooh Khushi as the model!!! Arnav will be burning in jealousy I believe 😉

Edited by Avalanche. - 10 years ago

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Zeehana

@Zeehana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Amazing update !!

Hope to read next part soon

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Superb update
Lover it

Khushi us alright now
Arnaav guilty
He's now able to see lav true colours

Khushi creating problems

Excited for next
Update soon

Keep smiling

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Hmm so La is in negataive shade here!... Now she is turning frm grey to black😆
Khushi seems to be quite dominant over Arnav too😆
does Aman have something for Khushi??😳 god knows why I m feeling so!