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Posted: 18 years ago
awessssoooooommmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeee when u will cont next plzzzzzzz tell........... m waiting....... & yes u give very smalll update yaar plzzzzzzzzzz always give a long one
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Posted: 18 years ago

Thanx! 😊 😊

😊 😊 Zyaada intezaar nahin karaongi! 😉 😉

Here's the next update. 😊

Nandini goes and gets guns for all of them, while the Major takes out his own. 😕

He then puts out his hand. 👏
They all put their hand one by one on his and Raj does it in the end after some thought.

They all spread out. There r bullets firing everywhere.
Raj and Abhi look at each other, nod and then move out in one fluid motion and shoot down several of their attackers. 👏

The Major, Naina and Nandini follow up.

The tussel goes on with firing from either side. 😕

Abhi and Raj have a hand to hand fight too (Just like trained action heroes). 😳

There Nandini and Naina also lend a hand.

The man fighting with Naina pushes her hard and she falls down, hitting a stone she becomes unconscious.

Raj looks concerned and calls out--------NAINA!
😕
He rushes to her side and beats the life out of that man.

Raj bends over to see Naina. 😕

Someone takes a shot at him. 😕

Nandini sees the man and fights with him but he instead hits her on the head with his gun and she too drops unconscious. 😕
Abhi comes to rescue finishing that man. 👏

Abhi carries on fighting as Raj makes sure that Naina and Nandini r fine.

There at a short distance a car stops and Lala Saab gets down. 😕
He looks around to see his dead men and sighs--------------Raj u r making this really so tough for me.
I really donot want to ……………but I guess only I have to finish u all.

And he takes out his pisto; and walks to the place where Abhi and Raj r fighting. 😡

"Rajveer!" he calls out. Raj looks back and is surprised as well as stunned. And he looks at Lala Saab glary eyed.
😡
His eyes show the fire……………..the fire of anger…………..the fire of betrayl…………..the fire of disgust…………….and the fire of revenge. 😡


He spats back instantly------------ 😡 😡 😡 Aap!,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,abb kya dekhnen aayen hain? Oh! Main toh bhool hi gaya (Raj says angrily)Dekhnen aayen hain ki aapke kaam ko anjaam mila ya nahin.
Kyun? Kyun aapne aisa kiya Lala Saab? 😭 😭


Raj hum majboor the. Naveen ko rokna humari majboori thi………….usse raaste se hatana humari majboori thi (he says with ease as Raj listens angrily). 😡

Lekin tumhe uss galti ke liye sazaa dulana jo yumne ki hi nahin thi humare liye sabse mushkil tha Beta. 😕

Mat kahiye mujhe beta……….Mat lijiye apni gandi zubaan se iss pavitr rishtey ka naam. 😭
Aur mat dijiye apni POWER ki bhook ko majboori ka naam. (Raj is very angry). 😡 😡

Aaj mujhe aapse nahin…………apne aap se nafrat ho rahi hai…………aur aaj mujhe apne aap par ghinnn aa rahi hai ki maqin aapki chaya mein pala bada hua hoon. 😭 😭

Lekin abb mere paas aapke khilaaf sabot hain. And I'll make sure that u pay for every wrong deed of urs. 👏

Aapka waqt khatm ho gaya Lala Saab. U r finished! 👏

Raj…………..aisa toh tab hoga naa jab tum sab yahan se bach ke nikl jaooge. ( and he takes out his gun and points it at Naina) 😡

Raj is shocked. He does not know what to do.As Lala Saab shoots Raj comes in between and gets himself shot twice.
😕

Abhi turns around and shouts--------Raaaaaaaaaaaaaaj! (When he sees him shot. And he continues to fight with the goons desperate to reach Raj. 😕

Raj falls to the ground near a dead goon. 😕

The whole world seemed to move in circles around him.
😕

Kaisa laga? 😊 😛
Jaldi batao! 😉 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: leothebest9

Arre Diya bekaar mein I was worrying ki no reply! 😆

Thanx! 😊

And here's the Next part already posted 😊

Thanx again! 😊 😃

Arrey I was just gonna say ki.."leo tumne mera rly dekha hi nehi"..n then I saw this post of urs😃😉...

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Posted: 18 years ago
last update achha nehi laga......... 😭 kyun tumne story ko aisa kar diya...Raj ko goli marna jaruri tha kya 😭 😕

Abhi ke abhi next part post karo
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Diya CHEER UP yaar 👏

Donot worry I know Raja ki jaan tote mein hain........oops sorry...........hum sab Rajeevians ki jaan Rajveer mein hai 😳

Kuch nahin hoga! 😊

OK? 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thik hai.. 😃 ...abhi thik hai... 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yr story is going too well
to meri shak sahi nikla wakei tumne ek bombblasting performance diya.
waiting 4 next..........
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Posted: 18 years ago
yeh kya tha

kya hua raj ko???????

update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
update fast yaar ur readers are waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanx! 😊

Here is the next part-------- 😊

Lala Saab says---hum yeh nahin karna chate the Raj. Kabhi nahin. 😡
Humne tumhe bete se bhi badh kar maana hai………lekin hum court ke chakkar nahin kaatna chahte……………..halaan ki hum jaante hain ki hum baizzat bari ho jaayenge but why take the discomfort. 😡

Raj feels the pain.

No the pain was not from his wound. 😕 😡

But it was the pain he felt immensely from what Lala Saab had just told him.

With the thought that Lala Saab would finish Naina, then Nandini, Abhimanyu and baba…………Raj's grip on the gun which he caught hold of as he fell tightened. 👏

He had no choice.

Once again life had left him with no choice but one…………………. 😕

He close his eyes---------he remembers when Naveen broke down in front of him, then when he shot Naveen.

Then he remembers how Naina cried whe she heard Naveen's voice on the Tape recorder. 😭

Then when she shot him. 😭

Then he recollects how Col. Chandra lost his life and how he had decided to end his own life (uss performance mein toh our Rajeev was really commendable 👏 ).

The trial days…………………the pain………….the agony…………..the tears………….the suffering……………..and today Lala Saab was once again at the brink of taking more innocent lives.

😭



No………….this wo't happen again Raj thought………………No more bloodshed………………he vowed. 😭

He turns around to find Lala Sasb take a shot at Abhimanyu and Raj pulls the trigger thrice and calls out--------Chauhaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!

Abhi moves out just in time. 😕

He looks shocked when he sees Lala Saab shot.

"Raj?" Lala Saab says------
Raj has tears in his eyes. 😭
He stands up in pain and walks upto where Lala Saab had fallen and bends down to hold his hand. 😕

"Lala Saab………….." he sobs. 😭

Nahin Raj………….mat ro…………humare gunahaon ki yehi sazaa hai. Ho sake toh hummein maaf kar dena beta. 😭

He looks at Raj lovingly and embraces him and continues……….Raj…….there r seven wonders in the world………..there r seven notes of music………….seven days in a week……………..and these seven letters formed an important part of my life…………..and these seven letters will take u to ur destination………..where the land meets the sky……………..(And he drops his hand). 😕

Raj too falls to the ground exhausted and un conscious.
😕 😕
Abhi comes running to him.

Kaisa laga? 😊




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