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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi I'm back with the fanfinction-Life after KMA!

I hope u like it!

But before starting I know it's really tough for all of us to bear this loss and I know writing a FF and ur reading it won't be as fun as Watching Raj in person!

But I will try my level best to make it as real as possible!

And yes Thanx DJ's for giving this kind of end so that I could start the way I wanted but no thanx for the same reason again!

We see the cadets have left with Captain Abhimanyu.

As the leave the place becomes silent as a grave.

We hear a car approaching ( A Black Sedan).It screeches to a halt.

Two men get down and they see Rajveer's burning jeep!

They look at each other shocked!

The then call up someone from there mobile and we see a woman standing in dark. The 2 men tell her that Captain's jeep's on fire. The woman says" WHAT? No its not possible! Go dammit, Go down and see everywhere Rajveer must be somewhere around find him and bring him here carefully! Go now!"

We see the woman's eyes she has tears in them and says "Raj tumhe kuch nahin ho sakta. U have to live for ur ownself. We did all this for u. U have to come out of this alive!"😭

The 2 men go and search everywhere but in vain.😕

As they r about to turn and go they see blood on the ground and follow the trail that leads them to a bush they remove the leaves and see RAJVEER lying unconscious his arm injured and his head bleeding!

We end here!😊

Tell me should I continue????????????😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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offcourse u should


nice idea

liked a lot

plzzz do update
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey first one to reply


too good

good idea atleast Tumhare FF me to rajveer ko dekhenge

jaldi update karo
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ya..terefic thinking..plz do continue..jaldi se second part post karo..can wait anymore...plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool idea........m gonna love to read more
so do continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanx!

Ok let's begin where we left. 😊

The two men bend down and try to wake up Raj when he doesn't stir they carry him to the car and drive away.

The car stops in front of a big house. The 2 carry Raj inside and there we see doctors take Raj and attend to him.

Meanwhile the we hear the same woman ask the 2 men to leave.

Then she calls someone and tells that the docs r attending Raj , he should be alright soon.U just make sure no one finds us out and let the everyone know that Raj's dead.

And she keeps the phone down. She says to herself- Raj bahut dukh phonchaya hai tumhe tumhare apnon ne lekin ab aur nahin. 😕

It's night now and we see Raj sleeping with his head tied in a bandage. ( Yes he looks as calm and serene as always-UMMMMMMMMMI miss him yaar ANYWAYS) 😳

Raj stirs we see him remembering how the cadets arrived to save him, then how he hugged Naina, how he got shot, then how he left in the jeep and jumped from it and later shot the tank with his gun setting it on fire( Tum log Raj ka nishana toh jaante hi ho) and then Raj wakes up sweating. 😭 😭

The woman asks r u ok Raj.
Raj looks at her.
He's shocked!
Nandini tum?

Nandini's part will be played by AAMNA SHARRIF in my FF
😳
Hope u liked it. 😛


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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey pl continue
soon

it is too good

excellent part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aap sab ka hukm sar aankhon par!!!!!!!!! 😊

Here am I to continue!

Raj is shocked to see Nandini.
Nandini tum?( Amna's in a light pink saree and is looking as beautiful as an angel)

"How did u find me? Where am I ? What do u want?'
Raj tries to sit up but lies back in pain"Ah"

Raj stop.U need rest.Sawaal poochne ki tumhari aadat abhi tak nahin gayi!
Well I found u near that burning jeep which U SET ON FIRE Raj.Aur is waqt tum mere garibkhane mein ho.

Raj asks " And my cadets r they all right?"

"Yes ofcourse raj they all r fine including CADET NAINA SINGH ALUWAHLIA.(Raj looks up at her). 😕 😕
Abhimanyu came to their rescue.
But unfortunately they all have been suspended with immediate effect.

"What?" Raj gets up but again falls back as the pain in his injured arm is immense.

Nandini shouts-Sto exerting urself.Will u?

They look at each other and then Raj closes his eyes and lays back.(Kya kare Nandini is such a distraction as he loves naina u know). 😳

Raj remembers Naveen and Abhi had gone with him to the market that day out of the academy where they were posted as Captain to buy a gift each for their commom Valentine Riya. The all r fighting over some gift.

Raj gives up and moves to the next shop. While Abhi and Naveen keep on fighting over a gift Raj calls out------Yun hi ladte raho tum dono lekin Riya ko toh mera Valentine gift hi pasand aayega and he moves back as he shows them a cute teddy holding a heart( Apne Raj ki choice toh tum log jaante hi ho uski tarah hi BEST hoti hai). 😉

Suddenlyhe collides with someone and turns around just in time to catch hold of the girl he had sett off balance( U know yaar raj ko dekhke toh koi bhi OFFBALANCE ho jayega). 😛

Its nandini( She's wearing a beautiful white colored Chudidar) and Raj keeps on looking at her while she stares back at him And Abhi and Naveen smile at each other while Abhi says-Chalo Riya ke teen deewanon mein se ek naam toh gaya! 😆

Raj stammers( As usual u see--------Yaar I MISS HIM 😭 ) I'm 'I'm really sorry.
I, I did not see u coming. 😳

Its ok! I'm fine. And now if u'll leave me please.Raj realizes he's caught her and he says Oh yeah! 😃

And then Raj sees her leave.As he smiles to himself (Ohhhhh That sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet smile of his) naveen and Abhi comes to him and Chauhaan saab begins to sing in his usual baritone------------------Na bole tum, Na meine kuch kaha Naveen continues-----------Magar na jaane aisa kyun laga………………( SORRY aage mujhe yeh gana nahin aata tum log khud gaa lena Ok!) 😊

Ans Raj blushes(awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I write this FF with such a heavy heart everydayki bas tum samajh nahin sakte)
😳

Then he remembers the first time he had met Naina with the broken frame of navin And when he had asked her name and she replied --------CADET NAINA ah SINGH 😭

Suddenly he opens his eyes and shouts " NAINA" 😕


How did u like it? 😛

Please reply. 😊
And yes if any suggestions u all r welcome! 😛 😉



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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey too good

par ammna ko lana jarori tha kya RN ke bheech

waise good story

pl jaldim update karo that to with long updated

we are used to Long updated

pl continue soon

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yaar don't worry! i won't let her come in between RN!
Fine ! she is here to help Raj realise how much he loves Naina ! So u see now!!!!!!!!!??????????????? 😳

Sabr karo yaar! 😊

And please all of u have to bear with me on one point ----------I can't post more than 2 posts!

Please try to understand it takes time for me to think then arrenge my thoughts aur phir unhe pen down karna aur phir type karna!!!!! U see it takes a lot of time !

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