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jyotiagarwal

@jyotiagarwal

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Reunion an happy ending plzzz...new villain sounds fun...make geet do the action this time...the slap and punches part!!

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

please end with a happy ending

all the best for ur exams

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nidhirastogi000

@nidhirastogi000

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Awesome dear 👏 Very nice story... .Maaneet moments is beautiful 😳 But end is 😭 Waiting for more 😳 plzzz add me...

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patikaddi1976

@patikaddi1976

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

great story, tq for writing, loved this. please contine with sequel maan makes geet fall in love with him and a happy ending.

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Yes I want happy ending with reunion
you can give leap hereplz plx

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: sobia4maaneet



NOTE



hello everyone,

thanks for ur overwhelming response to this story ..

well i realized i should have informed u all its gonna end
up on a sad note ...

but since i had already planned the reunion i never thought
to ..

anyways this note is to thank u all for ur lovely comments 🤗n


to let u know that i have rejoined my job n in the next week
would be joining my university as well so its gonna be impossible for me to
start typing the Sequel be4 next june 🤢(when i will get a break after finishing
the exams for my 3rd year of uni life)given my 12 hours schedule every day🤢🤢🤢

so here is my bargain ...😳



i can end this story with a happy ..reunion ..though solid
action in it involved ..😛

after all Nihil's father is ought to be the bigger villian
...out to avenge his son😉



will be waiting for ur response ..😳



luv ya

sobia

sequel latr plz. 1st give this a happy ending. Plzzz.

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

congratulations on your job.. i understand will be tough for you.. wishing you all the best..
I am in for the action dhamaka and get maan and geet together 😊

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

just read this story..loved the concept..

the opening lines are awesome..specially the last one..breaking free to live my life..finally she got herself break free from the ties where she had lost her own self...and moved ahead towards the re-build from her broken form..

Her husband represents the horrible, selfish and hypocrite mentality..not worth a guy, neither for PM position nor as a husband to any girl..
even Maan also did the mistake of judging her from her outer image, and tried to play emotionally and had plans to use her for the mission..but at least some conscience was awake in him to feel guilty about it after realizing his mistake..

but then Maaneet met..initially Maan tried to flirt with her and Geet tried to maintain the distance..Geet struggling with her emotions..but when Geet came with a loud makeup, extra smile on her face, trying to hide her pain, they both could understand the tinge of sadness in each other's eyes...there was a smooth flow in Maaneet feelings like the poems that were used to depict it..and eventually they were falling for each other..followed by the feel of betrayal and guilt..

and I loved their perspectives in the last part...Geet knows he loves her, but is not in a state to forgive him..He knew she needs time to regain herself..he will wait for the right time and is hopeful for a future together for they are meant to be..

beautifully written, me too will wait for the meant to be..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago