ARSHi SS: DEAL?#2|| **COMPLETED** - Page 24

First of ol sorry for late... Bht late hogaya itni achi SS padhne mai..
This is best SS i have evr read in my lyf n i m nt joking dear..

This SS is reality chk for ol.. Only love is not important Honesty is what a girl olways want..

Love can seen in the eyes of animal but honesty with love is something which i too required in my lyf for evry single damn relation from my parents to siblings to cousins to friends.. And hope in future in husband too.. Insha Allah..

I love ur concept of making it simple and down to earth.. This story is appealing and at the ame tym vry energetic..

I love evry part of it.. Evry up and down of it..

My fav moments in this SS.. Anjali n Arnav's talk on heart... Arnav's confession to Khushi at Gupta house.. Kamlesh khabri hillarious one.. And garden one was js pure scene... Payal and Arnav's conversation which i lack in serial u showed it brilliantly..

Payal's fav Malpoha.. What the.. And Mami Ji's aap humse pyaar nahi krtey to gift her makeup kit.. Laxmi ji in office.. It will b fun if u post that part as OS.. Coz i want to read it..

Hope i am not irritating u.. Bs aaj humko bolne dou..lol

tk cr n hugs..
Sair

Wow u just left me speechless. this story had everything
The tongue in cheek humour, the comedy, the drama , the tragedy,the love, the passion... Everything!
I especially loved Arnav's emotional scene. We could really see Asr in this story. He proposes his marriage like a deal with all the profit and loses! He makes a presentation endorsing himself! Lol!
Loved the final scene when both the bros cook to impress their wives. One pondering over geometry n the other over Maida.
N ofcrz trust. Kkg to turn scenes into smthing else. The khabri scene. Rofl!!!
Arnav's epic proposal! N shyam! I will probably stun everyone by saying this but I really loved his character here. N buaji stopped asr from seeing his wife for 8 freaking days??!!! Ofcrz our arnav found his way to his lady love.
I have read this in one go. It was sheer perfection! Hats off. Keep on writing. 👏

hey
just read all part in one go
its amazing
funniest story...
loved it

Such a cute story. Thoroughly enjoyed it :)

Simply super story and loved it...