Manveer Os:-The Rain Princess..Part II Pg 6 - Page 8

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Awesome part Payel di.

The witch showed her true colors🤬..how could she hurt Manyata!!

Beautifully written and yeah you handelled teh witch well. SHe deserved it.

Superb ending to a superb OS.😊

Thanks for the pm.🤗

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

This part had unexpected twists.Wth manyata's entry their place had rain.I thot with that d story wud end.but d story had just started.loved it.but poor manyata was tortured by that witch.likd how uday came in btw 2 save manyata.luckily d curse went 2 d witch.she deserved it.happy that manveer started a new life in d perfect place-the land of spring.nice ending

Originally posted by: sukklover

...dear😃

...4 pming me...😃

ur update sweety..😃

u done a dear...👏

keep the job up dear..👏..

keep ing dear...😃

dear...😳

lov,❤️

Tama

NOTE: SORRY FOR SHORT COMMENT AS U ALL KNEW ABOUT MY EXAM THAT'S WHY.

P.S.: plz don't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡

P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕

Note:

guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18...😕

i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...

but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i know just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭

N.B.: Me not making any of this graphics this r from glitter-graphics

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Reopened

Originally posted by: ekra101

very nice os,paanchali di. something dreamy.sweet .awsum ff. uday and manyata's chemistry was awsum👏

Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha

HEYYY ... 😊 VERY NYCCC OS.. 😊 AND THANKS FOR THE INDEX... 😊

Originally posted by: panchaali

Thanks for the compliment 😃

and welcome dear, I kept the index for all my readers 😃