NiBir OS || Its Always Been You ||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pooja.. finally I wrote the OS 😆
I don't now if its upto your expectations or no but it s definitely not upto my expectations 😆
Still I am posting it as you were impatiently waiting for it 😆
I will be waiting for your comments and likes 😊

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NiBir OS || Its Always Been You ||

Nisha and Kabir.. and here is their small love story... Both were in the same school... At first Nisha used to hate Kabir... she never liked people who were a spoiled brat and Kabir was exactly the same "A complete spoiled brat" ... and Kabir's feelings for her were no different... But as time passed their equation changed... they became each other's best friend...

Kabir didn't realise when he started falling for Nisha... He changed for her from a complete spoiled brat to a decent guy ... By the time they were in college he was a complete changed guy... He would never flirt with any girl except Nisha... But he always joked that he was just teasing her .. He had no feelings for her... This confused Nisha..

She was already confused about her feelings for Kabir and his this behaviour confused her more... The entire college would address Nisha and Kabir as a couple and none of them bothered to correct them because somewhere even they liked to be called a couple...

It was the last Valentine's day party of their college and Kabir finally convinced Nisha to attend it... Both entered the party making every one turn and look at them.. some were jealous and some were in awe looking at them ...

Nisha wore a beautiful red dress and Kabir wore a black three piece suit.. they were the best couple in the entire party...

Everyone was on the dance floor but Kabir took Nisha outside in the garden area... Nisha kept asking him the reason behind this but he kept mum and kept walking holding her hand... He finally stopped once they reached near their favourite bench he made Nisha sit there and himself knelt infront of her...

"Nisha .. pura college hume a couple samajhta hai... and humne kabhi unhe correct nahi kiya.. but hum dono jante hai ki aisa kuch nahi hai..." he paused " par Nisha.. kya hum isse sach nahi kar sakte ??"

Nisha looked at him trying to understand his words...

" Kabir .. tu yeh kya keh raha hai ..?"

Nisha asked making Kabir loose his confidence a bit but he took a deep breath and continued...

" Nisha.. main nahi jant kab aur kaise par tujh se pyaar ho gaya... and tere pyaar ne hi mujhe badal diya .. Maine hamesha se sirf tujh se hi pyaar kiya hai Nisha.. Its always been you.. par kabhi himmat nahi kar paya yeh soch ke ki isska asar humari friendship pe kya hoga.. par aaj aisa laga ki agar tujhe aaj nahi bola toh shayaad phir kabhi na bol paunga.. Isske baad chahe jo ho mujhe koi daar nahi.. but I want to say you that I love you..."

He closed his eyes and waited for her to slap him because he knew that she would slap him after his confession but nothing like this happened... He opened his one eye and saw that Nisha was trying to control her tears .. he quickly got up and hugged her..

Nisha finally broke down in his arms... Kabir felt terrible for making her cry and started cursing himself... but was stopped in half way as Nisha placed her lips on his and kissed him passionately shocking him...

Kabir was in shock but later even he kissed her back with the same passion once he recovered for the shock..

They broke the kiss when they both were in need of oxygen and Nisha rested her head on his shoulder trying to catch hold of her breath... she blushed at her action she didn't know how she gathered the courage to act so boldly but she knew that she couldn't see Kabir curse himself ...

Kabir kept smiling like a fool after the kiss... after a few minutes Kabir spoke ...

"Nisha.. Isska matlab haan tha kya ?"

This question made Nisha shocked... she started hitting his chest with her soft hands and Kabir kept laughing...

" Idiot ... tujhe kya lagta hai ?"

She asked him angrily ..

" Mujhe toh haan lagta hai.. but confirm kar lena chahiye na "

Kabir replied in a mischievous tone making her more angry...

"Kabir..." Nisha warned him

"Theek hai.. but Nisha ek baar toh bol na ..."

He asked cutely..

"Kya bolu ?"

Nisha asked him making him frown...he looked so cute that Nisha just couldn't control herself and pulled his cheeks...

"Nisha ... kya kar rahi hai .."

Kabir cribbed and started rubbing his cheeks...

"Kabir tu kitna cute lagta hai aise..."

Nisha replied and giggled making him frown more ... she muttered a sorry and went closer to him and whispered those three magical words in his ear making him smile widely...

*After a few years *

Nisha was standing there in her balcony sipping her evening coffee... A small smile playing on her lips...

"I miss you Kabir..."

She whispered looking at Kabir's picture in her phone...

"I missed you too..."

Nisha's eyes grew wide in shock when she heard Kabir's voice... First she thought that she was dreaming as she was missing Kabir a lot ...

" Nisha... itna miss kar rahi hai ki tujhe usski awaaz tak sunai de rahi hai ...? Tu pagal ho gai hai..."

Nisha thought and shook her head thinking about how love changed her... she kept admiring Kabir's picture in her phone...

"Kidhar hai tu Kabir..?" Nisha asked his picture...

"Idhar hun ..."

She heard his voice again.. She narrowed her eyes in confusion...

"Abey idhar dekhna... "

She turned and looked in the direction from where the voice came... she went towards the railing and got surprised ...

Kabir was climbing the pipe of her balcony and was trying hard to keep his grip tight on the pipe...

"Kabir tu pagal ho gaya hai kya ? Pipe se chad ke aa raha hai ?"

She asked him ... she was really happy to see him but at the same time she was concerned for him...

"Haan.. pagal hun issliye tujh se milne pipe se chad ke aa raha hun "

Kabir managed to climb the pipe and reach the balcony... Nisha gave him a hand and helped him...

Kabir caught her hand and pulled her in a bone crushing hug...

"Nisha.. I missed you so much..."

He said and kissed her forehead...

"I missed you too Kabir...Par tu apne hi ghar main pipe se chad ke kyun aaya ?"

Nisha asked as she was him making her frown...

"Kya hai na Nisha... Mujhe pipe se aana bohut pasand hai ... Issliye main pipe se aata hun "

Kabir replied in a sarcastic tone...

"Kabir... Kabhi toh serious hoja... Agar tujhe lag jata toh ?"

Nisha said in a concerned voice and hugged him again...

" Awww... Meri wifey mere liye kitna sochti hai..." Kabir replied while soothing her head...

Nisha broke the hug and looked at him ...She gave him a typical wifey look ...

"Ok Baba.. sorry abh no more mazak..."

Kabir caught both his ears and said sorry... making her smile at his innocence ...

"Waise Kabir.. tu toh 3 din baad aane wala tha na London se ? Phir aaj kaise ?"

"Tujhe bohut miss kar raha tha.. issliye aaj hi aagaya.. waise bhi aaj ka din mere liye bohut important hai..."

Kabir caught her hand and rubbed the back of her hand with his thumb...

" Acha .. aisa kya special hai aaj ?"

Nisha pulled her hand and crossed them across her chest...

" Aaj ka din issliye special hai kyunki aaj ke din main ek pagal aur jhalli ladki ko propose kiya tha.. aur usske theek ek saal baad uss se shaadi bhi kar li thi..."

He took a small box out of his pocket and gave it to Nisha.. she blushed and opened the box .. It was a pair of beautiful anklets...

Kabir smiled and took one of them in his hand and bent to make her wear them making her blush...

He got up and kissed her forehead and whispered in her ear..

" Happy Anniversary Jaan..."

Nisha blushed and hid her face in his chest... They stood in each others embrace for a long time...

Kuch rishte anjaane main jud jate hai..

Vo rishte humare liye sab se khas baan jate hai..

Jis rishte ko hum chaha kar bhi inkaar na kar sake..

Vo pyaar ke rishte kehlate hai..

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As usual not proof read it so please ignore the errors 😆

Abh jise jo marna hai maaro 😆

But like marna mat bhulna 😳

Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Saru Baccha this res if for you.. Sorry Mamma appko pehle PM nahi send kar pai iss baar 😛
Edited by Niya_789 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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unres..!!
loved the os niyu...!!😆

abhi keliye itne se chalalo...baaki keliye res...!!🤣


Edited by sam_premc - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os yaar...

& mai aapki shayri ki bahut badi fan hu sach mai...

thnks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res

unres

superb OS mumma😊

nibir pehle ek dusre se hate krte the😔

den kabir started liking her❤️ usne nishu k liye khud ko badal dia awwee

dey became bst frnds...nishu was confused abt kabir's feelings😊

sara college unhe couple bulata tha n dey didnt deny it😊

kabira ne valentines me finally nishu ko propose kr dia n nushu ne use kiss kia❤️ 😊😳

kabira apni wifey ko surprise krne apne hi ghar me pipe se chadh k aaya🤣 ❤️

do write more😊
Edited by itznimi003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing niya nibir scenes toh u always write best 1...best nibir writer u r...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one and also a cute os...
Loved the shayari nd the nibir scnenes nd ya srry I was nt able to comment on ur previous works but that were really awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Niyu beta
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS niyu di
Loved the shayari ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg omg omg...niyati it can not be better than this Big hug for u...tysvm u fulfilled my wish I knw meine bahot irritate kiya hoga but mujhe ye story chahiye thi nd trust me u wrote better than my version Love u lots... Nd i loved it The way kabir proposed nisha hayeee...kash uski jagah me hoti *blush* Nd kabir abhi bhi k hai, apne ghar me pipe se chadh ke aata hai...and its their anniversary...awww so cute Aur ek baat thnx for writing this os before 15th oct...seriously mujhse wait nahi ho raha tha..hehehehe

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