Arshi Comedy SS - Love & Other Disasters/Chapter 2/UPDATED/(Pg-36)

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

Arshi Comedy SS

Love & Other Disasters

Hi,

Dear Friends i thought i should first introduce myself as a new writer in Fan Fiction Forum. My name is Tooba Mahir Mukhtar, i know i know 😆 don't worry you won't have to call me from my full name. 😆😉 You can simply call me "Mahi". 😳

I am feeling so jittery and on edge even to introduce myself because I know I am just a gauche writer trying to find some space among hundreds of prestigious writers here in Fan Fiction Forum who have already established themselves, even before I started writing.

I have only one FF in my pocket, and that too a dark fiction which is ongoing. 😉 (*sigh* i know not everyone's cup of coffee 😆😉) Otherwise this SS "Love & Other Disasters" will be my second story.

I love to try my hand on writing various concepts from dark fiction to romantic comedy. I am a versatile reader as well as i would love to be a versatile writer and in addition I love the challenge of writing something out of my comfort zone too. 😳

So after writing the dark fiction I have accepted the challenge of this SS "Love & Other Disasters which would be a crazily funny romantic comedy. 😳

It will be very light-hearted, full of humour and tom & jerry fights between the leads, meaning full paisa vasool entertainment. 😆😉 No heavy emotional stuff will be included even the crying and fighting will be funny. 😛😉

I have written the prologue first, so if you wish to give this romantic comedy meaning romedy SS a chance please do so. I promise I won't disappoint you and if you feel that it is a real disaster like it's name 😆😉 then you have the full permission to throw tomatoes and eggs on me, even potatoes because they hurt harder! 😆

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Prologue: (Below)

Chapter 1: Mud Struck

Chapter 2: Bull Struck

P.S: Buddy Me For PM! 😳

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Arshi Comedy SS

Love & Other Disasters

...Prologue...

Two disasters happened in a whole of five minutes of my life that day...

"Hi, tomato lips", an infuriating voice collided with my ear drums and I winced. "What the heck he was doing here?", I thought then turned on my heels to face the owner of that voice who was making a beeline towards me, a huge idiotic grin splitting his face in half.

Without giving me a chance to pour my rage over his head that was stirring up inside me from the time I had heard his voice, he sauntered towards me and mashed his mouth over my red and swollen lips.

"What?", I whispered as he lifted his mouth to let me breathe between the break. "How could you have left me like this babe", he pouted in annoyance letting his eyes fill with the pain of the world. "What the heck are you talking about and how dare you call me babe?", I spurted, totally outraged at the gal of the man.

"I am crushed babe", he widened his eyes innocently then leaned in to bestow a kiss over my swollen lips and that was his worst mistake of the life because in the next moment I had his right arm in a tight grip, lifting him right over my shoulder. With a bellow like a torn drum he soared right above my head, waving his arms in air like windmills before hitting the ground with a final thud.

"Now you are crushed babe", I whispered victoriously, as he threw a fulminating glare at me, while rubbing a hand over his abused posterior.

"Hope your girlfriend is a vegetarian, because she now has to tend to the sweet potato on your head and a red tomato over your bum", I batted my eyelashes with mock innocence in return to his filthy glance...

That was the second disaster in the total of five minutes whose consequences I never knew that I had to pay later with a comic price...

P.S: Please Buddy me those who wants to receive the PM. And Those Who Wish To Like And Comment Or Share Views About The Prologue, Please Do So! 😳

Thanks! 😳

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 10 years ago

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kshubhangi
Where is the prologue????

Updated! 😳 Sorry yaar internet problem, it disappeared suddenly!

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0913155

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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome😛😉 tomato lips😃 ha ha ha😃 super plz continue soon thanx for pm

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Skylights

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Posted: 10 years ago

AWESOME ! 👏

PLEASE UPDATE SOON ! 😳

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Sadh123

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hehe meanie..special dedication..mere liye?! I won I won I w!! now I am doing a crazy tango mixed with joyful happiness.. *I am reserving my evil tango for Ransacked last installment* I am so damn happy that you have finally started this and yet again, I get to bug you.. this looks too promising and funny!!!! I am waiting for more.. don't keep you evil buddy waiting! Muahs my love!

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sadh123
Hehe meanie..special dedication..mere liye?! I won I won I w!! now I am doing a crazy tango mixed with joyful happiness.. *I am reserving my evil tango for Ransacked last installment* I am so damn happy that you have finally started this and yet again, I get to bug you.. this looks too promising and funny!!!! I am waiting for more.. don't keep you evil buddy waiting! Muahs my love!

Oh yaar come here my crazy sis let me give you a tight hug, you've made me emotional all of a sudden. Shame on you for making your poor devil cry! *sniff* *sniff*! 😭😆

Sting dance babe, us two in the introductory party of this crazy SS! 😈No babe you didn't bug me at all, don't ever say that otherwise as your punishment I'll definitely spam your thread so much that you'll go crazy! 😈😆

Hugs and kisses to you babe, have already started writing the first chappy! 😈😛 Soon will be it's unveiling ceremony! 😉