Ashlok SS - Love & Other Disasters/ Chapter 2/ UPDATED/ (Pg-9)

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Ashlok SS
Love & Other Disasters



Hi,

My devilish family and buddies how are you doing ? 😈😉 Well your devils is back with a new concept this time. And as i promised i am presenting you a glimpse of my story in the prologue! Hope you'll like it too like ransacked heart!

I am truly nervous this time because i know your expectations will be very high and i don't want this SS to be a disaster like it's name! 😆😉

Buddies i should tell you this time that this SS would not be a dark story but it will be a totally different concept. Yes emotional rain will be there but a little actually it will be more of a crazily funny and comically romantic type story! 😆😉

From the time when EBP was going on the television many of my evil and mean buddies were pushing me to write a comic story. At that time i could handle only one story "Ransacked", and that's because once i start writing i like to write with total intensity and give hundred percent of devotion to it! 😳

I can't even share my evil love of writing between two stories! 😈😆 Really possessive of me na right! 😈😆

Okay so here is the prologue of the story. I am hoping to God that i won't be a failure in your eyes my children and my buddies so if i'll get a good response I will certainly write the first chapter in this week! 😉

P.S: New Readers Please PM me for Buddy! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ashlok SS

Love & Other Disasters



...Prologue...

Two disasters happened in a whole of five minutes of my life that day...

"Hi, tomato lips", an infuriating voice collided with my ear drums and I winced. "What the heck he was doing here?", I thought then turned on my heels to face the owner of that voice who was making a beeline towards me, a huge idiotic grin splitting his face in half.

Without giving me a chance to pour my rage over his head that was stirring up inside me from the time I had heard his voice, he sauntered towards me and mashed his mouth over my red and swollen lips.

"What?", I whispered as he lifted his mouth to let me breathe between the break. "How could you have left me like this babe", he pouted in annoyance letting his eyes fill with the pain of the world. "What the heck are you talking about and how dare you call me babe?", I spurted, totally outraged at the gal of the man.

"I am crushed babe", he widened his eyes innocently then leaned in to bestow a kiss over my swollen lips and that was his mistake because in the next moment I had his right arm in a tight grip and he was lifted right over my shoulder to soar above my head, finally hitting the ground with a thud and a bellow.

"Now you are crushed babe", I whispered victoriously, as he threw a fulminating glare at me, while rubbing a hand over his abused posterior.

"Hope your girlfriend is a vegetarian, because she now has to tend to the sweet potato on your head and a red tomato over your bum", I batted my eyelashes with mock innocence in return to his filthy glance...

That was the second disaster in the total five minutes whose consequences I never knew that I had to pay later...

P.S: Please Do Like And Comment Or Share Your Views About The Prologue! Thanks! 😳

Edited by mahirmukhtar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tomatoes and potatoes .. I luv this theme..

romedy .. I'm all in for it..

I know u will rock in this too.

Loved prologue mahi... the banner is superb..


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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVED... THE.. PROLOGUE...VERY MUCH DEAR...
N WANTED TO READ MORE...
THANK U SO...MUCH FOR COMING BACK WITH ANOTHER LOVELY..STORY..
KEEP UPDATING...CAN'T WAIT FOR THE 1ST CHAPTER 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PLs update dear... I like your story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mahi thats simply awesome ..Crazy and headstong Astha 😈
Love the theme ...tomato lips😆 and Potato 😳
U are a star⭐️ U can write anything and whatever U present that fully perception and perfection ❤️
By the by who is that boy grounded is it Shlok 😲..she bullied him so easily😲
Love to read about Bindaas and badass Astha 😃
Edited by Subhashiniiiii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new story dear
Loved the prologue
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb. Please update soon
ransacked was very nice story.
keep posting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I haven't unresd in Ransacked..yet I am shamelessly sauntering here.. lol :D this looks really funny.. continue soon evil ..romedy.. I am so happy you decided to Write this :D muahs to you!!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😆 too good mahi .. Please do continue .. Waiting

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