Ishra ss-rabba yaar se mila de part 10 on pg 131 added on Nov 15

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OK guys me Raksha I am back with a new story.
Sorry what the question of coming back when I haven't gone anywhere.
Enough of my banter.updating a new prologue.please read and reply whether I should continue or not.


PROLOGUE

Akash ganga society

Heavy loud speakers were singing bhakti songs in loud voice breaking  the silence.Mata ki chowki was arranged by Mr and Mrs bhalla thinking all the problems of their life will be sorted.

Mrs bhalla call someone.he pick up the phone.

Mrs bhalla-puttar chetti aa jaan.mata ki chowki chal rahi hai.tu bhi aashirwaad le lein(son come soon and take blessings.

Man on the other side-u know naa maa I don't believe in all these superstitious. That matarani will bless me.

Mrs bhalla-but beta ruhi is waiting for u.

The man on the other side Raman, can do anything but to make his princess sad.he said OK maa I am coming.

After good 45 minutes a black merc came and stopped in front of akash gangs society.Raman came out wearing a biz suit of armani with rado watch in his wrist.a man who is every girls dream.a handsome with charming looks to die for.he is an enigma.but a ruthless and insensitive man.his world revolves around his three years old daughter ruhi.
When ruhi saw him and comes to him running and pecked him on his cheeks-miss u dadda

Raman kissed her too-missed u too my little princess.

Mrs bhalla-good that u come.now go and take the blessings.

Raman-i told u naa I don't believe in her (matarani).I came here just for ruhi.

Mrs bhalla-but puttar

Raman-please maa the god who snatched my love from me and ruhi's mother from ruhi,I will not bow my head infront of her.

Saying so he started walking and saw his ex wife shagun is standing in the corner and smirking.ignoring her he started walking towards the house.when he reached to the stairs shagun came and said-my god Raman u still love me so much.

Raman put ruhi on the ground and asked her to go and play.ruhi was gone.shagun was smirking.

Shagun-i know u will not accept it but I can see how much u still love me.

Raman clutched her neck and said-dont u dare to say so.one more time u say this I swear on god that to prove that I don't love u .I will kill u.

Saying so he started walking.

Shagun shouted -if I am not then who is ur love and ruhi's mom.

An image flashed infront of his eyes and a lone tear escape his eyes remembering his love.he turned and said u r not my love.u got that now just get lost.

That's all for now.will wait for ur response.
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INDEX
PART 1 PAGE 9

PART 2 PAGE 18


PART 3 PAGE 29

PART 4 PAGE 40

PART 5 PAGE 52

PART 6 PAGE 63 

PART 7 PAGE 73

PART 8 PAGE 92

PART 9 PAGE 113

PART 10 PAGE 131



Edited by cutieruhi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yayy me first hey raksha plx update meera si deewani story is good du continue fr surw
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Intresting prologue who is dat lady??? Is dat ishita?? Continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue 
is that lady ishita?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That lady is ishita.. But where is she.
Looking forward to know 
Cntinue soon and Update Ur other stories too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue ðŸ˜Š
And that lady must be ishitha😊
Then what happened to her?????????
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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agar woh ishu ho toh uske sath kya hua jyada bura mat hua ho pls rakhsa di cont soon waiting for the next update
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nyc prologue
thanks for pm
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Ishita is his love right? Cont soon...